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Alizabeth Vea
Doomheim
#1 - 2016-09-15 04:36:00 UTC
In my life I've written several poems. Many in school, learning how to write them, but several very significant ones at critical fulcrum points in my life. I've found that the act of sitting to write a poem, to contemplate events that have occurred and then putting them to a meter can help focus my thoughts immensely.

One such poem was the day I performed the Tea Maker Ceremony. It was a death poem. I keep this with me, at all times in a prayer that I won't make the same mistakes. It is also one that I will not share.

However, as I come up on almost a year since departing Goonswarm for the Amarr Empire, I sat down to write another poem, to task stock of where I was and just why I was here. I am happy to share this with you.

I will also ask that others post their efforts of poetry here, not just rhyming words, but insights into their lives, however much you wish to share. Poems don't have to be long. They don't have to be short. However, they must be written with the soul.

The best poem, as judged by my arbitrary and capricious standards, will net the writer a PLEX.

I look forward to reading your efforts. I will wait a week before judging.


((Note for CCP/ISD, this is an in character thread meant for roleplayers to write poems as their characters would write them.))

Retainer of Lady Newelle and House Sarum.

"Those who step into the light shall be redeemed, the sins of their past cleansed, so that they may know salvation." -Empress Jamyl Sarum I

Virtue. Valor. Victory.

Alizabeth Vea
Doomheim
#2 - 2016-09-15 04:36:08 UTC  |  Edited by: Alizabeth Vea
Tears in the ash of Caldari Prime
Brave Marines dead before their time
A victory, sure, but count the cost
Our home regained, but so much lost

I went back home to parades and song
But the music was dull with what was gone
My sister and I, now alone
Our mother lost at Ishukone

Battered and broken, given a place
Trained for the pod and sent to space
My life and loyalty tested by Heth
Something snapped and all is Death

A monster now with a pretty face
A soul as dark as the black of space
Bound now only by my will
Innocent and guilty both I kill

Drowning then in a crimson flood
Turning to the faith of blood
I find no peace or solace there
And the monster consumes me in despair

My deeds have brought only infamy
To the honored name of the Family Vea
Only one way out, I drink the tea
And pray my ancestors forgive me

A new clone then, my memory cleared
But the monster still inside, always feared
From civilized space do I flee
Out to nullsec to become a Bee

Down to Fountain to the war
The killing starts, like before
Drugs and sex and even more
Until the day I hit the floor

A goddess in the realm of space
But here on earth, fallen from grace
Naked, violated, all alone
A Ni-Kunni nun took me home

At first though, I found it odd
That anyone would talk to me of God
My life was in ruins, everything a mess
Why would she help me—so worthless?

But she kept at it, day by day
Helping me get better, showing the way

I was a bruised and broken woman,
but she helped me to heal
She said God would help me,
all I had to do was kneel
Submit to God; accept His commandments
and carry out His will
It was a night of humility, of surrender,
to God and Empress Jamyl

I will never forget who brought me light
And saved me on that darkest night




Thank you, Sister Rahma.

Retainer of Lady Newelle and House Sarum.

"Those who step into the light shall be redeemed, the sins of their past cleansed, so that they may know salvation." -Empress Jamyl Sarum I

Virtue. Valor. Victory.

Karina Ivanovich
Republic Military School
Minmatar Republic
#3 - 2016-09-15 05:14:09 UTC
Life spoke to the void.
"Why do so many hate me? Yet they cling so tightly to my cloak."

Death spoke to the void.
"I am accursed and feared by so many. Yet they all come to me in the end."

Joy spoke to the void.
"I am pursued by all. Yet they find me so elusive."

Hope asked the void:
"Why am I both held so tightly and thrown so easily away?"

War spoke to the void.
"I am what they hate. Yet they cannot live without me."

Peace spoke to the void.
"I am sought by all. Yet they have never found me"

Innocence asked the void:
"Why am I both the first they have and the first they lose?"

Strife asked the void:
"Why am I the one that they hate to love? Yet they still do so love me."

Intellect said to the void:
"I lead them further toward salvation. Yet I also lead them toward destruction."

Madness asked the void:
"Why are those blessed by me the only ones to see the truth?"

Sanity asked the void:
"Why am I both the lense to see and the fog obscuring?"

Sleep said the the void:
"I am necessary to them. Yet they do not know when I am with them."

