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The Earth-Hypothesis: Scientifically Parsimonious

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Xiaohui
#1 - 2014-12-22 14:45:52 UTC
12.21.YC114
Location: Unknown


CRU ACTIVATED. PREPARING SYSTEMS.
...100%
RECIEVING DATA AND TELEMETRY.
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PROCESSING.
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NEW NEURAL ARCHITECTURE FOUND.
MAPPING.
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SCANNING FOR FOREIGN DATA.
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NO FOREIGN DATA FOUND.
IMPRINTING NEW NEURAL PATTERNS.
...10%...30%...50%...100%
CREATING BACKUP.
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PROCESS COMPLETE.
TERMINATING ROUTINE.
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WELCOME HOME.


The halls of the station were brightly illuminated, their white walls reflected on the smooth black floor, creating an illusion of spaciousness. Occasionally there was a door or a window to break the monotony, but the sense of medical sterility was ubiquitous. Small, saucer shaped maintenance drones, no bigger than a lapdog and matching the black and white color theme went about their business mindlessly, performing the tasks to which they had been assigned.

These drones were the only companionship of the station's sole occupant; a woman, ethnic Achura by appearance, with a face made of sharp angles but with otherwise no distinguishing features. Dressed in a grey casuals, she emerged from one of the doors and began to walk down the hallway, the faint scent of ectoplasm wafting in the wake of her passage. But this was not a new clone; the hair had grown long, and there were slight wrinkles around the edges of the lips.

This clone was in fact the original, and this capsuleer in particular had gone to great lengths to ensure that it was kept out of harm's way. She had spent a small fortune, even by capsuleer standards, researching and developing the technology for this entire affair. A covert cloaking device capable of masking an entire habitat, billions of ISK spent on researching deployable "warp beacon" probes to allow her to move the station to interstellar space; not to mention the cost of a warp drive capable of moving the station; 5 billion ISK for that project alone. But it was well worth it, for she had her privacy away from the prying eyes of others; most notably CONCORD, who she had long suspected spied on every capsuleer in existence.

She had been away for months now, but she never worried over the safety of this location. She did, however, have a lot of catching up to do. She made mental tabulations for each subject she would have to look into further; Thera. Caroline's Star. "Shattered Wormholes". A few political intrigues in Null Security space. Covert research facilities. And... ahhhh... Dr. Tukoss?

As she walked down the hallway, a small indicator on her wrist beeped, interrupting her thoughts. Pressing a button, she pulled up a holographic display, complete with a user interface she could use to issue commands and scroll through data.

STATION MAINT. UPDATE -
RESOURCING CYCLE COMPLETE.
O2 STORES REPLENISHED.
H2O STOCK FULL.
CARBON WASTE DUMPED.

The list went on and on. There was little very reason for the woman to even read it; the station was for the most part completely automated and self-sufficient. Indeed, any inefficiencies in the operation originated from the human occupant herself. Left to it's own devices, the station would maintain it's extreme orbit outside of its home system's Oort cloud, periodically sending small, nondescript drones to harvest oxygen, water, minerals, and other elements needed for operation and life support. Hidden solar stations strategically placed around the system regularly sent back fuel cells to provide an ample supply of power, and new drones were constructed as needed. One special type of drone would be needed for tonight's activities, and it had just finished production in the days prior to the woman's arrival via clone jump.

This was Home, the private sanctuary of the woman known only as "Xiaohui" on the FTL net, and today marked the occasion that she would write her most important scientific publication to date. As she walked into her spartan office and sat at her work station, she reflected on her past publications released over the previous two years.

She had written several papers regarding genetic comparisons between humans and other lifeforms in the cluster, concluding that humans of different racial classification, along with perhaps a couple of dozen other life forms, are more closely related to eachother than they are to their own types of life forms within the cluster. For example, certain trees were more closely related to humans than they were to other trees in the cluster. This suggested a shared origin of these lifeforms. She had only hinted at that conclusion in her paper, and instead only presented her findings as "curious observations", and always wrapped each paper up that "more study was needed".

Other work she had done dealt with the fossil record, and the lack of human specimens before a certain chronological threshold, about 20,000 years ago. Humans just "appear" in the record, even on planets with no fossil record other than the humans themselves. These were all published for the sole purpose of preparing the scientific community for the paper she was about to write. To a casual reader, it would appear that she came to her conclusion via her own primary and secondary research, stumbling upon the premise of her upcoming paper out of a pure scientific innocence, just going where the evidence took her. In truth, she was not really a scientist, and more so an inuitive thinker; she often came to conclusions and then had to reason backwards, filling in all the missing steps.

