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My first attempt at EVE-based fiction
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Hibbie
Black Omega Security
Minmatar Fleet Alliance
#1 - 2012-01-04 05:24:36 UTC
Hoping this is the right place to stick it, but I started myself a blog, A Tale of Two Pods, that focuses on the story of two pilots in the EVE Universe.

Any feedback is welcome, here or there. I wrote what I reckoned I'd enjoy reading and it might not be entirely canon accurate, but I'll try to keep it as close as I can!
Seljuk Mahinda
Federal Navy Academy
Gallente Federation
#2 - 2012-01-05 01:39:33 UTC
That's a pretty good start for a story. The whole "brother against brother" dynamic is a classic. I did notice one thing though, it's first suggested in that first sequence that the recruiter and the guy's brother don't know each other, but at the end he says he sent him. Maybe there should be some kind of clarification.