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GSF Calls for an Investigation

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Andreus Ixiris
Center for Advanced Studies
Gallente Federation
#121 - 2013-02-15 14:35:27 UTC
Alizabeth Vea wrote:
Everyone's a critic. I'll write poetry how I desire, thank you very much.

So... badly?

Andreus Ixiris > A Civire without a chin is barely a Civire at all.

Pieter Tuulinen > He'd be Civirely disadvantaged, Andreus.

Andreus Ixiris > ...

Andreus Ixiris > This is why we're at war.
Alizabeth Vea
Doomheim
#122 - 2013-02-15 14:47:13 UTC
Andreus Ixiris wrote:
Alizabeth Vea wrote:
Everyone's a critic. I'll write poetry how I desire, thank you very much.

So... badly?

I'm going to go hang myself now. And wake up in a nice soft clone with no memory of the past few days. I hate you all.

Retainer of Lady Newelle and House Sarum.

"Those who step into the light shall be redeemed, the sins of their past cleansed, so that they may know salvation." -Empress Jamyl Sarum I

Virtue. Valor. Victory.
Stitcher
School of Applied Knowledge
Caldari State
#123 - 2013-02-15 15:36:30 UTC  |  Edited by: Stitcher
Andreus Ixiris wrote:
Goons lept 'pon a Tribal in Hek
But t'was tanked up with Jovian tech
"Oh no!" They cried,
"Our kill's been denied!"
As its shield bar didn't move but a speck.


The highlighted line has too few syllables.

glass houses, Andy.. Pirate

Might I suggest:

The Goons took a field trip to Hek
A Tribal bigwig for to wreck
But they wailed and they cried
When their kill was denied
By a ship fit with loaned CONCORD tech.

AKA Hambone

Author of The Deathworlders
Anabella Rella
Gradient
Electus Matari
#124 - 2013-02-15 16:41:10 UTC
Alizabeth Vea wrote:

Everyone's a critic. I'll write poetry how I desire, thank you very much.


I hope your writing's better than your fleet tactics. Oh wait...

When the world is running down, you make the best of what's still around.
Lord Xander
Amok.
Goonswarm Federation
#125 - 2013-02-17 09:21:16 UTC
we are so bad at this game Shocked