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Equal PR for empires

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Maire Gheren
Imperial Shipment
Amarr Empire
#1 - 2013-01-12 12:58:44 UTC
I noticed this looking over DUST stuff, and it bothered me.

In RP, no-one seems to be blameless in the struggles between the empires.
Right now, Gallente and Minmatar are crushing their enemies in FW. Amarr and Caldari need a bit of a boost if anything.
When I look at the descriptions of the empires, the words that are pushed the hardest for each empire make Gallente and Minmatar out as the epitome of all that is good and noble and apple pie, while portraying Caldari and Amarr as evil. "Dictatorial". "Slavers".

Amarr has been making a lot of strides toward ending slavery. We have nice people! We do good things! Really we do! We honestly arent any worse than the old British Empire.

Caldari are hard-working and independent people! They're big on collective action and the good of the many! And they're fighting for their independence!

Meanwhile, you have Gallente which is always portrayed as good and noble and wonderful. Gallente would never invade anyone! They just have.. "Humanitarian police actions" and "Occupy" planets and "Assist" them to set up "peaceful, democratic governments by the people" that somehow are always run by a Gallente representative and perfectly echo the will of the Gallente government. That's known as imperialism where i'm from..

And Minmatar is all about "reclaiming their heritage", thats fine and dandy, but they dont seem to mind being repressive and whatnot while they do it, and they seem like they're a lot more concerned with recreating their traditions than they are with, you know, feeding their people or having a coherent government system...

People like to be the good guys, and they flock to the "good" side, and i'd appreciate it if the people who wrote the descriptions for each empire would work harder to try to muddy the issue of which of the empires was which on the material that people first see.
Zol Interbottom
Blimp Requisition Services
#2 - 2013-01-12 13:12:28 UTC
What's that True Slave?

I can't hear you over all this freedom

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Danika Princip
GoonWaffe
Goonswarm Federation
#3 - 2013-01-12 13:31:21 UTC
It's pretty hard to put a positive spin on an empire who's policy is literally 'we will invade your planet and enslave your people because god told us to.'

It's all very well saying they're taking strides to end it, but there's still the whole seven hundred years of oppression for us Minmatarr, and the full third of us still in chains.
Maire Gheren
Imperial Shipment
Amarr Empire
#4 - 2013-01-12 15:04:29 UTC
Danika Princip wrote:
It's pretty hard to put a positive spin on an empire who's policy is literally 'we will invade your planet and enslave your people because god told us to.'

Minmatar is pretty good at being oppressive to its own people on occasion, and there's more to Amarr than 'lol slavery'. That'd be a bit like deciding that Australia should be described as needing to be nuked into oblivion at every possible opportunity because of their ideas about the Kyoto Protocol. It's taking a whole culture and stereotyping it by one single issue and portraying it as evil based on that, when in actuality every empire has some things about it that are admirable, and some things about it that make its enemies justifiably think they're scum. I don't want it to be "Amarr is great and wonderful!" I just want it to be portrayed as grey vs grey instead of good vs evil.
Rob Crowley
State War Academy
#5 - 2013-01-12 16:16:21 UTC
Maire Gheren wrote:
People like to be the good guys, and they flock to the "good" side

I'm pretty sure you're playing a different game than me.
Mekhana
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#6 - 2013-01-12 16:42:11 UTC
Maire Gheren wrote:
I noticed this looking over DUST stuff, and it bothered me.
Meanwhile, you have Gallente which is always portrayed as good and noble and wonderful. Gallente would never invade anyone! They just have.. "Humanitarian police actions" and "Occupy" planets and "Assist" them to set up "peaceful, democratic governments by the people" that somehow are always run by a Gallente representative and perfectly echo the will of the Gallente government. That's known as imperialism where i'm from..


Well that's because it is imperialism.

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Seriphyn Inhonores
Elusenian Cooperative
#7 - 2013-01-12 16:53:21 UTC
Mekhana wrote:
Maire Gheren wrote:
I noticed this looking over DUST stuff, and it bothered me.
Meanwhile, you have Gallente which is always portrayed as good and noble and wonderful. Gallente would never invade anyone! They just have.. "Humanitarian police actions" and "Occupy" planets and "Assist" them to set up "peaceful, democratic governments by the people" that somehow are always run by a Gallente representative and perfectly echo the will of the Gallente government. That's known as imperialism where i'm from..


Well that's because it is imperialism.


And, by extension, an invasion.

Though, you're quoting stuff that I don't believe I've seen before. Got a source? I don't doubt the 'liberation' invasion thing, but you're making **** up with the Mary Sue bit.
Maire Gheren
Imperial Shipment
Amarr Empire
#8 - 2013-01-12 17:05:35 UTC
It just seems that Amarr and Caldari are portrayed as the "bad guys" in character generation, and Gallente and Minmatar are portrayed as the "good guys". Every game that i've seen that had a "Good" side and an "Evil" side, the "evil" side was completely outnumbered. And lo and behold, we have "Winmatar", and we have Gallente celebrating owning every FW system.
But it seems like it isn't nearly as cut and dried, and if someone wants to be dashing and heroic, i'd like them to have to stop and have to make a real judgement call on where to go instead of just waffling between "Democracy" or "Freedom" and passing "Slavers" and "Dictatorial" by. Every empire should be described by a mix of virtues and flaws. "They' stand for these great things buuuut they also do this nasty awful thing.."
Seriphyn Inhonores
Elusenian Cooperative
#9 - 2013-01-12 17:09:13 UTC
Well, if you're a Western liberal, an empire built on slavery and an empire built on social Darwinism is going to be seen as "bad guys" because these belief systems are offensive to us. You are simply imposing your RL Western beliefs on the game, where only one of four faction could be considered "Western".

