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Pod and Planet 2013 Contest Entry - Red and Black
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Ovv Topik
Sebiestor Tribe
Minmatar Republic
#1 - 2013-10-25 18:53:57 UTC  |  Edited by: Ovv Topik
So my entry is the first chapter of a novel I'm working on.

Red and Black
Red is the blood of dieing slavers. Black is the hatred in our hearts.

o7

"Nicknack, I'm in a shoe in space, on my computer, in my house, with a cup of coffee, in't that something." - Fly Safe PopPaddi. o7

xCUSx
State War Academy
Caldari State
#2 - 2013-10-25 23:08:07 UTC
Very nice mate, keep it up :)
Ovv Topik
Sebiestor Tribe
Minmatar Republic
#3 - 2013-10-30 21:40:05 UTC
xCUSx wrote:
Very nice mate, keep it up :)

Cheers mate!

I'm writing the book with the aim of it being accessible to non players. (The finished book will have a brief forward explaining the empires, tribes and geography etc.)

Therefore any objective feedback would be much appreciated. TIA

"Nicknack, I'm in a shoe in space, on my computer, in my house, with a cup of coffee, in't that something." - Fly Safe PopPaddi. o7