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My characters defection Story (background) its unfinished
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Callista Nueva
Bustin Space Rocks INC.
Caldari Alliance
#1 - 2012-02-13 11:30:05 UTC
http://wiki.eveonline.com/en/wiki/The_defection_of_the_gallente_born
Its unfinished as i made it in ten-fifteen minutes but i'd love some feedback :)

Just because i see things in a differant viewpoint does not make me paranoid it makes me a bit obsolete in the majorities views.

Aand i do love the thought of Using repair drones as bait O:
Amaroq Dricaldari
Ministry of War
Amarr Empire
#2 - 2012-02-14 07:02:22 UTC
It could use some grammar and spelling corrections, but other than that it is pretty good. Not bad for 15 minutes. I'm a good writer, but it takes me a few hours to get passed my writer's block.

If you want to help me with my story, keep in touch.

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Callista Nueva
Bustin Space Rocks INC.
Caldari Alliance
#3 - 2012-02-15 11:02:54 UTC
Amaroq Dricaldari wrote:
It could use some grammar and spelling corrections, but other than that it is pretty good. Not bad for 15 minutes. I'm a good writer, but it takes me a few hours to get passed my writer's block.

If you want to help me with my story, keep in touch.


Thanks very much the Personal view is much appreciated and i'll definetly get in contact with you as i at some point plan to branch it into a much larger story only i am not sure how to yet, thanks again, i'll add you as a contact and i'll speak to you when i have some idea's towards the story thanks again. :)

Just because i see things in a differant viewpoint does not make me paranoid it makes me a bit obsolete in the majorities views.

Aand i do love the thought of Using repair drones as bait O: