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Space Riches to Space Rags
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Zeikxx Oxone
State War Academy
Caldari State
#1 - 2016-05-10 13:39:41 UTC
So, I recently took a stab at writing a narrative style story base on in game experiences with recent updates to the game. TMC enjoyed the article enough to publish it . I thought it would be fun to also try to share it with the wider eve community.

I attempted to share it on reddit since so far on TMC the article was being well received but the link and post was very quickly deleted for whatever reason. The moderators haven't answered me on what rule I had broken.

Going to try to share the article here to try to get feed back before I write my next short story. I appreciate any and all criticism and feedback. I haven't done any writing compositions like this since my early college years.

Thank you in advance.

https://www.themittani.com/content/space-riches-space-rags
Exedous Maulerant
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#2 - 2016-05-12 11:44:56 UTC
Impressive work there! However, I think you did excellent, expand the areas on the fights, I think it would make that quite intriguing... of course detail is essential. Try using names made up or not, I doubt anyone will know to be fair.

There is one thing I still don't see in the picture, add more description on the areas, moreover you! that would be the captivation line for me. I was drawn in, but it wasn't for long Smile

Keep up the good work!