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Scipio Artelius
Weaponised Vegemite
Flying Dangerous
#12721 - 2014-08-14 04:44:21 UTC  |  Edited by: Scipio Artelius
Looking back over the last few ratings, you've received 8, 9, 9.5.

I don't know. Personally you look like you have a hard inner determination and strength, with a whole "What are you looking at" expression.

That's a lot of communication for a digital creation.

10/10
Riyria Twinpeaks
Perkone
Caldari State
#12722 - 2014-08-14 07:04:30 UTC
@Scipio Artelius:

I really like the pose and cropping. Lighting works well, too.
But I don't really know what your expression is supposed to .. well, express. Mild annoyance? Could also be just a "serious look" or maybe even slight curiosity.
I also don't think the background fits well.

4/5
Solecist Project
#12723 - 2014-08-14 15:05:00 UTC
Riyria Twinpeaks wrote:
@Scipio Artelius:

I really like the pose and cropping. Lighting works well, too.
But I don't really know what your expression is supposed to .. well, express. Mild annoyance? Could also be just a "serious look" or maybe even slight curiosity.
I also don't think the background fits well.

4/5

10/10, refuses to bang though. ;)

That ringing in your ears you're experiencing right now is the last gasping breathe of a dying inner ear as it got thoroughly PULVERISED by the point roaring over your head at supersonic speeds. - Tippia
Derrick Miles
Death Rabbit Ky Oneida
#12724 - 2014-08-14 15:53:11 UTC
Love the contrast and polarity but not a fan of the background. 9.5/10
Ariane Vikna
Second Origin
#12725 - 2014-08-14 16:28:57 UTC
Drop those glasses please...

8/10
Anslo
Scope Works
#12726 - 2014-08-14 16:29:59 UTC
Smug look kills what looks like a very well sculpted face. 7/10.

[center]-_For the Proveldtariat_/-[/center]
Solecist Project
#12727 - 2014-08-15 02:40:28 UTC
Anslo wrote:
Smug look kills what looks like a very well sculpted face. 7/10.

10/10 for the man who never changes his portrait.


Riyria Twinpeaks wrote:
@Scipio Artelius:

I really like the pose and cropping. Lighting works well, too.
But I don't really know what your expression is supposed to .. well, express. Mild annoyance? Could also be just a "serious look" or maybe even slight curiosity.
I also don't think the background fits well.

4/5
He is either looking at something in the distance he can't believe he is seeing ...
... or at someone close-up, but slightly above him (he might be sitting?), who just said something unbelieveable.

You're welcome.

That ringing in your ears you're experiencing right now is the last gasping breathe of a dying inner ear as it got thoroughly PULVERISED by the point roaring over your head at supersonic speeds. - Tippia
Senstara Nightwhisper
Tsuifuku
#12728 - 2014-08-15 08:40:00 UTC
The Avatar is very original and I like it a lot, only thing that I would quest is the shadow as it is very heavy on the right eye lol.

9.5/10
Stubnitz
Republic Military School
Minmatar Republic
#12729 - 2014-08-15 11:35:10 UTC
Nice pose, but not sure the negative space works 7/10
Anslo
Scope Works
#12730 - 2014-08-15 16:52:29 UTC
Why are you so tall? Too much focus on your shoulders bro. Sorry. 6/10.

[center]-_For the Proveldtariat_/-[/center]
Sunrise Aigele
Pemberley Enterprises
#12731 - 2014-08-15 17:00:37 UTC
Anslo: I like the contrast of warm skin tones against everything else in cool colors (including the tattoo!). Your facial expression conveys your personality perfectly. A straightforward and revealing portrait.

10/10
Indahmawar Fazmarai
#12732 - 2014-08-15 17:10:06 UTC
Sunrise Aigele wrote:


Houm... interesting experimental avatar, as it totally manages to give a retro-cartoonish feel to the portrait. Unfortunately some of the shadows spoil it, specially the neck haves a "slit throat" shadow that looks like poor texture stitching. Will call it a 9/10 out of originality, albeit the portrait itself is bland.
Anslo
Scope Works
#12733 - 2014-08-15 17:12:08 UTC
Sunrise Aigele wrote:
Anslo: I like the contrast of warm skin tones against everything else in cool colors (including the tattoo!). Your facial expression conveys your personality perfectly. A straightforward and revealing portrait.

10/10


Why thank you...wait how do you know my personality? You followed me?! WHO ARE YOU?!

Also, while some may not like how you blend in with your background there, I think the way you did it is pretty nifty. Only thing I'd do is change the lighting so we could see you a bit more. Like, your hair...is super stealthy atm hah.

8.5/10

[center]-_For the Proveldtariat_/-[/center]
Indahmawar Fazmarai
#12734 - 2014-08-15 17:28:33 UTC  |  Edited by: Indahmawar Fazmarai
Getting back my slot for rating. P
Zeta DuRaine
Has Cloning Gone Too Far
#12735 - 2014-08-15 19:30:11 UTC
ĪИDΛĤMΛѠΛŔ FΛZMΛŔΛĪ :


ƧƠ ƳƠƲ ƛƦЄ ƁƛƇƘ?
ƝƖƇЄ ƬƠ ƧЄЄ ƳƠƲ ƛƓƛƖƝ. ƳƠƲƦ ƤƠƦƬƦƛƖƬ ƖƧ ƧƬƖԼԼ ƓƦЄƛƬ, ԼƠƠƘƧ ԼƖƘЄ ƖƬ ƜƛƧ ƔЄƦƳ ƇƛƦЄƑƲԼԼƳ ƤƲƬ ƬƠƓЄƬӇЄƦ.