As she had already laid a lot of groundwork, she would be citing her previous works, as well as other names in the field of "Earthology". Mostly considered cranks by the rest of the community, she hoped that could be changed. Some might wonder why it even mattered? Regardless of where humanity came from, here they are now, moving into the future. But order to understand that future, Xiaohui maintained, you must first understand that past that led to it.
Xiaohui
#2 - 2014-12-22 14:46:17 UTC
Something significant was at play in the cluster, something that she, as a capsuleer, was in a place to notice more so than others. All signs pointed to the EVE Gate, and from the EVE Gate, to wormholes, the (probably) extinct Jove, Sleeper technology, Sansha's Nation, and the covert research facilities operated by the various pirate factions. It was a tangled, complicated web, and she only had bits and pieces to work with. But she was sure it was all related to EVE Gate. Pulling up an old fashioned hard keyboard, she began to type:

"The Earth-Hypothesis: Scientifically Parsimonious".

"The Earth-Hypothesis for the Orgin of Humanity in New Eden, henceforth referred to as 'Single-Point Origin (SPO), has long been debated within the scientific community."

"...to put the debate to rest...and put long-held baises aside..."

"Dr. Topher's work... cutting edge..."

"...fossil record on all world's distinctly lacking in human specimens before 20k YA. Furthermore, the lack of fossiled progenitors..."

"Mold Theory... failing to explain why humans are the only known interstellar lifeform to have convergently evolved in the cluster, but also the only known lifeform in the known Universe to be able to interbreed with it's convergents."

"...singular theory with the most scientific evidence in support. That a plant such as tobacco is more genetically similar to an animal (human) than it is to any plant in the cluster has stunning implications for a shared origin of both lifeforms on a heretofore undiscovered planet. Whether this planet is the aforementioned "Earth", or some other world, remains to be determined, though likely that world exists beyond the EVE Gate."

"Further research is needed, but with Syncretism and Mold Theories off the table, will no doubt reveal that the origins of humans, along with dozens of other lifeforms, are on a planet that exists on the other side of the EVE Gate, suggesting that New Eden was nothing more than a massive colonization effort of our ancestors."


The paper was strategically designed to present scatching rebuttals to both Syncretism and Mold theories while simultaneously building in planned weak points into her own argument that would prompt quick counter-arguments. In short, it was a scientitific "shots fired". If all went accordingly, within the next few months and years there would be a flurry of new research and conversation on the topic, and perhaps more sense could be made of the confusion that often marks life in the cluster.

To that end, she would have to find a way to get in touch with Dr. Tukoss.

Clicking the "SEND" button, her article would then be downloaded to her special servant drone, which would then carry it via Stargate deep into High Security space, where it would transmit the piece via fluid router and then initiate self destruct.
CCP Falcon
#3 - 2014-12-22 15:43:34 UTC
Moved to EVE Fiction.

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Xiaohui
#4 - 2014-12-22 15:45:43 UTC
Why are you moving my roleplaying to EVE Fiction?
Xiaohui
#5 - 2014-12-22 16:12:27 UTC
I'd like to know so I can avoid this in the future. As far as I can tell I didn't break any rules?
Alhira Katserna
Deep Space Exploration And Exploitation
#6 - 2014-12-22 17:02:43 UTC
Because this is the section where fictional stories about the EvE Universe belongs. Blink
Xiaohui
#7 - 2014-12-22 18:57:09 UTC
But this isn't fiction, this is in character roleplay...
Alhira Katserna
Deep Space Exploration And Exploitation
#8 - 2014-12-22 20:43:12 UTC  |  Edited by: Alhira Katserna
Without reading the full roleplay: it looks like a story. Maybe you should have mentioned at the beginning that this belongs to the roleplay of your character (i suppose from short sentences i read) and not just a story.

So either CCP Phantom looks here once again and moves it or you have to fill a petition to get it moved as the ISD in your other thread told you with the relating part of the rules here. Ugh

Edit: To not be fully ashamed i read all and it is well written. Smile
Xiaohui
#9 - 2014-12-22 21:00:33 UTC
Alhira Katserna wrote:
Without reading the full roleplay: it looks like a story.


Straight
Wyke Mossari
Staner Industries
#10 - 2014-12-22 21:28:16 UTC  |  Edited by: Wyke Mossari
It is not role playing, it is blatant god modding.
Xiaohui
#11 - 2014-12-22 21:30:10 UTC
Wyke Mossari wrote:
It is not role playing, blatant god modding.


lolwat?
Baneken
Arctic Light Inc.
Arctic Light
#12 - 2014-12-22 22:01:37 UTC
Xiaohui wrote:
Wyke Mossari wrote:
It is not role playing, blatant god modding.


lolwat?


Godmoding is what you just typed at the beginning which is you write a story and completely control it, your story leaves no room for others to participate or effect on your story.
Roleplaying in forums or in RL is written and played as a shared dialogue where others can equally participate with their characters not as a novel where your character is in center of it all and other may or may not have a side line with their characters.

So it's not that we don't like your story but it does work far better as a fictional story then as a forum RP, if you want to continue RP with it then you should think of a different approach that lets others to include their characters and their actions in the story.

There's nothing against using a story as a background just that your angle of approach was wrong.
Xiaohui
#13 - 2014-12-22 22:16:34 UTC  |  Edited by: Xiaohui
Baneken wrote:
Godmoding is what you just typed at the beginning which is you write a story and completely control it


Um, yes, I am in fact in complete control of my character and what she does.

