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Nathan Ormande
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#1 - 2014-12-22 22:48:01 UTC
Can i get some feedback on a background i've been making.

http://i.imgur.com/KwgeOUF.png

Thanks.
Zimmy Zeta
Perkone
Caldari State
#2 - 2014-12-22 22:55:23 UTC
Nathan Ormande wrote:
Can i get some feedback on a background i've been making.

http://i.imgur.com/KwgeOUF.png

Thanks.

A desktop wallpaper?

It's very nice, especially the light/shadow effects.
Not so much a fan of mining barges myself, but if you wanted to make a mining wallpaper, wouldn't some glittering strip miner beams add even more cool light effects to the whole thing?

I'd like to apologize for the poor quality of the post above and sincerely hope you didn't waste your time reading it. Yes, I do feel bad about it.

Nathan Ormande
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#3 - 2014-12-22 23:15:36 UTC
It's an Archon xD
Zimmy Zeta
Perkone
Caldari State
#4 - 2014-12-22 23:28:48 UTC
Nathan Ormande wrote:
It's an Archon xD


Oops

Still one of the hulls I don't fly, but admittedly a little more impressive now.
Wouldn't it make sense to add some fighters in space then (you know: Templar, it's an Amarr fighter etc etc) ?

I'd like to apologize for the poor quality of the post above and sincerely hope you didn't waste your time reading it. Yes, I do feel bad about it.

Badel Jramodarr
#5 - 2014-12-22 23:36:31 UTC
Sure, I can tell you what I want it to look like but, & it's a big but, I'm not making it.

If this is the general idea of what you were going for, start adding detail.
If you're not happy with it and a bit tired of looking at it, let it rest.
Go do something else and come back to it with a fresh set of eyes and enthusiasm,
or just get a fresh cup of double strength, triple expresso, brain explode-o coffee, or [insert preferred method here].

If you were to state what you're trying to achieve in the picture, then maybe I could help. (Could being the operative word)

my best advice for you: let it come from the heart, don't think about it too hard

Brujo Loco
Brujeria Teologica
#6 - 2014-12-23 00:48:15 UTC
Nathan Ormande wrote:
Can i get some feedback on a background i've been making.

http://i.imgur.com/KwgeOUF.png

Thanks.



It looks nice, if it were me I would turn into something like this http://imgur.com/RYGf1qn

But base model you have there shows a lot of promise!

Keep it up! Big smile

Inner Sayings of BrujoLoco: http://eve-files.com/sig/brujoloco