ƓƦЄƛƬ ƇƠԼƠƲƦƧ, ƓƦЄƛƬ ƤƠƧЄ, ƑƖƬƧ ƓƠƠƊ ƖƝƬƠ ƬӇЄ ƁƛƇƘƓƦƠƲƝƊ.

ƬӇЄ ƠƝԼƳ ƤƦƠƁԼЄM ƖƧ ƬӇƛƬ ƧӇЄ ƛƔƠƖƊƧ ЄƳЄ ƇƠƝƬƛƇƬ. ƜƠƲԼƊ ƁЄ ƧƠ MƲƇӇ ƁЄƬƬЄƦ ƖƑ ƬӇЄ ЄƳЄƧ ƜЄƦЄ ԼƠƠƘƖƝƓ ƬƠ ƬӇЄ ƧƖƊЄ ƛƝƊ ƇԼƠƧЄԼƳ ƜƛƬƇӇƖƝƓ ƬӇЄ ƁЄӇƠԼƊЄƦ.

⑨ / ①⓪

-.-
Solecist Project
#12736 - 2014-08-16 11:31:59 UTC
Zeta DuRaine wrote:
ĪИDΛĤMΛѠΛŔ FΛZMΛŔΛĪ :


ƧƠ ƳƠƲ ƛƦЄ ƁƛƇƘ?
ƝƖƇЄ ƬƠ ƧЄЄ ƳƠƲ ƛƓƛƖƝ. ƳƠƲƦ ƤƠƦƬƦƛƖƬ ƖƧ ƧƬƖԼԼ ƓƦЄƛƬ, ԼƠƠƘƧ ԼƖƘЄ ƖƬ ƜƛƧ ƔЄƦƳ ƇƛƦЄƑƲԼԼƳ ƤƲƬ ƬƠƓЄƬӇЄƦ.

ƓƦЄƛƬ ƇƠԼƠƲƦƧ, ƓƦЄƛƬ ƤƠƧЄ, ƑƖƬƧ ƓƠƠƊ ƖƝƬƠ ƬӇЄ ƁƛƇƘƓƦƠƲƝƊ.

ƬӇЄ ƠƝԼƳ ƤƦƠƁԼЄM ƖƧ ƬӇƛƬ ƧӇЄ ƛƔƠƖƊƧ ЄƳЄ ƇƠƝƬƛƇƬ. ƜƠƲԼƊ ƁЄ ƧƠ MƲƇӇ ƁЄƬƬЄƦ ƖƑ ƬӇЄ ЄƳЄƧ ƜЄƦЄ ԼƠƠƘƖƝƓ ƬƠ ƬӇЄ ƧƖƊЄ ƛƝƊ ƇԼƠƧЄԼƳ ƜƛƬƇӇƖƝƓ ƬӇЄ ƁЄӇƠԼƊЄƦ.

⑨ / ①⓪

You look better than both rain and dusette.

That ringing in your ears you're experiencing right now is the last gasping breathe of a dying inner ear as it got thoroughly PULVERISED by the point roaring over your head at supersonic speeds. - Tippia
Yiole Gionglao
#12737 - 2014-08-17 09:15:27 UTC
Solecist Project wrote:


There is negative space, and then there is crushing negative space... I would rate 8/10 for being bold and experimental, but it's so bold that the experiment has gone wrong. 8-2= 6/10, it doesn't works, not at all.

PS: try background nº 1, there is a black line on the left that visually suggests a cast shadow from a fake "corner". Some avatars aligned with it, with interesting results.

Roses are red / Violets are blue / I am an alpha / And so it's you
Jay Foucalt
Garoun Investment Bank
Gallente Federation
#12738 - 2014-08-17 11:45:07 UTC
Yiole Gionglao wrote:



You're looking great Yiole, the lighting isn't over saturated but i think you may need another light source behind you to backlight your hair and make it stand out more. (Also, if it were possible open out the aperture a bit (F2 - F2.8) to narrow the depth of field and blow out the background.) Calling it an 8/10.
Ralph King-Griffin
New Eden Tech Support
#12739 - 2014-08-17 11:51:52 UTC
5/10, fine for a head shot, well sculpted toon but lacks any personality or character .

Murderers of Negotiable Motivations

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Yiole Gionglao
#12740 - 2014-08-18 13:04:53 UTC
Ralph King-Griffin wrote:


Very nice work with the lighting and how it fits to the background. Also is easily recognizable albeit Amarran males are quite limited in their options (they all look either old and gurmpy or old and creepy P). Will say 8/10 for a simple yet competently done avatar.

Roses are red / Violets are blue / I am an alpha / And so it's you