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Pony Play

Author
Flay Geobukseon
Federal Navy Academy
Gallente Federation
#1 - 2012-04-13 20:56:46 UTC  |  Edited by: Flay Geobukseon
During the CSM election, I wrote a short story in support of Kelduum's campaign. Unfortunately, CCP decided to delete my post from the Eve Online forums in Kelduum's thread. In the hopes of getting more votes for Kelduum, I promised to write a sequel if Kelduum managed to win a seat on the CSM council. Many of you have been patiently waiting, and I am glad to say I have finally written part two in this exciting adventure. Without further delay here are part one and two of Pony Play, a Kelduum Revaan & Twilight Sparkle fanfic.

Please enjoy.

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Pony Play
Chapter One

Kelduum Revaan gently brushed Twilight Sparkle's mane. She struggled against the shackles but they held her hooves firmly. "Don't struggle, my dear," he said. "You don't want another taste of the riding crop, do you?"

"No... no..." She pleaded. Despite herself, she gasped as he ran the brush through the coat of her rump. "No, what?" he asked, in a stern voice.

"No... Master." She answered.

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Pony Play
Chapter Two

"How do I look?" Kelduum asked.

Twilight wasn't sure how to answer. "I'm sure you look very fine, Master. But I can't see..."

Had her Master purchased a new vest from the NeX store again? He always liked showing those off. Perhaps some new boots. She had hated licking his boots when he purchased a new pair one month ago. But today she would not hate it.

"Oh dear," Kelduum said. "I forgot to remove your blindfold."

Twilight resisted the urge to make a biting retort. He had most certainly not forgotten. He often enjoyed teasing her with the promise of releasing her from whatever bondage device he had decided upon that day, only to dash her hopes and come back later to tease her some more. Thankfully it wasn't a bar gag this time. It always embarrassed her terribly when the maid came to clean up the puddle of drool on the floor that would result from wearing the bar gag.

She clopped a hoof loudly on the floor in frustration. She really wanted to see what her Master had brought. Immediately she regretted it. Calm and composed, she reminded herself.

Kelduum chuckled. "Oh, you're feisty today aren't you?" Kelduum removed the blindfold, and Twilight blinked her eyes open.

She blushed at the sight of her Master's dazzling form. "N-n-n-n-naked!?" she blurted out.

Kelduum beamed. "Indeed. It is a new Zainou biotech clone. I managed to get a model from next season's catalogue. Behold the rigid aggressive form of the Caldari Civire bloodline melded to the decadent pleasure-seeking body of a Gallente Intaki."

Twilight could not think of what to say. She could only stare at her Master's form. She tried to look away but her eyes were transfixed. She was entirely mesmerized.

"I spoke to Dr. Kirkinen," Kelduum said. "He said he could make you a new clone if I wanted it. A human clone."

Twilight snapped out of her reverie. "Human? I... I think... If you would like me to be human, Master, then I would like that too."

Twilight's thoughts were in turmoil. What was she? A biotech engineered life form, designed to be the star of a holovid series. But fame had faded away after the show lost its ratings and was cancelled. She and her former biotech comrades had been auctioned off to the highest bidders. She was not a true pony, though she had never thought of herself as anything other than a pony-shaped individual. The human body has its advantages, perhaps it would be a good change.

Kelduum frowned. "But I fear granting you a human body may give you some strange ideas. You might start thinking you have rights and deserve the freedom to make decisions for yourself, without my approval!" He hissed.

"No! Master, I would never dare." Twilight was frantic. The words came bursting out of her like a torrent. "I only want to serve you. I am your slave. My only desire is to bend to your will. I will stay by your side forever and ever, Master! I will do as you command. I want to be punished when I'm bad. I want to be rewarded when I'm good. I want you to tease me, I pretend like I hate being teased but I love it. And I love you, Master!"

Kelduum reflected upon her words for a moment. "Very well, I'll place order for an Intaki-Sebiestor clone."

Twilight smiled. "Thank you so much, Master." She had to resist the urge to go prancing around the captain's quarters. Calm and composed, she reminded herself.

"Shall we go for a walk?" Kelduum asked, as he attached the leash to Twilight's collar.

"Yes, Master!" She replied, giddy with anticipation. "Will you still take me out on walks when I have my human clone, Master? With the collar and leash, I mean."

"Of course." Kelduum replied.

Twilight loved being walked around Aldrat's Pator Tech School station. The EVE University students would always compliment Master for having such a well-mannered and obedient pet.

A month ago she would have dreamt of escaping with a human body from the clutches of her Master. But today she was His to command.
Culmen
Deep Core Mining Inc.
Caldari State
#2 - 2012-04-15 06:07:03 UTC
Needs more Fluttershy

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