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Looking for Critique on a new serial
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Destrier Uisen
Caldari Provisions
Caldari State
#1 - 2017-04-17 00:33:39 UTC  |  Edited by: Destrier Uisen
Looking for Critique on a new serial I would like to write set in the EVE universe.

In.particulsr I'm interested in whether I have the "tech level" of various technologies featured in the serial correct for the EVE universe.

https://docs.google.com/a/michaelandvictoria.id.au/document/d/1v8olleR5qhGoPB2VL_O9pTOVQXQ3UfwCCtqRPtx-TIg/edit?usp=drivesdk

Hopefully fixed the accessibility issues.
Elmund Egivand
Tribal Liberation Force
Minmatar Republic
#2 - 2017-04-17 03:16:07 UTC
Your Google Doc is inaccessible. Check your share settings or upload your fic somewhere else and link from there.

A Minmatar warship is like a rusting Beetle with 500 horsepower Cardillac engines in the rear, armour plating bolted to chassis and a M2 Browning stuck on top.