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New blog / RP fun. tell me what you think.

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tear catcher
Garoun Investment Bank
Gallente Federation
#1 - 2013-02-13 07:01:33 UTC
Ok so i have been reading a few blogs or what ever you wanna call it. and out of the spirit of roll playing and something to do when ship sniping i have decided to make my own. If you have time to read it would be cool. any suggestions are welcome and thanks for taking the time to read and or comment.

Blink

The Lost Logs
Tubrug1
School of Applied Knowledge
Caldari State
#2 - 2013-02-13 07:23:35 UTC
Mine is better.
Keno Skir
#3 - 2013-02-13 07:26:16 UTC
Nice work, really. I like reading blogs from anyone, wish i had time to write one of my own :)

Gotta ask tho, why the hell would you transport a bil in nanoribbons in a Badger? Could fit those in a frigate.
tear catcher
Garoun Investment Bank
Gallente Federation
#4 - 2013-02-13 07:31:44 UTC
Keno Skir wrote:
Nice work, really. I like reading blogs from anyone, wish i had time to write one of my own :)

Gotta ask tho, why the hell would you transport a bil in nanoribbons in a Badger? Could fit those in a frigate.


Well lol......... i was very new and in a WH with ****** skills. i had been saving up them dam things for ever. along with my ore i had mined we had a null sec exit very close to hi sec (less than 6 jumps) i had a second account scouting and thought i was smart lol i got away but i learnt to be patient after that.

I think i was doing it to try to pay for my first plex and couldn't sit any longer lol
Keno Skir
#5 - 2013-02-13 07:38:28 UTC  |  Edited by: Keno Skir
Tubrug1 wrote:
Mine is better.


Yours has the same **** poor spelling they all do, off the high-horse now.

You also post your blog in the same layout and language as that waste-man James 315 (look at me! look at me! look at me! i'm doing ABSOLUTELY **** ALL to you..) Most likely another alt..
YuuKnow
The Scope
#6 - 2013-02-13 08:24:12 UTC
First impressions: Layout of the blog itself is a little confusing.

yk
tear catcher
Garoun Investment Bank
Gallente Federation
#7 - 2013-02-13 08:49:33 UTC
YuuKnow wrote:
First impressions: Layout of the blog itself is a little confusing.

yk


Did a few things, any better?
Keno Skir
#8 - 2013-02-13 09:19:23 UTC  |  Edited by: Keno Skir
If you would like to send me the text i'll sort your spelling and grammar and send it back o/

SAMPLE : Before

Test! Is this thing on...?
Ok! I think it is working now.

Today is a good day! I Finally got threw the CONCORD bull **** red tape, and with some skills and luck (Mostly luck) got my communication and information logging software.Seeing as I i have a few "minor" stains on my record, this did not come without greasing a few poms. Not to mention the risk involved with keeping tangible records of my own actions on board my ship.

I just felt with the lifestyle I am living it might not hurt to try to leave some sort of legacy other than blood and tears. Hopefully some day some onecan find these and and put them to good use.

"God i feel stupid talking to my self like this....
Not to mention last last visit to the cloning vat has left me with a gap in my memory 3 days long!
I guess i wont forget to upgrade my clone before another gank trip"


SAMPLE : After

Testing.. Is this thing on?
Ok! I think it is working now.

Today is a good day! I finally got through the CONCORD bullshit red tape, and with some skills and luck (Mostly luck) got my communication and information logging software up and running. Due to a few "minor" stains on my record i had to grease a few palms to make this happen, not to mention the risk involved with keeping tangible records of my own actions aboard my ship.

Considering the lifestyle i'm living, i feel it might not hurt to try to leave some sort of legacy other than blood and tears. Hopefully some day someone will find these logs and and put them to good use.

"God i feel stupid talking to myself like this.. Not to mention last last visit to the cloning vat left me with a gap in my memory 3 days long!"

"I guess i wont forget to upgrade my clone before another gank trip"


Hope that didn't come across as knit picking, some changes are required though a few are just my preference. When you create a blog the first major thing readers will notice is your construction and how clearly you get the information across.

Looking forward to more logs :D
Tubrug1
School of Applied Knowledge
Caldari State
#9 - 2013-02-13 19:06:28 UTC
Keno Skir wrote:
Tubrug1 wrote:
Mine is better.


Yours has the same **** poor spelling they all do, off the high-horse now.

You also post your blog in the same layout and language as that waste-man James 315 (look at me! look at me! look at me! i'm doing ABSOLUTELY **** ALL to you..) Most likely another alt..


What have I spelt wrong?