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Ohhhh Feely Nice
Feely Good Logistics
#21 - 2014-06-14 03:36:07 UTC  |  Edited by: Ohhhh Feely Nice
Hello Jaxi,

1) Good work on the writing. Very interesting read.
2) Thank you for obliterating Silen in the way you have. I used to live there some time ago. The locals are ******** and have no idea how to protect themselves. Glad to see they are being taught a lesson.

And for the part you may not like:

3) You seem like an intelligent enough individual for me to waste my time saying this: You are following people you should be rather ashamed to be following. For one, your corporation leader is not a very intelligent individual. I'm not trying to be mean to you or to him, it just says something about you if you allow yourself to be lead by an individual with half the IQ you have. Secondly, as an intelligent individual you should know that by associating with CODE. you are associating with individuals whom for the most part have had some sort of childhood issues causing them to desire griefing other grown adults on a video game for their own amusement. If this describes you so be it, if not you should consider what it says about you that you choose to associate with such a group.

Yeeeeeeep. Call it tears if you like. I call it facts!
Jaxi Wreckful
The Conference Elite
Safety.
#22 - 2014-06-14 03:55:02 UTC  |  Edited by: Jaxi Wreckful
Ohhhh Feely Nice wrote:
Hello Jaxi,

1) Good work on the writing. Very interesting read.
2) Thank you for obliterating Silen in the way you have. I used to live there some time ago. The locals are ******** and have no idea how to protect themselves. Glad to see they are being taught a lesson.

And for the part you may not like:

3) You seem like an intelligent enough individual for me to waste my time saying this: You are following people you should be rather ashamed to be following. For one, your corporation leader is not a very intelligent individual. I'm not trying to be mean to you or to him, it just says something about you if you allow yourself to be lead by an individual with half the IQ you have. Secondly, as an intelligent individual you should know that by associating with CODE. you are associating with individuals whom for the most part have had some sort of childhood issues causing them to desire griefing other grown adults on a video game for their own amusement. If this describes you so be it, if not you should consider what it says about you that you choose to associate with such a group.

Yeeeeeeep. Call it tears if you like. I call it facts!

I appreciate the support. I will respond with a similar wall of text because i think we can both appreciate each other's opinions. I will say that it is important to keep in mind that we are playing a game and while it is fun to be a code agent in game, I can assure you, in comms and outside of the game we're all beer drinking, fun loving family men and even a few women.There will ALWAYS be a few bad apples no matter what community you have become a part of and there is no way around that.

The reason we have such a bad reputation is because of the people who forget that we are playing a video game. Death is part of the game. Can you imagine what a game like Call of Duty would be like if people were to get as toxic as they do on eve when killed? The majority of our following would just as soon gank you as help you. There have been many a time when someone have messaged me after a gank and have legitimately asked how to improve their odds or even ask to join me. Our reaction is 100% a direct reaction to yours, so if you spew filth and hate that is probably what you'll get back. I've had death threats, physical threats, people telling me they'll find me in real life and punch me right in the face. I can assure you I trolled the hell out of people who take the game that far and it's those same people who come onto the forums and submit tickets and cry about the fact that we're bullies.

Our alliance grows everyday. Do you think we just kidnap recruits? I would invite you to join me on comms anytime to just chat, vent or what ever. I love this game and it's why i'm writing about it and i'd love nothing more that to further the growth of this community by spreading knowledge and understanding.
Capt Starfox
GoonWaffe
Goonswarm Federation
#23 - 2014-06-14 08:44:08 UTC
Awesome read. I particularly liked the time you spent creating the stories for Carl and Jeff; how Carl wanted to do more, but believed he had to mine because of various reasons; money, skill, time and I got the impression the character also believed he was stuck in the Corp and couldn't/shouldn't leave. Also how their perspective changed through witnessing the majesty of ship explosions. Although, I do wish I knew more about the path these characters will choose now; You left a little bit of a cliff hanger!

Epic ending.

"THEY WILL assimilate" -This line immediately made me think of this.

The only complaint I have is it wasn't long enough. Blink

where can I get a signed copy?

Abandon all hope ye who x up in fleet
Jaxi Wreckful
The Conference Elite
Safety.
#24 - 2014-06-14 10:12:45 UTC
Capt Starfox wrote:
Awesome read. I particularly liked the time you spent creating the stories for Carl and Jeff; how Carl wanted to do more, but believed he had to mine because of various reasons; money, skill, time and I got the impression the character also believed he was stuck in the Corp and couldn't/shouldn't leave. Also how their perspective changed through witnessing the majesty of ship explosions. Although, I do wish I knew more about the path these characters will choose now; You left a little bit of a cliff hanger!

Epic ending.

"THEY WILL assimilate" -This line immediately made me think of this.

The only complaint I have is it wasn't long enough. Blink

where can I get a signed copy?

Hmm perhaps at next year's fan fest? XD

I have the opening to Vol 2. ready if you want a small tease.
Capt Starfox
GoonWaffe
Goonswarm Federation
#25 - 2014-06-15 14:30:24 UTC
I am ready for this tease.

