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Talocan race backstory (updated with fan fic)

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Nathan Jameson
Grumpy Bastards
#1 - 2012-05-17 17:54:42 UTC  |  Edited by: Nathan Jameson
I'm interesting in writing some back story for the Talocan race (as it features heavily in my alliance's name and environment), but I'm not seeing a lot of established word, outside of what's represented in the following links:

http://wiki.eveonline.com/en/wiki/Arek%27Jaalan_Library#The_Talocan_and_their_Habitats
http://wiki.eveonline.com/en/wiki/Project_Pathfinder#Talocan_Civilisation:
http://wiki.eveonline.com/en/wiki/Quarantine
http://wiki.eveonline.com/en/wiki/Arek%27Jaalan:_Talocan_History
http://games.chruker.dk/eve_online/inventory_search.php?keywords=talocan

Has there been any other work done with the Talocan backstory, specifically with their culture? I don't mind heading off into uncharted territories (I have a few interesting ideas), but I want to be sure that it is uncharted.



EDIT: Following will be the rough drafts of my own works, attempting to paint my own ideas of what daily life as an ancient Talocan might have been like:

STORY 1: The Sharing.

http://www.wormholes.info

Wyke Mossari
Staner Industries
#2 - 2012-05-17 18:13:44 UTC

You could try searching the archive.
Nathan Jameson
Grumpy Bastards
#3 - 2012-05-18 04:12:58 UTC
Wyke Mossari wrote:

You could try searching the archive.


I kept up with those threads when they were still new, and they're mostly speculation revolving around the Sleepers. I'll draw on that for some inspiration, but that's not what I'm looking for.

I'm really more interested in fiction that's been composed about the Talocan, either sanctioned by CCP or otherwise...?

http://www.wormholes.info

Deceiver's Voice
Molok Subclade
#4 - 2012-05-18 04:32:46 UTC
Nathan Jameson wrote:
I kept up with those threads when they were still new, and they're mostly speculation revolving around the Sleepers. I'll draw on that for some inspiration, but that's not what I'm looking for.

I'm really more interested in fiction that's been composed about the Talocan, either sanctioned by CCP or otherwise...?

Nothing official.

If you're brave enough, there is one possible source of lore. If you read Templar One, there's hints that the Talocan were in fact Jovians (at least some of the Talocan wrecks/sites, that is). Combined with some of the in-game evidence, it's possible to work out a few possible scenarios as to what happened.

I would be surprised if the Talocan were expanded upon any time soon, but I'm also a bit weary of player attempts to fill in those gaps. Some things are better left unexplored, and I'm one that can be happy with loose ends in mysteries.

Croatoa FTW, imho.
Nathan Jameson
Grumpy Bastards
#5 - 2012-05-18 04:38:40 UTC  |  Edited by: Nathan Jameson
Deceiver's Voice wrote:
I would be surprised if the Talocan were expanded upon any time soon, but I'm also a bit weary of player attempts to fill in those gaps. Some things are better left unexplored, and I'm one that can be happy with loose ends in mysteries.

Croatoa FTW, imho.


I'm not planning to touch the "mystery" of their extinction (or whether they simply left known space, etc). I'm really just looking at creating a few snapshots of daily Talocan culture--something I can add to our website and background lore, mostly for RP.

If I come up with something more solid, I'll post it here for review. The boundaries do look vague enough to get a little creative. Lol

http://www.wormholes.info

Deceiver's Voice
Molok Subclade
#6 - 2012-05-18 04:51:43 UTC
Nathan Jameson wrote:
If I come up with something more solid, I'll post it here for review. The boundaries do look vague enough to get a little creative. Lol

A word of advice: Research. A lot. Just because it's fiction doesn't mean you can just make up anything. Blink I know you've already started down that path, but if there's one thing I've learned about writing it's that research is the most important part of making a story believable.
Nathan Jameson
Grumpy Bastards
#7 - 2012-05-18 04:56:31 UTC
Deceiver's Voice wrote:
if there's one thing I've learned about writing it's that research is the most important part of making a story believable.


Hey, that's why I'm here and asking questions. P

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Jowen Datloran
Science and Trade Institute
Caldari State
#8 - 2012-05-18 07:39:19 UTC
I have been hunting the storyline mission regarding this item (Large Crate of Talocan Station Life-Support Cores) and this (Crate of Unidentified Ancient Technology), but sadly have not found them.


They contain an interesting mention of fullerene in their designs, linking the Talocans with the Jovians and Sleepers who also use(d) this in their designs.

