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Brutor Tribe Incident

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Torrin Vakarian
Imperial Academy
Amarr Empire
#1 - 2013-01-19 12:01:09 UTC
Hey i decided on writing a chronicle just throwing this out see how it does. Im really tired so it really hasnt been refined all that well but please read and let me know what you think :)


Captain Hartur, Incident Report 147

At 0800 hrs a Rapier class Recon cruiser opened fire on us. Unfortunately they were able to escape, in the process destroying two Punisher class frigates. There were no survivors. Before they were able to escape we decrypted some communications. It fallows "routine patrols every 12 hours no more than 12 ships, combat effectiveness low. Operation Stingray is a go I repeat Operation Stingray is a go." We were able to identify this recon group as Minmatar Navy. I cannot under estimate the gravity of this situation. This is not the first Recon group we have encountered there have been three other incidents. Also the recent attacks by Minmatar pirates and Brutor nationalists have gone up considerably in the past month. I believe these are not coincidences they are all connected. The only conclusion I can make out of this is that the Minmatar is planning a full scale attack on the system. In regards with this I am requesting reinforcements to garrison this system.

End of Report 147
Torrin Vakarian
Imperial Academy
Amarr Empire
#2 - 2013-01-22 16:45:13 UTC
Hey I was wondering if you guys could leave some comments. Just tell me what you think, what you like etc.
Ckra Trald
Federal Defense Union
Gallente Federation
#3 - 2013-01-23 20:22:52 UTC
Just a bit more details. "At 0800 hrs a Rapier class Recon cruiser opened fire on us." is a bit simple, maybe something like "At 0800 Hours a Rapier Class Recon Cruiser Decloaked and started to fire its cannons on us. One punisher's shields flashed, and then collapsed, and soon exploded in a flash of blue, followed by the second Punisher. Before my Battleship could lock on, it popped a cycle of ECM and disappeared into the cosmos"

Something like that.

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