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miiral
#14421 - 2015-11-26 10:29:30 UTC
@Crimson
Details on the coat look nice with that light, the pose is a bit wide but not so obvious on smaller portrait resolutions.
BG is okay and expression works. Don't know if zooming in would look even better. 9/10
BTW, dem lips... ;)

li'l things about Miiral...⏎
Scipio Artelius
Weaponised Vegemite
Flying Dangerous
#14422 - 2015-11-26 12:24:03 UTC
There's only ever one rating for miiral:

Miiral/10

Which is to say:

∞/10
Ralph King-Griffin
New Eden Tech Support
#14423 - 2015-11-27 01:11:53 UTC
Ah scipio, one of my current favourites.
Fantastic use of light , it's my usual complaint about most in this thread but you actually do seem to get it.

though those goggles cast too heavy of a shadow on your face where the light might otherwise do some interesting things with the plains of it.

That said the heavy cast shadow does give a certain tone to the portrait so while I'm conflicted about it it's hard to hold it against you.

Imo you are placed a tad off, you know about the rule of thirds? I'm actually just nitpicking but if you're going to offset you should move it a little more or come a little closer to the "camera".

Strong as is though , like I said, just not picking, 8.5/10.

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Shahira
Imperial Academy
Amarr Empire
#14424 - 2015-11-27 13:21:31 UTC
Ralph King-Griffin wrote:
Ah scipio, one of my current favourites.
Fantastic use of light , it's my usual complaint about most in this thread but you actually do seem to get it.

though those goggles cast too heavy of a shadow on your face where the light might otherwise do some interesting things with the plains of it.

That said the heavy cast shadow does give a certain tone to the portrait so while I'm conflicted about it it's hard to hold it against you.

Imo you are placed a tad off, you know about the rule of thirds? I'm actually just nitpicking but if you're going to offset you should move it a little more or come a little closer to the "camera".

Strong as is though , like I said, just not picking, 8.5/10.


Since you mention it.. excellent use of the rule of thirds; the center of gravity of the face falls close to the (1/3, 1/3) coordinate, and interacts with that circular background feature in an interesting way. The lighting is very good, and the character design is excellent; I can't help but see those fingers steepled together just below the frame..

10/10
Teinyhr
Ourumur
#14425 - 2015-11-27 21:14:49 UTC
You're super cute, and your character actually looks very asian - I'm assuming she's a Ni-Kunni? Frankly, I wouldn't change a thing. 10/10.
LordOdysseus
HIgh Sec Care Bears
Brothers of Tangra
#14426 - 2015-11-27 21:28:42 UTC
Yiole Gionglao
#14427 - 2015-11-27 21:50:46 UTC  |  Edited by: Yiole Gionglao
LordOdysseus wrote:
That backgorund, grrr


I too would be grumpy about that backgorund. It's larger than you! P

Now seriously, you have a interesting expression, even if it's lost in the smaller size. The best part it's the hair, it works really well with the pose and the grin. Also is an avatar very easy to identify.

But the background... huh. Will call it 7/10, maybe a solid corro background could work too. There's two reds, IIRC.

Roses are red / Violets are blue / I am an alpha / And so it's you
Namine Gremory
Garoun Investment Bank
Gallente Federation
#14428 - 2015-11-27 21:58:03 UTC
like the short hair suits the face expression

8/10
Yiole Gionglao
#14429 - 2015-11-27 22:08:01 UTC
Namine Gremory wrote:
like the short hair suits the face expression

8/10


Awww! How cute!

(looks closely)

What the hell are those staples on your lips??? Shocked

Nice features and the pose is sexy enough, displaying that cute bosom (did I said that? About a EVE avatar?). Will say 8/10 for cute, -1 for piercings it's 7/10. Also the portrait would be better with some expression.

Roses are red / Violets are blue / I am an alpha / And so it's you
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate
#14430 - 2015-11-28 01:47:17 UTC
Well done. Provocative and instantly recognizable, although my mind instantly jumps to a strapless dress rather than the nude. The over-the-shoulder gaze is distracting, I feel like it should be ahead, looking flirtatiously from under your tilted head. Right now it looks like you got distracted in the middle of a happy thought.

9/10

~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~

"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn." -Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
Ila Gant
Hedion University
Amarr Empire
#14431 - 2015-11-29 06:58:46 UTC
5 / 6
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate
#14432 - 2015-11-29 23:56:27 UTC  |  Edited by: Neph
The long, dramatic line of shadow is interesting. Find a background that doesn't totally clash with it and your lighting and you could have something going. 5/10

~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~

"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn." -Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
Poddington Bare
Black Mount Industrial
Breakpoint.
#14433 - 2015-11-30 00:09:10 UTC
Enjoying the sinister full-on fascist dress sense and pose. Dark in many senses of the word.

7/10, for the facial expression being a cross between sinster glare and constipation, due to the long range of the shot.
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate
#14434 - 2015-11-30 02:49:59 UTC
5/10, only lives up to half of Manface Missletits' legacy

~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~

"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn." -Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
Azda Ja
Native Freshfood
Minmatar Republic
#14435 - 2015-11-30 09:08:13 UTC
I like that you have themes in your pictures. I really like this one, wasn't a fan of the brown on brown stuff before, but this is quite nice. I do however prefer a more zoomed picture.

7/10. 9/10 if zoomed in more.

Grrr.
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate
#14436 - 2015-11-30 16:35:19 UTC
8/10

Better?

~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~

"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn." -Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
Azda Ja
Native Freshfood
Minmatar Republic
#14437 - 2015-11-30 17:07:44 UTC  |  Edited by: Azda Ja
Yes.

8/10. Moar zoom, and center it (like it was an hour ago but closer).

Grrr.
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate
#14438 - 2015-12-01 05:42:53 UTC
8/10

Thoughts?

~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~

"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn." -Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Itsukame-Zainou Hyperspatial Inquiries Ltd.
Arataka Research Consortium
#14439 - 2015-12-01 14:13:27 UTC
The black/grey/white scheme works great - though I think it would look perfect if your eyes looked toward the camera all creepy-like. That, or maybe matrix sunglasses P

9/10

"A City made of Dreams is built in heaven"
Nihlus
Pator Tech School
Minmatar Republic
#14440 - 2015-12-01 14:14:02 UTC  |  Edited by: Nihlus
EDIT: @Neph

8.5/10. Much improved. The character looks good in this angle and the proud pose works well with the uniform. A bit more zoom might improve it further.