Mr. Science & Trade Institute, EVE Online Lorebook 

KBTRIPSTA
Bangarang Inc
#9 - 2012-05-26 03:39:31 UTC
The Talocan are a massive black hole in what we know. Templar One skips them out entirely (another reason to not consider it canon lore) since they're a total enigma right now. Seriously, we know just about *nothing* of them, other than they lived in New Eden and Anoikis at some point during the Dark Ages, and that they never had as powerful an empire in Anoikis as the Sleepers. They seem kinda 2nd class to them, but that's a whole Wall of Text of stuff to dive into.
Nathan Jameson
Grumpy Bastards
#10 - 2012-05-26 04:11:38 UTC
KBTRIPSTA wrote:
...and that they never had as powerful an empire in Anoikis as the Sleepers. They seem kinda 2nd class to them


I don't get the impression at all that they were empire builders (as proportionally few of the standing structures are Talocan) and think of them more in the terms of the "migrant culture" they are described as being. Kind of like space gypsies, or a different flavor of Thukkers.

It would make sense then that they didn't leave much behind, as they would need to be very Spartan in their technology and salvage everything they could as they went along. In fact, what we find left over from the Talocan are gutted ships and structures that have already had everything of value removed.

I think it's also very possible that the Talocan didn't actually die out, but simply travelled beyond space we currently have access to. We've only had one strong indication that any of them died out (the mysterious transmission), and even that doesn't specify the entire race or just a specific group of people.

One question that occurs to me is, why were they traveling in the first place? Did they see a journey as an intrinsic part of their culture, or were they headed home the long way around?

http://www.wormholes.info

Teinyhr
Ourumur
#11 - 2012-05-26 11:42:52 UTC
Nathan Jameson wrote:
[quote=KBTRIPSTA]
I think it's also very possible that the Talocan didn't actually die out, but simply travelled beyond space we currently have access to. We've only had one strong indication that any of them died out (the mysterious transmission), and even that doesn't specify the entire race or just a specific group of people.

One question that occurs to me is, why were they traveling in the first place? Did they see a journey as an intrinsic part of their culture, or were they headed home the long way around?


All ancient races appear to be somehow related to most the current empires, it has been revealed for example that Takmahl were once part of the Amarr Empire, and are apparent forefathers of the Blood Raiders or at least their ideology and beliefs. It's not entirely impossible that other ancient races are even splinter groups from the rest of the empires, unless this theory has been denied by Word of God before.
Only thing that kind of messes this up is that most fitting ancient races have presence in "wrong areas" - ruins of the nomadic Talocan (minmatar equivalent) are located in Caldari space, Yan Jung (technology relates to Caldari tech) in Gallente space, and Sleepers, and their tech found from Minmatar space, infact appears to be related to Jovian technology and what we know of their history.

Right, what's the point here? Well, Talocan were, or possibly are, today Minmatar, or particularly the Thukkers are their descendants. In the same vein, other ancient empires might have descendants in current empires or their splinter groups, whether they know it or not. I find it hard to believe the ancient races just died out, but might have been faced with a catastrophe of unknown severity and type.

There seems to be a cycle here, races advance too far and they get put back in their place. Recurrence of mysterious diseases appears very strong. First the presumed disease, cause of the Quarantine in wormhole space, then the Jovian disease, and today the Kyonoke Infection mentioned in the Kyonoke Pit chronicle. Each time races seem to regress further too. The humans who came through the EVE Gate seemed to be extremely advanced, capable of extraordinary feats of stellar engineering, not least the creation of the EVE Gate itself. Then the ancient races arose, and became masters of some fields, but didn't get to the level of the ancient humans. Jovians, extremely advanced to us, are probably just a pale shadow of a speck of what the more ancient humans were capable of. The current empires have advanced far, and perhaps it isn't all that far away that their time to be swatted down comes too. Seems very mass effect, doesn't it? Altough we have no idea what the Reapers are, if there is anything but the universe itself trying to get rid of the human species.

Hm. Sorry, I started rambling, and not all that much on-topic. Probably all said before by someone else too.
Roga Dracor
Gladiators of Rage
Fraternity.
#12 - 2012-05-27 14:39:42 UTC  |  Edited by: Roga Dracor
I have always held the belief that the current factions have always drawn from old factions for their ideological and cultural heritage..

My own research has found many clues that point to it as closer to the truth than many wish to entertain.. Whether from a purely RP standpoint or a personal affront to their own cultural upbringing, I won't forward an opinion... But this prejudice exists within the player base.