Pain spoke to the void.
"I am both the warning and the danger. Yet I am loved by some more than life."

The void spoke to them all.

"Life, you are a beautiful lie."

"Death, you are a painful truth."

"Joy, you are the fleeting escape."

"Hope, you are what gives them reason."

"War, you are what gives them meaning."

"Peace, you are never to be found."

"Innocence, you are what gives memories meaning."

"Strife, you are the catalyst."

"Intellect, you are an illusion."

"Madness, you are a warrior's last stand."

"Sanity, you are an accepted hypocrisy."

"Sleep, you are the glimpse of reality."

"Pain, you are the lightning rod in the maelstrom."


"And what are you?" They asked the void.

The void replied.

"I am you"





((Poem Under Copy-write by me irl))

Some call me insane. If the universe is sane, then I embrace that label.

Jason Galente
University of Caille
Gallente Federation
#4 - 2016-09-15 08:50:02 UTC
Truth is like poetry.

And most people ******* hate poetry.

Only the liberty of the individual assures the prosperity of the whole. And this foundation must be defended.

At any cost

Yarosara Ruil
#5 - 2016-09-15 09:56:03 UTC
Rabbit on the moon
Is space rich with technetium
Wish I could Tech2 too

Veikitamo Gesakaarin
Doomheim
#6 - 2016-09-15 12:24:09 UTC  |  Edited by: Veikitamo Gesakaarin
Title:The Rime of Identifying as a Kestrel Frigate

One to one I duel at top sun
The Kestrel spreads its wings
Only missiles no need for gun
Rage and the Scourge to bring

Burning towards the dangerzone
Thermal safeties redline
Tongue tasting the warmth of ozone
Heat rising up my spine

Hot enough the weed is now lit
As it says in Scripture
Passage Four and Twenty praise it
Drunk with vodka mixture

They keep on holding on to hope
But I will never die
Rockets are fired with no scope
Local salt as they cry

No mad as crew die to spalling
Unlike rifle Mark 8
There is not a trigger warning
Embrace the final fate

Now killmail has been confirmed
How, I am asked with strain
I consider with smile not stern
A laugh: "I do cocaine."

@veikusenpai

Kurilaivonen|Concern

Valerie Valate
Church of The Crimson Saviour
#7 - 2016-09-15 16:32:39 UTC
There was a Gallente named Weenus,
Whose fingers all looked like a sausage,
Diana found out
and said with a shout
"That's why there is war between us"

Doctor V. Valate, Professor of Archaeology at Kaztropolis Imperial University.

Arnulf Ogunkoya
Clan Ogunkoya
Electus Matari
#8 - 2016-09-15 21:08:59 UTC
Written by me at the start of the militia wars.

The Storms are rising
Their way long and grief laden
Morning comes after.

Regards, Arnulf Ogunkoya.

Anabella Rella
Gradient
Electus Matari
#9 - 2016-09-16 00:14:24 UTC
Roses are red
Dead flowers turn black
Most who attempt to write poems
Are terrible hacks

(And no, this is not directed at any individual in this thread but poets in general. I hate poetry.)

When the world is running down, you make the best of what's still around.

Loai Qerl
Societas Imperialis Sceptri Coronaeque
Khimi Harar
#10 - 2016-09-16 01:36:12 UTC  |  Edited by: Loai Qerl
This poem is a classical Khanid form, and its traditional purpose is to call out bad manners and shameful behavior. As such, it's short. I hope you'll all forgive my shortcomings and my alluding to subject matter not especially familiar.

In return I make you a count, says the Holder, so splendid, so gold
Now you marry this poor little thing nobody worth noting will count
Lord Vaari can feast on ripe guts and the feet of the beasts of the field.
In shame we both rot.



That said, something nicer:

How joyous the Gate as the Eye of God looks into New Eden
The eye sees us all bare and shameless, forgives us all, forgives our shame
Light passes through our pettiness and our rotten grievances toward friends
Fat stomachs ignored.
Jade Blackwind
#11 - 2016-09-16 19:18:48 UTC  |  Edited by: Jade Blackwind
Your body's a wound, you're a raving madman.
This world is an arrow that impales you,
A ghost ship of what never was
falling towards the event horizon.
Aria Jenneth
Societas Imperialis Sceptri Coronaeque
Khimi Harar
#12 - 2016-09-16 20:04:47 UTC  |  Edited by: Aria Jenneth
Animosity:
Candle flame, be all of mine.
A puff of breath. Smoke.
Alizabeth Vea
Doomheim
#13 - 2016-09-26 05:18:27 UTC
Well, I let this go on a bit longer. I will judge and let the results be known in the next few days. Entries are closed.