But that's not godmoding... godmoding is when your character is all powerful and can never be hurt or fail at anything. Hence the term... god mode... ing.

Baneken wrote:
your story leaves no room for others to participate or effect on your story.


Anyone is free to reply and interact with my story and add to it (and be in complete control of their characters in doing so).

Baneken wrote:
Roleplaying in forums or in RL is written and played as a shared dialogue where others can equally participate with their characters not as a novel where your character is in center of it all and other may or may not have a side line with their characters.


Again, anyone is free to reply and interact with my story. Is your character a scientist? What does he think about my character's paper? Does he reply? Does he have his own scientific findings to write about?

I guess the problem here is "dialogue" - reading IGS it seems to be nothing but dialogue, very rarely with an environment or the character's interactions with the environment described.

Baneken wrote:
So it's not that we don't like your story but it does work far better as a fictional story then as a forum RP, if you want to continue RP with it then you should think of a different approach that lets others to include their characters and their actions in the story.


I have always roleplayed like this... this is how we RPed in Yahoo user chats before they were taken down and it's the way I roleplayed on various forums over the past decade. I have never had a problem with it. I guess the issue is that EVE does not really have a strong roleplaying community. Indeed reading the posts on IGS it seems the roleplaying is more out of context dialogue with no illustration, background, or character actions taken. This is a bit counter-intuitive, because one would think that the types of people who play EVE would have an appreciation for putting their conversations into the context of this sci-fi setting, and would have the patience of higher end roleplay.
Ibrahim Tash-Murkon
Itsukame-Zainou Hyperspatial Inquiries Ltd.
Arataka Research Consortium
#14 - 2014-12-23 03:45:01 UTC
The majority of what you've written is a story which is fiction, not RP. The text of the paper, presented as a public posting on IGS, would be RP material. Everything else was a narration not a communication.

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Xiaohui
#15 - 2014-12-23 05:19:38 UTC
Ibrahim Tash-Murkon wrote:
The majority of what you've written is a story which is fiction, not RP. The text of the paper, presented as a public posting on IGS, would be RP material. Everything else was a narration not a communication.


Ummm yeah I was narrating the actions of my character...

Apparently "RP" in EVE constitutes capsuleers just talking to eachother. Mmkay then.
Gwen Ikiryo
Alexylva Paradox
#16 - 2014-12-23 05:25:37 UTC
The IGS is intended to be a literal IC forum, rather then a general roleplay board. Treat it as something your character would be posting on in the same way that you are rather then something meta.
Xiaohui
#17 - 2014-12-23 05:31:37 UTC  |  Edited by: Xiaohui
Gwen Ikiryo wrote:
The IGS is intended to be a literal IC forum, rather then a general roleplay board. Treat it as something your character would be posting on in the same way that you are rather then something meta.


Well then they should elaborate "This is not for actual roleplay. This is just for IC chatting."

Because I went in there actually roleplaying.

You know. Emergently. Interacting with the game world, and having an effect on it.
Gwen Ikiryo
Alexylva Paradox
#18 - 2014-12-23 05:43:34 UTC  |  Edited by: Gwen Ikiryo
Roleplay in Eve has a different culture then in most MMOs and communities I've seen, which was weird for me at first, but I've gotten used to it. People tend to prefer immersion and literalism to abstraction and imagination. A more "What you see if what you get" attitude, so to speak.

You see this reflected both in the forum culture and the game itself. When possible, people like to default to the idea that what they're seeing is the totality of what's happening. Much more weight is given to in game direct action than text, people keep /emoting to a general minimum in favour of simply taking the chat interface (roughly) as it is, and, in this case, the forum is taken as a forum for Capsuleers in the context of the world itself.

This is far from absolute, but it leans much more in that direction then most places.
Xiaohui
#19 - 2014-12-23 05:57:34 UTC
Wow, I haven't RP'd like that since I was 13. Straight

Oh well. Maybe I'll just make a blog and post short "stories" there.

Bye guys!
Gwen Ikiryo
Alexylva Paradox
#20 - 2014-12-23 06:08:01 UTC  |  Edited by: Gwen Ikiryo
I should stress the "Far from absolute" part strongly. People still hold events and do really flair heavy private RP that's more in the vein of most MMOs - More so, even, in some cases, since the nature of Eve obviously requires you to use your imagination much more when doing that sort of thing, with written descriptions of all the places and so on. And people do make posts of your nature on the IGS that are still accepted and taken at face value. It's probably just the fact that there are so few and that yours had a lot of buildup before the actual part the other players can "see" ICly that confused people and got it reported/moved.

But yeah, Iit's just not the mainstream for the community like it is in most places. This is because of a number of factors - That Eve is a sandboxy game by nature and so encourages direct action, that the roleplay community sort of sprung up on it's own from people getting into the fiction early on rather than being mostly made up of older roleplayers migrating from elsewhere (leading to a originally more casual environment), and that CCP has done their best to create in game fiction to "explain" most of the things you see (including the IGS, the interface, and so on).

It's not really bad, per se. It's just a very different experience.
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