One example is the apparent similarities between the Eiyfer and Caldari logos, which also mimic the design of the Oruze Osobnyk.. The Caldari are also excellent saboteurs and spies, so maybe Eiyfer is a "plant" Corporation that has infiltrated a Matari Tribe..Twisted Or perhaps the Caldari and said Matari Tribe spring from the same stock..? As for the Talocan, I still deem them to be Jovians.. The Caldari and Gallente cohabited a system, a unique happenstance in the lore.. Why? Do they share a common source? Both Tau Cetan endeavors?

The lore has always maintained that ALL of us derived from stock that was primarily under the direct control of a Corporate Hegemony.. So, it is very likely the the Talocan conformed to this blueprint, too.. A faction whose technology and methodology are aimed at a specific goal or effect.. Exploring in the case of the Talocan. Expanding the field of human endeavor.. Spacers who likely maintain star travel uninterrupted by the Eve wormhole event.

If we look at the Sleepers, we find correlations to both CONCORD and NOH, as well as the other Imperial Factions and their corresponding media outlets.. The Sleepers represent the higher authority in New Eden, able to reach, monitor and manipulate the masses anywhere in the cluster.. Were the Enclave structures built before, or were they being built when the Eve Gate collapsed? The collapse of the First Jovian Empire?

Are the Talocan remains those of explorers or attackers? Which, as I predicted a long time ago, appear, with the new chron, to be jump drive capable.. Yes, my Tengu will be sporting one, soon.Blink

As soon as I can get ahold of the skillbook..

Are the Talocan, the builders of the Enclaves, or are they the remains of an attack force sent against the Enclaves? The Talocan ships wax reminiscient of the Jovian ships that triumphed at Vak' Atioth..

It's no use going back to yesterday, because I was a different person then, and it's a poor sort of memory that only works backward.

Evet Morrel
Doomheim
#13 - 2012-05-31 12:49:25 UTC  |  Edited by: Evet Morrel
+1 to the op, good luck have fun, and I look forward to reading your contribution. Perhaps your story will end up better than ccp’s. If indeed ccp isn’t in fact waiting for your story in the first place Blink You can always leave it to the canailles to quibble over any mistakes.
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There seems to be a cycle here, races advance too far and they get put back in their place. Recurrence of mysterious diseases appears very strong. First the presumed disease, cause of the Quarantine in wormhole space, then the Jovian disease, and today the Kyonoke Infection mentioned in the Kyonoke Pit chronicle. Each time races seem to regress further too. The humans who came through the EVE Gate seemed to be extremely advanced, capable of extraordinary feats of stellar engineering, not least the creation of the EVE Gate itself. Then the ancient races arose, and became masters of some fields, but didn't get to the level of the ancient humans. Jovians, extremely advanced to us, are probably just a pale shadow of a speck of what the more ancient humans were capable of. The current empires have advanced far, and perhaps it isn't all that far away that their time to be swatted down comes too. Seems very mass effect, doesn't it? Altough we have no idea what the Reapers are, if there is anything but the universe itself trying to get rid of the human species.

I was invited to a screening of Prometheus on Tuesday, meh, anyway this idea is evident there too. I’m inclined to believe it's plausible that ancient fingers of exploration may have produced all kinds of odd frontiers, as they hopped from one resource rich system to another. Perhaps the Singularity came and went. Perhaps they soured becoming introverted and isolationist to remerge after some post-human Thermidor in newly engineered bodies to look for their ancestors. Only to find each other inexplicable. What’s left for them then, unable to speak to each other? Except perhaps, yes of course - mesegination yay!
Nathan Jameson
Grumpy Bastards
#14 - 2012-06-02 01:38:14 UTC
Evet Morrel wrote:
+1 to the op, good luck have fun, and I look forward to reading your contribution. Perhaps your story will end up better than ccp’s. If indeed ccp isn’t in fact waiting for your story in the first place Blink You can always leave it to the canailles to quibble over any mistakes.


Well, it won't be for a while yet. A full time kindergarten teaching job, a 15-month-old son, and the executor position of an alliance don't leave much room for anything else. Blink I'll post some ideas later as they strike me, however.

