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Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
#2581 - 2013-10-22 21:35:31 UTC  |  Edited by: Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
*Ishtanchuk Fazmarai hits "send" and her work is submitted to the contest, at the main cathegory: 8,000 suns of New Eden*

At last! I wish I had had 1,000 words more, but as currently I am more prone to set it ablaze than to keep editing it, there it goes as is now, 4 structures, 3 drafts, 3 partial rewritings and ohmyfuckingodhowmany editions later...

Starring someone you may be familiar with if you've been following this thread and including a guest appearence from a friend, it's a story about a boy soldier, his army, and Zoe.

"And Zoe"

*Ishtanchuk Fazmarai locks her computer and starts juggling concepts, ideas and plots for a new story...*

Roses are red / Violets are blue / I am an Alpha / And so it's you
Zoe Kaltana
Kaltana Industries
#2582 - 2013-10-24 13:21:18 UTC
I liiike! Big smile

Pinups | Bloodhorses
Commissar Kate
Kesukka
#2583 - 2013-10-25 14:14:18 UTC
So I finally got my doctor at my cloning facility to 'enhance' me a little bit. I was having a bit of trouble filling out this new white tee-shirt. But now I think the shirt looks fantastic on me.

Oh how about new pics to see how he did. Blink

http://imgur.com/a/RwJsh

-k8

My Fanclub
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
#2584 - 2013-10-25 14:17:38 UTC
Easy goes what easy comes!

Yet another story submission, this time quite easy as the plot is simple and I've had plenty of room to develop it (2,790 words). Two drafts, revision and done. As it deals with a real player's fake biography, I've submitted it as a "A Day in the Life" story.

Walking a thin line

Won't give any detail... just will tease you saying that you're up to a shocker about Yiole. Cool

Roses are red / Violets are blue / I am an Alpha / And so it's you
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
#2585 - 2013-10-25 14:20:27 UTC  |  Edited by: Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
Commissar Kate wrote:
So I finally got my doctor at my cloning facility to 'enhance' me a little bit. I was having a bit of trouble filling out this new white tee-shirt. But now I think the shirt looks fantastic on me.

Oh how about new pics to see how he did. Blink

http://imgur.com/a/RwJsh


Nice work, Kate. Quite beautiful and well done. Smile

(Just missing a before/after composite)

Roses are red / Violets are blue / I am an Alpha / And so it's you
Commissar Kate
Kesukka
#2586 - 2013-10-25 15:08:00 UTC
I dug up some before pics and compiled the best before and after I could

http://imgur.com/a/whLZo

-k8

My Fanclub
Random McNally
Stay Frosty.
A Band Apart.
#2587 - 2013-10-25 15:09:13 UTC
Just FYI, I am in first draft of the wrestling match between Laudenum and Alice. I've decided to use it as a submission for the Pod and Pilot contest so I will provide a link to the story when it is complete.

Oh, this hit me like a kilo of bricks!

Host of High Drag Podcast. http://highdrag.wordpress.com/

Space music http://minddivided.com

I G Channel HighDragChat

Broadcast4Reps
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
#2588 - 2013-10-25 16:35:17 UTC
Commissar Kate wrote:
I dug up some before pics and compiled the best before and after I could

http://imgur.com/a/whLZo


Great improvement has been achieved. Cool

Roses are red / Violets are blue / I am an Alpha / And so it's you
Mizhir
Devara Biotech
#2589 - 2013-10-25 17:06:24 UTC
Speaking of boob amplifiers: https://image.eveonline.com/Character/90913251_1024.jpg

❤️️💛💚💙💜
Commissar Kate
Kesukka
#2590 - 2013-10-25 17:44:07 UTC
Mizhir wrote:
Speaking of boob amplifiers: https://image.eveonline.com/Character/90913251_1024.jpg


I think something went wrong with the cloning process.

-k8

My Fanclub
Lailyana Enaka
State War Academy
Caldari State
#2591 - 2013-10-25 21:47:54 UTC
*walks into bar looks around and heads to the bar*

"ill have a whiskey please"

"Here's to the crazy ones. The Misfits, The rebels. The Troublemakers. The round pegs in the square holes. 
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
#2592 - 2013-10-25 22:26:16 UTC
*Succus serves the new customer from the bottle labeled ~A Whiskey~*

Here you have it. We don't accept returns if you don't like it, though.

