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WIP story "Project Luna"
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Aaran Barbarossa
Perkone
Caldari State
#1 - 2014-09-20 12:40:35 UTC
First ever attempt at writing a story like this (terrible grammar included). Not done yet because RL and stuff.
Google Docs "Project Luna"
Note: I have only just started reading into the fluff, so this contains a lot of lore related errors.Oops

All criticism welcome.
Vulxanis Viceroy
Offworld Trading Company
Khimi Harar
#2 - 2014-09-24 19:37:28 UTC
Aaran Barbarossa wrote:
First ever attempt at writing a story like this (terrible grammar included). Not done yet because RL and stuff.
Google Docs "Project Luna"
Note: I have only just started reading into the fluff, so this contains a lot of lore related errors.Oops

All criticism welcome.


What criticism are you looking for specifically? Or rather, what is your goal for this piece? I would also most certainly recommend checking on your grammar and spelling, as there are some glaring errors.

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