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A humble and half-assed attempt at fiction

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Catastrophe Bloom
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#1 - 2013-08-21 23:54:36 UTC
I'll go on the record right now stating that I don't know the lore very well (or really, at all yet) and have only played the game for a couple of months. Someone in-game asked me what the background of my pilot was, and about twenty minutes later I had the below ramble.

Please forgive me for the myriad of technical errors or lore-murdering ideas that probably exist in there.

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Entry 0001

My name is Catastrophe Bloom. This diary is not my idea.
Computer psych-programs think they have an answer to everything, and this is apparently the answer for me. Or so they say. I'm supposed to make entries into this thing constantly, in the hopes that it organizes my mind and settles me into the new universe I've found myself in.

History – we all have one, but mine is pretty average. Two parents, who lived normal lives and who did not die under tragic circumstances. I know, it would be a better story if they were murdered by Caldari spies or even lost in a tragic accident but they lived as regular folk doing regular things.

They were both miners at an ore-working down on Clellinon VI. I grew up on the fringes of the mining colony, my sister and I chasing each other up and down the cracked and broken rock surface, occasionally finding bits of melted slag-ore that shone or twinkled. Of course, sometimes playing in rocks turns to throwing them, and we each had our fair share of bruises some days. It's a sister thing.

My sister – Calamity – was always fascinated with the stars. She would always be hogging computer uplink time, poring over news of star systems far away and peoples we would never meet. That fascination led her to the Self-Start educational program in the Clellinon system - government run studies for those with an interest in life beyond the atmosphere.

Not me though. Like my parents, I had no further ambition than the mines. They were dangerous, but not as dangerous as allowing your body to be riddled with cybernetic implants in order to become a Capsuleer in the depths of cold space. They were hard work, sure, but I never minded that.

Couldn't consider myself to be a scholar – not like Calamity, anyway – but I could learn fast enough to pick up the skills and talents I needed to go underground and operate the mining rigs. While Calamity set her sights on the heavens, my eyes turned to the hard rock and practical ores of the earth beneath our feet. My future was to be a good one – hard, but good.

I was sixteen when our parents took us aside, serious expressions with a hint of what I now recognize as resignation. The mines, they said, were closing. The time spent underground, the ISK outlay for ore returned, were miniscule compared to the plethora of asteroids that could be mined cheaper, faster and with less manpower. We were, in essence, out of employment.

There were two options available to us. Firstly, we could find new careers in new vocations. For my parents – and for me – that was unthinkable. We were miners, damn it, ore was in our blood, sweat and tears. The second option was repugnant as well – submit to the medical monstrosities that would develop our bodies into Capsuleers. All that would take was money, and a willingness to violate our bodies with technology.

Tears and angry words were said – to be honest, they were my words, their tears. The idea of space, of Capsuleers, of changing the life we'd comfortably led for so long was an anathema to me. I recoiled at the idea, begged my parents to reconsider. Calamity tried to help, explaining the benefits that included ever-living consciousness in a series of clones that meant one could live forever, see the sights of the entire universe if willing. I was harsh with her, too. All she could see, I thought, was space. Stars in her eyes and a smile on her face at the future that had been stolen from us.

First my father, then my mother each underwent the procedure. When they returned home, they looked no different, behaved no different, yet to me they weren't the same people any more. They were enhanced – or burdened - with cybernetic implants. Wires, circuitry and computer chips in their heads and a variety of internal changes made for the efficient care of a Capsuleer in their craft. Outwardly, they were my parents. Inside though? I don't know.

Then came the third shock – after losing my planned future and the medical changes within my parents, they sat us down again and explained that they were each taking a ship and going separate ways. They had purchased two mining craft – cheap, but reliable ships called Ventures – but each one only carried one pilot – the Capsuleer. Additional crew were minimal and came with the ship already trained and able to do their jobs. My sister and I were to be left behind.

Calamity, of course, already knew this. Her studies on space and Capsuleers had prepared her for this. It was news to me, and the next shock came right out of left field – we were to be put in stasis until they returned.

I won't bore this diary with the screaming-fest that occurred when I heard THAT news. Although the psych program will want me to expand on it, I'm sure, I'll just say that I reacted worse than they had hoped. In the end though, my objections were futile. We were not of age, and so could not legally live without guardian supervision and looking back the choices were either to hand us off to a neighbour who probably couldn't afford to keep us anyway, or stick us in the freezer until their mining expedition bore fruit.

The last thing I said to the two people who still claimed parenthood was this:

“Don't wake me up. Let me sleep forever.”

I have a feeling they seriously considered it.