Roses are red / Violets are blue / I am an Alpha / And so it's you
Bischopt
Sebiestor Tribe
Minmatar Republic
#2593 - 2013-10-25 23:09:14 UTC
Mizhir wrote:
Speaking of boob amplifiers: https://image.eveonline.com/Character/90913251_1024.jpg


*walks into the bar drunk, sees plastic boobs (D:<) and starts throwing bar stools around while singing christmas carols in an unnecessarily aggressive tone*

Nice abs tho.
Commissar Kate
Kesukka
#2594 - 2013-10-25 23:19:15 UTC
Bischopt wrote:
Mizhir wrote:
Speaking of boob amplifiers: https://image.eveonline.com/Character/90913251_1024.jpg


*walks into the bar drunk, sees plastic boobs (D:<) and starts throwing bar stools around while singing christmas carols in an unnecessarily aggressive tone*

Nice abs tho.


It's ok, mine are real. You can feel them if you want.

-k8

My Fanclub
Bischopt
Sebiestor Tribe
Minmatar Republic
#2595 - 2013-10-25 23:29:38 UTC
Commissar Kate wrote:
Bischopt wrote:
Mizhir wrote:
Speaking of boob amplifiers: https://image.eveonline.com/Character/90913251_1024.jpg


*walks into the bar drunk, sees plastic boobs (D:<) and starts throwing bar stools around while singing christmas carols in an unnecessarily aggressive tone*

Nice abs tho.


It's ok, mine are real. You can feel them if you want.


*is not sure whether the boob touching is supposed to clarify the authenticity or cause pleasure*
*has emotional problems*
*touch*
*orders a double vodka*
Lailyana Enaka
State War Academy
Caldari State
#2596 - 2013-10-26 00:42:30 UTC
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai wrote:
*Succus serves the new customer from the bottle labeled ~A Whiskey~*

Here you have it. We don't accept returns if you don't like it, though.



*takes a long swig of the bottle*

"After the week I have had any whiskey is good whiskey, when did this establishment open up?"

"Here's to the crazy ones. The Misfits, The rebels. The Troublemakers. The round pegs in the square holes. 
Betty Bly
Doomheim
#2597 - 2013-10-26 02:18:30 UTC
Commissar Kate wrote:
So I finally got my doctor at my cloning facility to 'enhance' me a little bit. I was having a bit of trouble filling out this new white tee-shirt. But now I think the shirt looks fantastic on me.

Oh how about new pics to see how he did. Blink

http://imgur.com/a/RwJsh


I think this covers it. P

"The dead know only one thing: It is better to be alive."
Laudenum Hayes
Lucifer's Hammer
A Band Apart.
#2598 - 2013-10-26 03:18:08 UTC
I'm still trying to find the stamp that says "inflate to 35psi" on mine.

WTB breast reduction.
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
#2599 - 2013-10-26 07:50:13 UTC
Laudenum Hayes wrote:
I'm still trying to find the stamp that says "inflate to 35psi" on mine.

WTB breast reduction.


*Succus looks appreciatively at Laudenum Hayes, her boots, her skirt, her white shirt, her ponytail, and her impressive bosom*

"Miss Hayes, you are quite atractive today. The pleasure of seeing you is only increased by the surprise of discovering what a beautiful woman was concealed under the rugged spacefarer"

*Ishtanchuk Fazmarai raises her head from the computer screen and looks at Laudenum Hayes*

"Quite womanly. But I would suggest doing something with that lightning, as it doesn't suits you well"

Roses are red / Violets are blue / I am an Alpha / And so it's you
Zoe Kaltana
Kaltana Industries
#2600 - 2013-10-26 09:30:33 UTC  |  Edited by: Zoe Kaltana
Being in abscence for quite some while, Zoe enters through the bars front door along with Chloe and...one, two, three...nine...twelve...FIFTEEN! other members of the bloodhorse tribe. The croud is filling up the place with chattering and laughters as they begin to form up in front of the bars backside wall. Zoe places a camera on a tripod, hits the autotimer and rushes in the middle of the girls.

"Attention now everyone, look in the camera and say cheeeeeeese!"

"why's this thing taking so loo... *chhhpooofff!*

-Kaltana group portrait with horse-

After the shoot, the girls start spreading all over the place for the normal madness routines.

Pinups | Bloodhorses