Abandon all hope ye who x up in fleet
John E Normus
New Order Logistics
CODE.
#26 - 2014-06-15 16:46:27 UTC
Capt Starfox wrote:
I am ready for this tease.


here we go...

Between Ignorance and Wisdom
Tengu Grib
Caldari Provisions
Caldari State
#27 - 2014-06-15 19:58:44 UTC
Jaxi Fiction best fiction. Thanks for keeping me entertained at work. :)

Rabble Rabble Rabble

Praise James, Supreme Protector of High Sec.
Pepper en Daire
Summer Tramp Initiative
#28 - 2014-06-16 14:36:21 UTC
Really good read and endless potential, could loyalanon have a tattoo saying "Permit tank, best tank" lol?
Jaxi Wreckful
The Conference Elite
Safety.
#29 - 2014-06-16 18:26:53 UTC
The love is in here so strong. Big smile

Anyhow, I've decided to keep Vol. 2 under wraps until it's finished but I will still give you something to keep interest sparked.


Teaser wrote:
Vol 2. The Ghost of Uedama
DJentropy Ovaert
The Conference Elite
Safety.
#30 - 2014-06-16 21:55:56 UTC
A wonderful read! Really looking forward to volume two!
Sabriz Adoudel
Move along there is nothing here
#31 - 2014-06-17 02:17:07 UTC
This was great.

Have an internet like.

I support the New Order and CODE. alliance. www.minerbumping.com
Azov Rassau
Iron Destiny
#32 - 2014-06-17 07:41:13 UTC
Jaxi Wreckful wrote:
Teaser wrote:
Vol 2. The Ghost of Uedama


Hmm that makes me think of a red Thrasher named 'wts mining permits' warping from perch to perch until a shiny AFK pod appears...

Looking forward for more fiction!

Considering the current state of C&P, the quality and rarity of this thread certainly makes a very nice change.

Be the change you want to see in Highsec.

Anti-Ganking Fun: www.gankerjamming.com
Jaxi Wreckful
The Conference Elite
Safety.
#33 - 2014-06-17 20:08:10 UTC
DJentropy Ovaert wrote:
A wonderful read! Really looking forward to volume two!
Thanks DJ!!!!


Sabriz Adoudel wrote:
This was great.

Have an internet like.
Glad you liked it! Vol. 2 to come!

Azov Rassau wrote:
Hmm that makes me think of a red Thrasher named 'wts mining permits' warping from perch to perch until a shiny AFK pod appears...

Looking forward for more fiction!

Considering the current state of C&P, the quality and rarity of this thread certainly makes a very nice change.
You may be onto something there, sir.
VegasMirage
Blank-Space
Northern Coalition.
#34 - 2014-06-18 19:45:07 UTC
+10 well done and thank you

no more games... it's real this time!!!
Sibyyl
Garoun Investment Bank
Gallente Federation
#35 - 2014-06-18 22:53:04 UTC
Why would the CODE fellow check the maintenance report on his blasters? Wouldn't he be fitting all new blasters since his last ship was probably totaled?

Joffy Aulx-Gao for CSM. Fix links and OGB. Ban stabs from plexes. Fulfill karmic justice.
Cyran Reinhard
Ministry of War
Amarr Empire
#36 - 2014-06-18 23:52:49 UTC
Ohhhh Feely Nice wrote:
Hello Jaxi,

1) Good work on the writing. Very interesting read.
2) Thank you for obliterating Silen in the way you have. I used to live there some time ago. The locals are ******** and have no idea how to protect themselves. Glad to see they are being taught a lesson.

And for the part you may not like:

3) You seem like an intelligent enough individual for me to waste my time saying this: You are following people you should be rather ashamed to be following. For one, your corporation leader is not a very intelligent individual. I'm not trying to be mean to you or to him, it just says something about you if you allow yourself to be lead by an individual with half the IQ you have. Secondly, as an intelligent individual you should know that by associating with CODE. you are associating with individuals whom for the most part have had some sort of childhood issues causing them to desire griefing other grown adults on a video game for their own amusement. If this describes you so be it, if not you should consider what it says about you that you choose to associate with such a group.

Yeeeeeeep. Call it tears if you like. I call it facts!


Loyal does like to put on a bit of a show, but he's generally a good guy.

I'm also curious how many actual Agents and Knights you know, or if you hang out in the minerbumping channel.

Sibyyl wrote:
Why would the CODE fellow check the maintenance report on his blasters? Wouldn't he be fitting all new blasters since his last ship was probably totaled?


Because you can loot guns and reuse them. Though most people would repair them. It's likely just a narrative detail.
Jaxi Wreckful
The Conference Elite
Safety.
#37 - 2014-06-19 19:59:29 UTC
VegasMirage wrote:
+10 well done and thank you

Thank you for the kind words! Work has kept me busy and away from writing but I should have Vol. 2 out soon enough!
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