(continued below)
Catastrophe Bloom
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#2 - 2013-08-21 23:54:58 UTC
Fast forward five years, and I was awakened. I opened my eyes, and looked at the place my parents should have been. After all, for me no time had passed at all. However, in the place of my parents was a fussy little man with one of those “toothbrush” mustaches and a thick ream of paper. I'd like to recount the conversation word for word, but I was groggy and disoriented. The general gist of the situation was this:

The man, Lionel Urrich, worked for the Center for Advanced Studies, the Corporation that my parents had joined soon after leaving atmosphere and their children behind. Through an incredibly long and detailed list of bad fortunes – each of which I was told about by this little man – my parents had not only adapted poorly to space mining but also had run up a not inconsiderable sum of debt with the corporation. I won't mention the amount here. I really can't even wrap my head around the number of digits in the figure.

The corporation's response was, in my eyes, unreasonable. They froze my parents assets – and their clones. Yes, my parents had become clones which was, I'm told, almost offhandedly common for Capsuleers. With pirates and inter-faction warfare and even rogue AI drones abound, Capsuleers often “died” and were rebirthed in a clone-body. In my mind, that meant my parents were even less real than they once had been. Anyway, they saw my parents as a loss, but in an attempt to recoup some of their funds had activated one of their “assets” - my sister.

With what I now know to be an incredibly painful series of skill-set injections, they had augmented Calamity for space exploration. It had been her dream, after all, to explore space and she certainly had the aptitude and attitude to make something of it. The corporation's number crunchers invested their time and effort into turning my little sister into a Capsuleer. Apparently, quite a successful one for about six months. Then they lost her.

Wormhole exploration is, they say, lucrative but unpredictable. Unstable rifts in space that, I'm given to understand, open and close seemingly at random. They sent my sister through one of these wormholes, and part way through sending back a rich data-stream the wormhole had collapsed, taking her with it.

Realizing that they had another Bloom to work with, whilst I was asleep they did to me what they had done to my parents, and to my sister. Within me are circuits and wires and implants that improve my perceptions and learning capabilities, rearrange my internal organs and plumbing for life in a space pod, and augment my reaction times to an unnatural degree.

I should have been angry, and mentioned to Urrich that I was. He smiled, lips as thin as his mustache, and shook his head. No, he said, I wasn't and couldn't be. Part of my “upgrade” included mood stabilizing hardware that prevented unprofitably strong emotions of any kind, whether positive or negative. Also included was a chip that promoted goodwill and loyalty to the corporation. Another thing I wish I could be angry about. I could feel, but it would never get in the way of my job.

My job? To pay back a corporate debt and reawaken my parents. Finding my sister would be, to the corporation, a bonus. To me it would be a duty. In order to do so, the corporation were willing to focus on what I considered my own strength – mining. The asteroids were rich and plentiful, after all, no matter how hard it had been for my parents.

As I am considered an asset of the corporation under my parents debt, I have no choice in what is done to my body. As well as Capsuleer augmentations and a set of basic skills to get me started piloting, this body is that of a clone. My original body being, they say, unsuited to the rigors of space. This clone they had age-advanced to twenty – though my mind will struggle to catch up to that, I'm sure. I want to be angry. I want to cry, I want to rage at the violations inflicted on my body and the unfairness of the universe. Instead, my emotions are muted and I am resigned to a life I would never have chosen.

I'm writing this with nothing but my mind transcribing my thoughts onto the computer of my pod – a self contained life support capsule that is rocketing its way to a satellite orbiting a moon of Clellinon VI. The corporation owns the satellite, and my family. For now.

My name is Catastrophe Bloom - miners daughter, corporate debtor and now: a Capsuleer.
Dimitrix Inkura
Arcbound Inc.
#3 - 2013-09-05 16:02:09 UTC
This was pretty well written. I hope you will consider writing some more Smile

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Skoya Joringer
Societas Imperialis Sceptri Coronaeque
Khimi Harar
#4 - 2013-09-05 16:30:46 UTC

i like your story :)
Catastrophe Bloom
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#5 - 2013-09-05 21:30:06 UTC
Dimitrix Inkura wrote:
This was pretty well written. I hope you will consider writing some more Smile


Skoya Joringer wrote:

i like your story :)


Aw, well thanks both of you! :) To be honest, I hadn't thought much about taking it forward from here, but I might see what I can work up. Anything new that I do at this point will show a woeful disregard for learning the lore. ;)
Skoya Joringer
Societas Imperialis Sceptri Coronaeque
Khimi Harar
#6 - 2013-09-06 03:22:51 UTC
Don't worry too much about the lore :) Would your character really know everything about history and politics or is she getting on with her life? I'm looking forward to more!
Denver Zariel
Hedion University
Amarr Empire
#7 - 2013-09-06 11:37:04 UTC
I'm not sure I've ever been more imaginatively stimulated in my life. Esspecially not about eve. Really felt genuinely irritated at the short mustache man for giving you mood altering implants for profitability. That's just a greedy guy right there. Probably one of those damned Ammarians...

Anyways, yeah I'm aware that this is a fictional thread but I will be dammed if I don't enjoy thinking like this. Pease do more. I'm not opposed to paying isk if you need it. Purely a well written story in my eyes.

Thank you for this.