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New Chronicle: After The Fall

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CCP Falcon
#1 - 2013-03-25 11:10:39 UTC  |  Edited by: CCP Navigator
Good morning Capsuleers,

CCP Abraxas is here to relay to you the story of a Gallente citizen on Caldari Prime, and his experiences over the course of the recent events in Luminaire.

In this new chronicle, "After the Fall", the final hours of the Leviathan-class titan Shiigeru, and the unrest on Caldari Prime in the wake of an uprising against the Provist occupation force are explored through the eyes of an elderly Gallente citizen.

You can read all about his experiences here.

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Roime
Mea Culpa.
Shadow Cartel
#2 - 2013-03-25 11:13:28 UTC  |  Edited by: Roime
First for the Federation \o/

...and yes, it's a good one. Cheers!

.
Sean Parisi
Blackrise Vanguard
#3 - 2013-03-25 11:29:21 UTC
Roime wrote:
First for the Federation \o/

...and yes, it's a good one. Cheers!


First for the superior Caldari.
Vran DalEsra
Vran DalEsra Corporation
#4 - 2013-03-25 11:33:15 UTC
As an Amarr, I watch all of this in amusement...
Solstice Project
Sebiestor Tribe
Minmatar Republic
#5 - 2013-03-25 11:35:50 UTC
Wow, that's a long read. Will look into it later.
Lacks pic, btw. ^_^

Nice work ! (i hope ^_^)
Tasiv Deka
Rapid Unscheduled Disassembly.
Kybernauts Clade
#6 - 2013-03-25 11:42:14 UTC
Ill read it over my lunch break but i have to ask is this going to be as biased against Caldari as ccp is? (i know its a gallente POV but still...)

I mean this isnt some in character rant or anything but seriously its kind of irritating seeing Caldari (and Amarr) get the short end of the stick on quite a few things.

still though i'll read it and hopefully it isnt too biased

Oh, Do go on... no seriously ive got nothing better to do then listen to all the petty arguments and feeble trolling attempts... 

The sad thing is i'm not sure if i'm telling the truth.
Sabin Minks
Furries Ruin Everything
Winger Aerospace
#7 - 2013-03-25 11:42:20 UTC
Win or lose.

For those with no allegiances. War is only good for business.

And business might start to get good.
Aquila Shadow
Deep Core Mining Inc.
Caldari State
#8 - 2013-03-25 11:47:21 UTC
Dat ending

                                              "Let Vigilance Be Your Sword"
Robo Hobo
Perihelion Aerospace Ltd.
#9 - 2013-03-25 11:50:51 UTC
ohh that was a good ending
Tasiv Deka
Rapid Unscheduled Disassembly.
Kybernauts Clade
#10 - 2013-03-25 11:51:24 UTC
Aquila Shadow wrote:
Dat ending



Damn you you made me go and spoil it all for myself

Oh, Do go on... no seriously ive got nothing better to do then listen to all the petty arguments and feeble trolling attempts... 

The sad thing is i'm not sure if i'm telling the truth.
Phey Onat
Blackwater USA Inc.
Pandemic Horde
#11 - 2013-03-25 11:52:29 UTC
Good thing someone typed the :kill: macro in to take down the titan. Would have made for an awkward release of your story.
Destroyer of Souls
Life. Universe. Everything.
#12 - 2013-03-25 12:15:45 UTC  |  Edited by: Destroyer of Souls
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Also, I got a dog, who I quickly grew fond of but somehow never got around to naming.

Quote:
That day I made my way into the city, asking around, looking for him, shouting his name.


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I rushed to get a ladder and climbed up on my roof

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I slowly crawled on my hands and knees until I got to the stairs, which I went down one careful step at a time until I reached the garden.


Love those continuity errors.
Thomas Markand
EVE University
Ivy League
#13 - 2013-03-25 12:22:46 UTC
Awesome story, would love to see more chronicles!

Missed out on the whole Battle of Luminaire thing but it is fantastic that this game is so freaking dynamic, what with gameplay events affecting the storyline quickly and all.


Keep up the good work!

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Stitcher
School of Applied Knowledge
Caldari State
#14 - 2013-03-25 12:26:18 UTC
See, this right here is why I like the Caldari. It'd be so easy to paint them as the faceless jackbooted bad guys. It's nice to see ruthless efficiency treated in a more nuanced, even virtuous way. Great read, go Abraxas!

AKA Hambone

Author of The Deathworlders
Grideris
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#15 - 2013-03-25 12:32:48 UTC  |  Edited by: Grideris
\o/

Good Chron is good. Now, more!

There was a moment where I shivered when it was talking about the Titan breaking in half. Mainly because I was right next to it when that happened.

And who's bodies? Shocked

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JN Jarvis
State War Academy
Caldari State
#16 - 2013-03-25 12:39:36 UTC
I was born Caldari, but I find myself flying Gallente Big smile
Torkoletti
Vigilante Task Force
#17 - 2013-03-25 12:40:03 UTC

Oh, that was a nice read....a good way to start off a Monday morning.

Thanks!
Unit XS365BT
Unit Commune
#18 - 2013-03-25 12:45:02 UTC
Loved it...

And that final twist :)

Abraxas, you've done it again.

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Seriphyn Inhonores
Elusenian Cooperative
#19 - 2013-03-25 12:55:04 UTC
I love how Abraxas is able to apply the high-level political concepts we read about in the lore to the average, planet-dwelling member of society, to reveal that it isn't as binary as one might think.
Brune Rendar
Deep Core Mining Inc.
Caldari State
#20 - 2013-03-25 12:59:03 UTC
Vran DalEsra wrote:
As an Amarr, I watch all of this in amusement...


They're coming for you guys next.
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