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Jandice Ymladris
Aurora Arcology
#9761 - 2013-03-11 20:58:34 UTC
Fazmarai: Really like how casual your character looks, the dress & face is well done. You also make that background work! It gives your character an extra dynamic, almost like you walk/run forward. 9/10 for you, really like it!

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Nadia Fey
Perkone
Caldari State
#9762 - 2013-03-12 04:17:28 UTC
Achura facial structure is far too round for a bowl cut.
Try something with more.... POWER AND MOTION
The eyes are a little .... Empty as well.
The jacket also doesn't match the red Avenue.

7.5/10

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Fredfredbug4
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#9763 - 2013-03-12 04:43:31 UTC  |  Edited by: Fredfredbug4
Nadia Fey wrote:
Achura facial structure is far too round for a bowl cut.
Try something with more.... POWER AND MOTION
The eyes are a little .... Empty as well.
The jacket also doesn't match the red Avenue.

7.5/10


Looks like a classy young lady. But those eyes, they stare into my soul. I need my teddy bear. 8/10

It's not necessarily the eyes themselves, just in that portrait.

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Aerethir El-Kharisti
#9764 - 2013-03-12 07:24:01 UTC
Fredfredbug4 wrote:
Nadia Fey wrote:
Achura facial structure is far too round for a bowl cut.
Try something with more.... POWER AND MOTION
The eyes are a little .... Empty as well.
The jacket also doesn't match the red Avenue.

7.5/10


Looks like a classy young lady. But those eyes, they stare into my soul. I need my teddy bear. 8/10

It's not necessarily the eyes themselves, just in that portrait.


I like it, even the extreme head turn. I like what you did with the hair and tat, but the hairs colour is out of place, it just does not work with these surroundings and light.7/10

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Liafcipe9000
Critically Preposterous
#9765 - 2013-03-12 12:55:33 UTC
too dark. you look like a floating head with no forehead. at least you don't look like you delved into a trash can.

4 / 10
Halete
Sebiestor Tribe
Minmatar Republic
#9766 - 2013-03-12 13:42:47 UTC  |  Edited by: Halete
Composition is no good - colors don't work together, there's no cohesive theme. The lighting chosen is pretty dark and the clothing / character himself are both on the darker side, combined with the distance of the shot, it just doesn't make for a very interesting portrait. Maybe you were going for dark/brooding/somber or something but it doesn't look like that, it just looks like a photographer took a bad photo.

I think one of the things that bothers me the most here is that he's stood against a light source and it's casting a shadow. You could trade the backdrop for a dark and dingy one and it'd be a marked improvement.

4/10

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Anne Books
Kaltana Industries
#9767 - 2013-03-12 15:31:56 UTC
I like the mixture of classy style and a little out of place crazy madness.
9/10
DremDorun
Republic Military School
Minmatar Republic
#9768 - 2013-03-12 16:57:59 UTC
Anne Books wrote:
I like the mixture of classy style and a little out of place crazy madness.
9/10

Oh my, you look quite delicious. The tastiest of the kaltanas and not only them without a doubt. Blink
10/10
Kristopher Rocancourt
Sebiestor Tribe
Minmatar Republic
#9769 - 2013-03-12 16:58:20 UTC  |  Edited by: Kristopher Rocancourt
bleh sniped, face tatto0s are bad tattoos, 2/10

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DremDorun
Republic Military School
Minmatar Republic
#9770 - 2013-03-12 17:42:31 UTC
Honey badger doesn't give a crap!
Honey badger goes straight for the balls!
*roundhouse kicks Kristopher in the crotch*
What's with the facial expression?
9/10
Liafcipe9000
Critically Preposterous
#9771 - 2013-03-12 17:49:19 UTC
too close to camera.
not insane enough.
6.5 / 10
Angelique Duchemin
Team Evil
#9772 - 2013-03-12 18:27:29 UTC
The red hair really brought a hairline fracture to an otherwise really good portrait.

Nadia Fey sure has been generous with the vinegar in this thread as of late...

