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First Chapter of my EVE story
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Boltzen
Winds Of Neptune
#1 - 2014-05-01 03:23:44 UTC
So I just finished the first chapter of a story I've been inspired to write. It is loosely based upon an event I experienced in-game, and I'm looking for some feedback for it. It's too long to post here, so I'll include a link to the FanFiction website.

Anyways, here's the link.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10313467/1/The-Bika-Incident-Chapter-1-Working-Title


Any feedback would be awesome, as I've always been really interested in writing stories and I want to improve!
Verdis deMosays
Center for Advanced Studies
Gallente Federation
#2 - 2014-05-05 17:44:47 UTC
I like it. Well written, for the most part, and well phrased slice of life from a capsuleers day. You should add more! If you ever want to talk or get some ideas, hit me up with an eve mail or convo in game.