My EVE

Haha, Tom, a fun piece of work!

Everything is nice and clear, and well-balanced, so fine on the technical front.

It might be a good idea to inject some variety (for it is a relatively long piece), even though I can see you were trying to project the essence of wormhole life in a comic way. There may be other repetitive activities associated with living in or visiting wormholes which would throw up suitable vocal opportunities .

The idea is sound and well-executed.

It's sometimes useful for others wanting to put something together to include brief details of what gear you used. For example, I usually list the software I use, together with a shout out for specially useful stuff or people. I add it to the SoundCloud description, but I think I might start doing it if I post here. That's all really up to you though!