EVE Fiction

Most of you will already know those new pages or even already read them. As for others, here can they be found.

As for myself I would like to make some small suggestions and before I bomb all those talk page I though maybe come first here and talk it tru with other players and/or some immersion project members of Abraxes imself:

- The Khanid II page got from ISD Caleb Kang fantastic rework, so maybe add the page to the list of "With Inferno" articles on the Fiction Portal credits page. Reason: Many people are looking their for updates and this nice work could get lost.

- I have add a chart on all new faction histroy pages. As mention on the Talk:Modern Era of the Amarr Empire page, I think it could be a help for the wiki. I have drop a chart on all 8 history talk pages (the four Gallente ones and the four Amarr ones, see talk page of the relative page.

- I have also updated the some NPC Corporation pages (Amarr Civil Service, Amarr Trade Registry, Ministry of Assessment, Ministry of Internal Order, Ministry of War, Court Chamberlain). I have try to update those pages with the information that we got from the new pages, I also add some more links to the new pages (Modern Era of the Amarr Empire, Economy of the Amarr Empire, Demographics of the Amarr Empire, and others. But be aware I also have add some links on the description for the NPC Corps, so you the immersion team has to look of them individually and add the new links on the actual lore pages (like for example http://wiki.eveonline.com/en/wiki/Court_ChamberlainCourt Chamberlain etc).

- I have also try to upaded the Imperial Chancellor page. But their is a problem. As currently on the Government of the Amarr Empire page, in the chapter about the imperial chancellor, is mention that he "by being the overseer of the five Imperial Ministries. All five ministries report directly to the chancellor,".

I have change that line on the Imperial Chancellor page to four (Ministry of Assessment, Ministry of Information, Ministry of Internal Order, Ministry of War), because of the chart on the Amarr Emperor and the shareholder numbers of relativ NPC Corp pages.

So my suggestion on this case would be to have four ministrys (Ministry of Assessment, Ministry of Information, Ministry of Internal Order, Ministry of War) overseen by the Chancellor and two ""Departments" (Amarr Civil Service, Amarr Trade Registry) overseen by the Chamberlain.

Arguments:
First, It would give the Chamberlain some administration-power, next to the Chancellor.

Second, Amarr Civil Service page, is the Chamberlain some sort of overseer of this "Department".

Third: Currently their is just one page which uses the terms "Ministry of Civil Service", "Ministry of Trade and Commerce" and it is the Government of the Amarr Empire page. See here

https://www.google.com/webhp?hl=en&sa=N&tab=lw#hl=en&tbo=d&output=search&sclient=psy-ab&q=site:eveonline.com+%22Ministry+of+Civil+Service%22&oq=site:eveonline.com+%22Ministry+of+Civil+Service%22&gs_l=hp.12...13394.274673.1.275730.10.10.0.0.0.0.241.949.8j1j1.10.0.les%3Bernk_timediscountb..0.0...1c.1j2.VrihWJ-SYQE&psj=1&bav=on.2,or.r_gc.r_pw.r_cp.r_qf.&fp=61bde861a1032ae2&bpcl=39650382&biw=1400&bih=724

https://www.google.com/webhp?hl=en&sa=N&tab=lw#hl=en&tbo=d&output=search&sclient=psy-ab&q=site:eveonline.com+%22Ministry+of+Trade+and+Commerce%22&oq=site:eveonline.com+%22Ministry+of+Trade+and+Commerce%22&gs_l=hp.12...1587.10712.1.11373.2.2.0.0.0.0.63.125.2.2.0.les%3Bernk_timediscountb..0.0...1c.2.bECGqWxBrmA&psj=1&bav=on.2,or.r_gc.r_pw.r_cp.r_qf.&fp=61bde861a1032ae2&bpcl=39650382&biw=1400&bih=724

I think changing this page a little would be easier than changing the other pages and the Amarr Emperor chart (P.S. As I have copy & past the new information about the two "Departments" I havent use does terms: "Ministry of Civil Service", "Ministry of Trade and Commerce", see links above).

Fourth, It would be in line with the Emperor page chart again. Which is a little harder to change.

I have added your excellent timeline charts to all of the pages. Thanks for the hard work.

So much fiction, so little time.