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[Video] Richards Rampage
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Richard Whiteyes
A Legitimate strategy
#1 - 2011-11-04 19:24:56 UTC
Heyo, this ms my first pvp video, its not garmination, armaggedon or Ironclad, but they all started somewhere right?

linki:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qbYu0xC9Gv0

1080P :D

The fights arn't as great as half the stuff here, but imo they were fun, hope you can enjoy.

oh, and some pointers on what to do for next time would be awesome, don't be to harsh though. Cry

Hope you enjoy.

Richards Rampage PvP video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qbYu0xC9Gv0 And the second (not really as good as the first imo): Richards Revenge PvP video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UGj9F2EYbWQ
Mystical Might
Eclipse Pulsar
Fraternity.
#2 - 2011-11-04 20:51:02 UTC
Richard Whiteyes wrote:
Heyo, this ms my first pvp video, its not garmination, armaggedon or Ironclad, but they all started somewhere right?

linki:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qbYu0xC9Gv0

1080P :D

The fights arn't as great as half the stuff here, but imo they were fun, hope you can enjoy.

oh, and some pointers on what to do for next time would be awesome, don't be to harsh though. Cry

Hope you enjoy.



Nice Vid Dewd.
Shame you left FW ;P.
VR Highfive
Hayabusa Logistics.
#3 - 2011-11-04 21:35:45 UTC  |  Edited by: VR Highfive
+1 for using a Prophecy

I enjoyed watching it, overal they look like impressive fights.

I don't like the music though but hey.. that a matter of different tastes. I can turn that off ^^.

Thanx for posting

Learning solo PvP, one explosion at a time.
Richard Whiteyes
A Legitimate strategy
#4 - 2011-11-04 22:38:04 UTC
Thanks for the support!

I'll probablly dip back in at some point, seems ill be going -10 soon though :)

and the music is something I'll have to change for next time, pretty much what everyone keeps saying.

Richards Rampage PvP video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qbYu0xC9Gv0 And the second (not really as good as the first imo): Richards Revenge PvP video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UGj9F2EYbWQ
Meridith Akesia
Deep Core Mining Inc.
Caldari State
#5 - 2011-11-05 02:43:15 UTC
Pretty good for a first video. However some of the fights were quite boring (ratter killing Straight). And there were some derpy piloting moments throughout the video.

But nice attempt, keep at it and you will get better with time.
Laktos
Perkone
Caldari State
#6 - 2011-11-05 03:06:45 UTC  |  Edited by: Laktos
Ok first off, it was pretty good for a first video. A few genuinely exciting fights in there and you definitely have a lot of potential to get good.

There are a few negatives I'd like to touch on. First of all, try to keep your hud uncluttered as much as possible. Most of the video was ok, but that second fight (the rupture one) in particular was really hard to watch because you had windows covering almost the entirety of the screen. Your piloting was kinda inconsistent. Sometimes you piloted well, sometimes you did some pretty derpy things (like the prophecy fight, the way you failed to point that rupture time and time again made me facepalm lol), but you seem to be aware of most of the mistakes you made so it's not too big a deal, I'm sure you'll learn from them and won't repeat them.

There were a few clips that I think should've been left out. Killing ratters for instance, is almost never interesting to watch and I don't see any good reason that clip should've been in the video. I found the Rorqual clip pretty dull. Also the titan hotdrop didn't really need to be included. Maybe if you had managed to kill something or escaped from them it would've been ok to include. Overrall I think the video is a bit too long for the footage that's included. Personally I would've cut it down to about 15 (maybe 20) minutes and kept only the best stuff.

I know I'm probably sounding really harsh, but I'm only being so critical because I think you have a lot of potential if you can learn from your mistakes.

Overall I enjoyed it, it was a lot better of a first video than most peoples and I'm looking forward to seeing what you can do with your next video :)

Keep up the good work, there's way too few people out there soloing like you are.

And +1 for Disturbed!

P.S. Upload to eve-files first and then youtube! Much more pleasurable to view your video in full definition rather than on youtube.

Latest PVP Video: Perseverance

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ItsmeHcK1
Immortalis Inc.
Shadow Cartel
#7 - 2011-11-05 08:33:12 UTC
I, for one, welcome our new Richard overlords.

Very good start to videowhoring.
Laktos touched on the derpy moments above, so I'mma just go and say well done, keep up the good stuffs. Smile
Scorpionidae
#8 - 2011-11-05 13:03:10 UTC
DOWNLO.... Wait can't say that Sad

about to watch I will be back!!

Every Day I be Trolling
Richard Whiteyes
A Legitimate strategy
#9 - 2011-11-05 14:01:32 UTC  |  Edited by: Richard Whiteyes
Thanks for the advice laktos, the rupture one was the oldest, I've changed my overview layout from that a while ago, and your right, maybe I should have just stuck to the actual pvp footage, i'll do it next time.

The prophacy fight i was facepalming watching it back that I wasn't pointing and failing to use the drones to kill the ECM drones as well xD, but it was a really fun one, why I put it in.

thanks for being critical, good things to know and \o/ a fellow fan!

and I'll have to upload to eve-files at some point, I visted the website and got confused so didn't bother :P, the youtube is at highest quality anyway so its not so bad.

Richards Rampage PvP video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qbYu0xC9Gv0 And the second (not really as good as the first imo): Richards Revenge PvP video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UGj9F2EYbWQ
Kitty McKitty
In Praise Of Shadows
#10 - 2011-11-05 20:04:12 UTC
******* hell these forums are a bag of shite.

tl;dr:

Enjoyed watching the learning process, I am learning too and it adds interest to the vid.

Nice ship selection esp Geddon and Harb, dont see them so much after web nerf.

Would look forwards to the next one.

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