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Critique mah latest vid:

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GavinGoodrich
Perkone
Caldari State
#1 - 2014-04-13 17:25:40 UTC  |  Edited by: GavinGoodrich
http://youtu.be/cgyVhlRcdX8 (edited, final version)


Just go in without any info, from start to finish, and tell me if I got it right. Tell me what I need to tweak.

I'm still new to blender, so I'm still working on things like matching framerates so comms/sounds don't get all choppy. Got other blender tips for frapsing, put 'em here!

Comments on the youtube part's welcome as well. Thumb it! Up or down I don't care, just tell me what you think.

Haaaaaalp my head's on fire

Caius Sivaris
Dark Nexxus
S0ns Of Anarchy
#2 - 2014-04-13 17:32:27 UTC
The white background on channels makes it basically unwatchable...
GavinGoodrich
Perkone
Caldari State
#3 - 2014-04-13 17:34:23 UTC  |  Edited by: GavinGoodrich
Caius Sivaris wrote:
The white background on channels makes it basically unwatchable...


That bad, huh? *edit* Tried less colors, didn't work. Still looking for other adjustments blender offers besides full blowouts.

Haaaaaalp my head's on fire

GavinGoodrich
Perkone
Caldari State
#4 - 2014-04-13 17:48:17 UTC
Apparently you're not the only one thinking that. I'll have to redo that ASAP apparently.

Haaaaaalp my head's on fire

GavinGoodrich
Perkone
Caldari State
#5 - 2014-04-13 21:53:45 UTC
Fixed, and re-posted in the OP. Let me know what you think! This is my last version for this, but I'll take any comments/advice to future vidyas.

Haaaaaalp my head's on fire

Caius Sivaris
Dark Nexxus
S0ns Of Anarchy
#6 - 2014-04-14 00:10:54 UTC
Much better, would have liked for you to show your gang composition and a bit of story about what you did and how you stumbled on a PvEing Archon (the black space could have been used for that)

Flying wise your drone slaughtering shows a legitimate use for a Cormorant over something else, which is rarely the case.

Liked it.
GavinGoodrich
Perkone
Caldari State
#7 - 2014-04-14 02:36:44 UTC
Caius Sivaris wrote:
Much better, would have liked for you to show your gang composition and a bit of story about what you did and how you stumbled on a PvEing Archon (the black space could have been used for that)

Flying wise your drone slaughtering shows a legitimate use for a Cormorant over something else, which is rarely the case.

Liked it.


Thanks. That's something I could put in the extra black space, like blahblah vs. blahblahblah x a bajillion

Haaaaaalp my head's on fire

GavinGoodrich
Perkone
Caldari State
#8 - 2014-04-14 16:28:31 UTC
Just to clarify, wasn't a ratting carrier :D

Some people just don't read the description, but yeah that's something i can squeeze into the extra black space :D

Haaaaaalp my head's on fire