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Caelis Boirelle
Aurora Investments
#9773 - 2013-03-12 20:01:47 UTC
Points for the bio friendly scar and cybernetic eye, although I think the lighting you've chosen obscures it slightly with the way it casts a shadow across that side of the face.

You look like you're in desperate need of a hug though.

Saede Riordan
Alexylva Paradox
#9774 - 2013-03-12 20:04:22 UTC
I like how you pull out the bright intensity light, which really highlights your character's face, and brings out the red in the jackets against the dark backdrop.

7.9/10
Anne Books
Kaltana Industries
#9775 - 2013-03-12 20:24:06 UTC
So amazing unique and exotic, I really like this one :)

10/10
Indahmawar Fazmarai
#9776 - 2013-03-12 20:35:46 UTC
Anne Books wrote:


Very interesting skin color (is that one of the new ones, or is it an old one? Please tell!) and facila trait.s Big nose, juicy lips, na dn those high contrast green eyes, they all make a very powerful face. Make up is a simple but effective choice, psoe is itneresting and lighting si eprfect... will say 9.9/10 as i don't exactly like the avatar but I recognise it is a very good one.

(Please, tell me wether your skin color is one of the old ones, or a new one...)
Anne Books
Kaltana Industries
#9777 - 2013-03-12 21:12:59 UTC
I see you go for Ishtas last look now (if I don't mix up names here^-^)
The composure along the background is interesting but the hair distorts the overall porcelain-look (if indented)
Perhaps a more sleek hairstyle would be better
9/10

To your question:
It is an old skin and very unfortunately was being removed on last char-upgrade.
I had the same on original Zoe before I made her "white"...still a little sad about it ;)
Indahmawar Fazmarai
#9778 - 2013-03-12 21:44:39 UTC
Anne Books wrote:
I see you go for Ishtas last look now (if I don't mix up names here^-^)
The composure along the background is interesting but the hair distorts the overall porcelain-look (if indented)
Perhaps a more sleek hairstyle would be better
9/10

To your question:
It is an old skin and very unfortunately was being removed on last char-upgrade.
I had the same on original Zoe before I made her "white"...still a little sad about it ;)


Ah, I knew it! Ishtanchuk's skin color also was removed, with the added offence that none of the current skins is in the red tan palette (so, according to some viking designer in iceland, 23,000 years in the future latin american people no longer belong to human race and are all extinct... Sad ).

I will consider what you say about hairstyle... the current style is what Indah used most of the time and i felt like going back to the sources after using the bangs and being like Ishtanchuk... but now I needed a pure white piece of cloth and this dress is the only one available, albeit Ish is already using it too... won't change it because it haves a lovely effect with Indah's breast size.
Fredfredbug4
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#9779 - 2013-03-13 01:58:55 UTC
Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote:
Anne Books wrote:
I see you go for Ishtas last look now (if I don't mix up names here^-^)
The composure along the background is interesting but the hair distorts the overall porcelain-look (if indented)
Perhaps a more sleek hairstyle would be better
9/10

To your question:
It is an old skin and very unfortunately was being removed on last char-upgrade.
I had the same on original Zoe before I made her "white"...still a little sad about it ;)


Ah, I knew it! Ishtanchuk's skin color also was removed, with the added offence that none of the current skins is in the red tan palette (so, according to some viking designer in iceland, 23,000 years in the future latin american people no longer belong to human race and are all extinct... Sad ).

I will consider what you say about hairstyle... the current style is what Indah used most of the time and i felt like going back to the sources after using the bangs and being like Ishtanchuk... but now I needed a pure white piece of cloth and this dress is the only one available, albeit Ish is already using it too... won't change it because it haves a lovely effect with Indah's breast size.


A good start, but the background and lighting just feels awkward and broken. 7/10

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Turei
Pator Tech School
Minmatar Republic
#9780 - 2013-03-13 04:37:22 UTC
I look at you, and get the immediate image of someone sticking their nose up at another.

The light hair with the dark eyebrows always throws me for a loop.

The angle of the neck just looks...Painful.

But hey. There're worse in the world. 5/10