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Aedeal
Bangarang Inc
#15 - 2012-06-02 04:59:52 UTC
The Talocan aren't the children of the Minmatar if I remember right, they come from over Caldari way? But I agree with the idea that the Talocan presence in Anoikis doesn't seem to be Empire-building style. I got a general overview of it being a resource harvesting operation, so many silos etc. I don't think the Sleepers were anything like CONCORD though. They were nowhere near the level of complexity they are currently when they moved into those wormholes, based off what we know about them from the Ani constellation. The research boom we've had over the past couple of years since we found that place, think what we could do in hundreds of years. In general, you'll have problems being any less lore-compliant than Templar One...
Roga Dracor
Gladiators of Rage
Fraternity.
#16 - 2012-06-02 20:22:13 UTC
The Talocan likely came through the Eve Gate, or maybe they found another way into New Eden.. If you examine the hinted at makeup of their enclaves, the Sleepers were very capable of maintaining a Concord style oversight of the cluster. Whether they did so, covertly or openly is still up for debate. It seems likely to me that the enclaves contain a complete genetic database of species available for study, as well as a media studio\news network capable of turning out anything, including fictional work to rival the work of NOH or GalNet..

If the "old world" was in decline, as also seems very likely, with the scarcity of resources there, Humanity might have begun a joint effort to sustain the race, the Enclaves seem to be the culmination of such a project, maybe gone horribly awry?

A "Foundation" of sorts...

It's no use going back to yesterday, because I was a different person then, and it's a poor sort of memory that only works backward.

Nathan Jameson
Grumpy Bastards
#17 - 2012-06-03 15:57:31 UTC  |  Edited by: Nathan Jameson
Since this seems to be a good a place as any to bounce ideas, here are the cultural sources I'm drawing on for inspiration for the "Old" Talocan (pre-quarantine era):

The Native Americans (in particular, the Apache) - for their social organization
The Māori from New Zealand - for their developed personal expressions of culture
The Mongols - for their successful migrant culture
The Toraja from Indonesia - for their polytheistic animism
The Aztecs - for the Nahuatl language

A keyphrase to describe the Talocan would be "advanced primitives," but, as we shall see, this is a gross simplication.

I considered drawing more heavily on the Aztecs, as the name "Talocan" itself comes from Aztec religion (Tlalocan), but I had trouble reconciling the Talocan's migrant culture with the Aztec's rather-developed civilization. For now, I'll probably just be using derivations of Nahuatl words for the Talocan "native language."

I expect this list to change in the course of my writings, but I'm interested in feedback now.

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Roga Dracor
Gladiators of Rage
Fraternity.
#18 - 2012-06-03 16:31:33 UTC  |  Edited by: Roga Dracor
I would suggest digging a little deeper into the Aztec, particularly their origin myths and their supposed birthing in Aztlan. Instead of the Apache, I would lean towards the Navajo, who were hunter\gatherers and share some linguistic similarities with the Aztec..

All this brings, once again, the Chicano into focus.. Also, the Ni Kunni myth of the water bearers who kept them alive after the closure of the Eve Gate. Who I propose to have been the Talocan.. i.e. Jovians...

And the Seven Tribes of the Aztec, why do the Jovians have such a special place in their hearts for the Matari? Blink

And incidentally, the Caldari, who once again share that symbol with Eiyfer? Where would the descendants of a migrant society settle when their migrations were curtailed? Why, all over the place...

It's no use going back to yesterday, because I was a different person then, and it's a poor sort of memory that only works backward.

Nathan Jameson
Grumpy Bastards
#19 - 2012-06-03 16:36:16 UTC
Roga Dracor wrote:
I would suggest digging a little deeper into the Aztec, particularly their origin myths and their supposed birthing in Aztlan. Instead of the Apache, I would lean towards the Navajo, who were hunter\gatherers and share some linguistic similarities with the Aztec..


Excellent! Many thanks; that's exactly the sort of information I can make use of. Cool

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Roga Dracor
Gladiators of Rage
Fraternity.
#20 - 2012-06-03 16:57:15 UTC  |  Edited by: Roga Dracor
Some further study into where the Native Americans stem from might be warranted, as well.. Land bridge, Japan, or more specifically, the Ainu. Which when delved into will bring into play your ties to the culture of the Mongols.. The Talocan were migratory and very likely, this proclivity for migration would be ingrained into their very culture..

And as our own history shows, wherever the migrants go, they leave little pieces of themselves in the culture of the territories they inhabit, often intermarrying with whatever local population exists.. A closed society breeds genetic disorders that stem from too small a gene pool.. The Amish are a case study for this trend..

It's no use going back to yesterday, because I was a different person then, and it's a poor sort of memory that only works backward.

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