Retainer of Lady Newelle and House Sarum.

"Those who step into the light shall be redeemed, the sins of their past cleansed, so that they may know salvation." -Empress Jamyl Sarum I

Virtue. Valor. Victory.

Valerie Valate
Church of The Crimson Saviour
#14 - 2016-09-26 05:39:56 UTC
at this point, I have, with 7, more likes for my effort, than anyone else, followed by Alizabeth's own entry with 6, Anabella Rella's with 5, and Loai Qerl and Karina Ivanovich with 4.

By various standards, that would mean I would probably have won.

I shall therefore add "renowned poet" to my list of accolades.

Doctor V. Valate, Professor of Archaeology at Kaztropolis Imperial University.

Alizabeth Vea
Doomheim
#15 - 2016-09-26 21:04:45 UTC
Alizabeth Vea wrote:
The best poem, as judged by my arbitrary and capricious standards, will net the writer a PLEX.

Just want to reiterate this. Actually there are many good poems here. Judging will be hard.

Retainer of Lady Newelle and House Sarum.

"Those who step into the light shall be redeemed, the sins of their past cleansed, so that they may know salvation." -Empress Jamyl Sarum I

Virtue. Valor. Victory.

Arrendis
TK Corp
#16 - 2016-09-27 03:54:59 UTC
Valerie Valate wrote:
By various standards, that would mean I would probably have won.


As one of the purposes of art is to challenge assumptions, I'd think the most-liked would be the least effective art.
Valerie Valate
Church of The Crimson Saviour
#17 - 2016-09-27 17:03:03 UTC
Alizabeth Vea wrote:
Alizabeth Vea wrote:
The best poem, as judged by my arbitrary and capricious standards, will net the writer a PLEX.

Just want to reiterate this. Actually there are many good poems here. Judging will be hard.


Your arbitrariness has no bearing on my works popular appeal.

Arrendis wrote:
Valerie Valate wrote:
By various standards, that would mean I would probably have won.


As one of the purposes of art is to challenge assumptions, I'd think the most-liked would be the least effective art.


Oooh, is this a debate about populism vs elitism in art ? Outstanding !

Doctor V. Valate, Professor of Archaeology at Kaztropolis Imperial University.

William Danneskjold
#18 - 2016-09-28 12:36:23 UTC
For lonely on the horizon
Did the battleship wait
Grapplers at ready
Gunners at ready

The target presented itself
A lone hauler
The pilot squee'd to himself
A born ganker

Scrambler on!
Webber on!
Guns on!

But alas, it was not to be
The hauler was tanked!
And it bore the mark of The Bee
The battleship knew he was ganked
Cyno up!

War is murder. It always has been, always will be. Murder in the name of God. Freedom. Your country. Whatever it is, it is murder. I am already against the next set of wars.

Arrendis
TK Corp
#19 - 2016-09-28 13:20:11 UTC  |  Edited by: Arrendis
Valerie Valate wrote:

Oooh, is this a debate about populism vs elitism in art ? Outstanding !


Populism vs elitism? No, not at all, rather, the debate would be art that provokes thought and art that is intended to serve the observer the comfortable pablum that encourages not thinking. Which is why...

Valerie Valate wrote:

Your arbitrariness has no bearing on my works popular appeal.


This is now my favorite poem on the thread. Or it was, until I wrote my entry:



Arrendis wrote:

Not
Arrendis wrote:





I'll give you a little while to really appreciate it before offering the simple and obvious explanation if it's needed.
Silas Tomkyn Comberbache
Doomheim
#20 - 2016-09-28 14:24:30 UTC  |  Edited by: Silas Tomkyn Comberbache
Ten Jumps to Jita


Ten jumps to Jita
Isn't so far
On the lookout for gatecamps
And EWAR

Seven jumps to Jita
I'm well on my way
To sell all my cargo
And get paid

Three jumps to Jita
I can hear the bright song
Of a thousand capsuleers
All scamming as one

Two jumps to Jita
But I made a wrong turn
Got warped, scrammed, and podded
Guess I'll never learn

Now I'm back at home station
Counting my lucky stars
Because ten jumps to Jita
Isn't so far
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