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[Blog] Taking Tangibles
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Fayral
Nano Currency
Yeet. Pray. Love.
#1 - 2013-11-21 17:47:13 UTC  |  Edited by: Fayral
Hey guys!

I recently started a blog as a way to further immerse myself in my game play. I really enjoy all aspects of eve so expect so see a wide and varied topic spread.

The first 2 posts outline my recent turn to the dark side, detailing a wormhole corp theft I pulled off.

Feedback is appreciated!

Taking Tangibles Blog
Lady Ariona
Perkone
Caldari State
#2 - 2013-11-21 18:42:30 UTC
Barring the natural annoyance at lack of good POS security mechanics and the fact that you stole from us...

Seriously. Spellcheck your blog at least before posting things. If you're going to start a blog, at least make it so it doesn't cause my eyes to be in severe pain to glance over. It doesn't take much time, it goes a long way.

Shoot, it's not even proofreading for the things that are hard to catch that is the issue. It's stuff like "i" that are common netspeak (for people who cannot type properly), but should not be in a posted medium.

Adhocrat Former Morsus Mihi pilot / E-UNI Graduate

Researcher into Sleeper and Talocan Technology and History
Fayral
Nano Currency
Yeet. Pray. Love.
#3 - 2013-11-21 19:03:10 UTC
Cool thanks for the feedback Ariona. I will go through my posts more thoroughly. This is the type of stuff I appreciate as I'm obviously not an experienced writer. Internet speak is a sticky trap to fall into.


Omega Crendraven
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#4 - 2013-11-21 19:59:42 UTC
Lady Ariona wrote:
Barring the natural annoyance at lack of good POS security mechanics and the fact that you stole from us...

Seriously. Spellcheck your blog at least before posting things. If you're going to start a blog, at least make it so it doesn't cause my eyes to be in severe pain to glance over. It doesn't take much time, it goes a long way.

Shoot, it's not even proofreading for the things that are hard to catch that is the issue. It's stuff like "i" that are common netspeak (for people who cannot type properly), but should not be in a posted medium.


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Fayral
Nano Currency
Yeet. Pray. Love.
#5 - 2013-11-28 08:13:59 UTC
New content up. Take a read.