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Review Needed for "Snapping..."
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Destiny Dain2
Your Destiny Corporation
#1 - 2016-02-01 06:50:32 UTC
Hello, I started a small Youtube channel called "MovieSnaps" (Movie Parody Channel). I made a pilot episode called "Snapping... Superman Returns" to get feedback on the different elements in the content, so I can make the best out of this kind of video. I started the first official episode and waiting for feedback before I add the content.

I am working on a couple channels that require some development time and I want to do a couple small channels like this that I can make content for fairly quickly.

I would be greatfull for anyone who would like to watch the video and left a comment, if you want to, on what parts were good or bad, funny or not funny. This will help me a lot for choosing what types of humor I use. Thanks in advance for checking out something you may not even enjoy, but hopefully you get a kick of a couple parts.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pSLsyJTyEdk
Bumblefck
Kerensky Initiatives
#2 - 2016-02-01 22:03:22 UTC
11 minutes and 41 seconds in total silence is a long 11 minutes and 41 seconds, indeed


Shows comedic promise, though :)

Perfection is a dish best served like wasabi .

Bumble's Space Log
Destiny Dain2
Your Destiny Corporation
#3 - 2016-02-02 02:21:48 UTC
Bumblefck wrote:
11 minutes and 41 seconds in total silence is a long 11 minutes and 41 seconds, indeed


Shows comedic promise, though :)



Thanks for taking some of your time to check it out and posting your comment.

I'll will be coming out with one of my good channels in a month maybe two. If you like shows like Everything wrong with... from CinemaSins and Honest Trailers from ScreenJunkies, you should enjoy mine. Mine will be different, do not really want to say at the moment, but lots of 3D animations and scenes from movies. Hopefully it does well.
Sturmwolke
#4 - 2016-02-02 06:11:58 UTC  |  Edited by: Sturmwolke
Too laborius, there is little genuine or clever humor involved. Now everyone has their own brand of humor I understand, but the writing is poor that I find myself wincing at the lines.
Take a look at - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0gIVK1sBup4

It's Russian guy (afaik) making animated short skits for Wold of Tank. ~2mins length (anything over 5mins is too long nowadays).
Some humor may be lost with the wide audience, however, by far, his works are generally appreciated by the WoT community (decent subscriber numbers prove this).

Why not do something similar for EVE .. anyone?
CCP would put you an altar for the community effort in helping with their branding. P
An injection of humor would be most welcome in the Serious Spaceship Business™ .

P.S. The caveat for EVE - smaller community and veteran players general apathy. It limits the subscribers.
Still, it's an idea to explore.
Destiny Dain2
Your Destiny Corporation
#5 - 2016-02-02 06:22:33 UTC
Sturmwolke wrote:
Too laborius, there is little genuine or clever humor involved. Now everyone has their own brand of humor I understand, but the writing is poor that I find myself wincing at the lines.
Take a look at - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0gIVK1sBup4

It's Russian guy (afaik) making animated short skits for Wold of Tank. ~2mins length (anything over 5mins is too long nowadays).
Some humor may be lost with the wide audience, however, by far, his works are generally appreciated by the WoT community (decent subscriber numbers prove this).

Why not do something similar for EVE - anyone?
CCP would put you an altar for the community effort in helping with their branding. P
An injection of humor would be most welcome in the Serious Spaceship Business™ .



Thanks for the review, I am doing something right now for EVE, so hopefully by the end of the summer I can develop some EVE videos, once I finish the Citadel.

If you want you can see my forum post at https://forums.eveonline.com/default.aspx?g=posts&t=425371&find=unread and see my Citadel.
Khergit Deserters
Crom's Angels
#6 - 2016-02-03 02:39:10 UTC
Comments:
-The pace of scenes needs some editing. Some flick by too quickly, so stay on screen too long.
-Agree with Bumblefck about the lack of sound. Human mind can maybe handle line drawing cartoons in full silence. But still captures of actors-- seems a little perceptually strange as you watch it.

Go man! o7
Destiny Dain2
Your Destiny Corporation
#7 - 2016-02-03 02:49:48 UTC  |  Edited by: Destiny Dain2
Khergit Deserters wrote:
Comments:
-The pace of scenes needs some editing. Some flick by too quickly, so stay on screen too long.
-Agree with Bumblefck about the lack of sound. Human mind can maybe handle line drawing cartoons in full silence. But still captures of actors-- seems a little perceptually strange as you watch it.

Go man! o7



Good comment. That is something I was wondering about, I wanted to keep it shorter but I also wanted to keep the progression of the film as well.

Thanks. O.K. everyone, lets keep it up. don't be shy. tell me what you think. Every opinion makes future episodes better and me too..
Destiny Dain2
Your Destiny Corporation
#8 - 2016-02-03 03:05:18 UTC
One thing I should mention is that this is just a pilot to see what people think of the content in the video for future episodes. I am making a bunch of these while I work on the bigger projects. I do however want it to be the best as possible for what kind of video it is, so hopefully some people enjoy some of my humor and just keep giving feedback.

Thank you guys for your feedback, out of the few views from Eve you took your time to let me know, I thank you for that.