Also, when the Caldari won all the systems in 2009, there were lamentations about pro-Caldari bias from CCP. Your point is redundant.
Maire Gheren
Imperial Shipment
Amarr Empire
#10 - 2013-01-12 17:23:17 UTC  |  Edited by: Maire Gheren
Seriphyn Inhonores wrote:
Well, if you're a Western liberal, an empire built on slavery and an empire built on social Darwinism is going to be seen as "bad guys" because these belief systems are offensive to us..

Except that in character generation, that's pretty much the only thing that you read about them. The races get a little snippet, and there is a bias.
Quote:
The Amarr Empress rules the largest and oldest of the four empires, a vast theocracy supported by Minmatar slave labor. Amarrian citizens tend to be highly educated and fervently believe that slavery is but one step on a spiritual path toward fully embracing faith. Despite several recent setbacks, the Amarr Empire is the most stable nation and most powerful military in New Eden. Allied to the Caldari State, they wish to reclaim the Minmatar Republic.

Old, lots of education, but slaves. Okay.
Quote:
Founded on the tenets of patriotism and hard work that carried its forebears through hardships on an inhospitable homeworld, the Caldari State of today is a corporate dictatorship, led by rulers determined to return to the meritocracy. Ruthless and efficient in the boardroom and on the battlefield, the Caldari are living emblems of strength, persistence, and dignity. The Caldari are allies of the Amarr Empire and are locked in war with the Gallente Federation.

Tough, strong, driven, but dictatorial. Okay.
Quote:
Stronghold of liberty, the Gallente Federation is the only true democracy in New Eden, its diverse population producing some of the most progressive minds of the era. Pioneers of artificial intelligence, the Federation once relied on drone fleets to defend its borders and beliefs. Today, some of the bravest men and women in New Eden man Gallentean starships. The Gallente are allied with the Minmatar Republic and fight viciously against the Caldari State.

Brave and champions of liberty and democracy! And on the other hand.. wait, i'm not seeing anything to dislike in this.
Quote:
No nation in the galaxy has endured more turmoil than the Minmatar. Once a thriving tribal culture, the Minmatar were enslaved by the Amarr Empire for more than 700 years until most won their freedom in a massive rebellion. The fledgling Republic has modeling their recovery on their allies, the Gallente Federation. The Minmatar people today are resilient, ingenious, and hard-working, and will forever curse the day that Amarr ships first darkened their home skies.

Poor Minmatar to have suffered so much! And they are such awesome people! On the other hand... yeah, these guys don't have anything written here to either appeal to the blackhearted or to give the heroic pause, either.

that's really all I want, is for these to be evened out a bit. Mention the Valklears or something.
Seriphyn Inhonores
Elusenian Cooperative
#11 - 2013-01-12 17:30:31 UTC
You really can't expect introductory paragraphs to be that in-depth. When I read that, all empires are portrayed as having good qualities.

But I can tell from this that you like democracy, dislike slavery, dislike ruthlessness. What if I don't like democracy, like slavery and like ruthlessness, especially that the latter tends to get stuff done far quicker?

There wouldn't be any issue of bias at all. This is all perspective.
Maire Gheren
Imperial Shipment
Amarr Empire
#12 - 2013-01-12 18:58:23 UTC
Seriphyn Inhonores wrote:
You really can't expect introductory paragraphs to be that in-depth. When I read that, all empires are portrayed as having good qualities.
I also saw good qualities in all of them. But only two were portrayed as having bad qualities.
Quote:
But I can tell from this that you like democracy, dislike slavery, dislike ruthlessness. What if I don't like democracy, like slavery and like ruthlessness, especially that the latter tends to get stuff done far quicker?

Please list a few English-language-primary speaking countries which have a positive reaction to "Slavery" and "Dictator".

Even dictators don't want to hear the word "Dictator". It's highly loaded. Plus, it doesn't even seem to be the most accurate term available. Caldari seems to push for excellence and upward mobility within the system, and that is antithetical to dictatorship. Caldari is conformist, strict, and even authoritarian to a certain extent, but it isn't exactly a dictatorship per se.

Were it not for the Minmatar problem, Amarr's stance on slaves would barely be worth mentioning. It's not worse than any of the other dystopic stuff that's going on elsewhere that doesn't get brought up.

I didn't see any words in the Gallente description with negatives to most people. They didn't work in "Hedonistic", "Sybaritic", or "Presumptuous", for instance. And as noted, there are aspects to the Minmatar that are less than positive - just indicating what the Valklears are puts a bit of an edge on them, for instance.
Sentar Dethahal
Wohlstandsgesellschaft
#13 - 2013-01-12 19:47:52 UTC
While I agree the initial reaction to slavery is negative, that is due only to our preexisting views. Slavery in the empire is a completely different thing than that of the British Empire, or modern society.

Slavery in Amarr history, past and present, is done due to the sacred duty we are given in the form of the Reclaiming. We are supposed to spread our faith, and slavery is a piece of that process. At least the way that I understand it, slavery is intended more as a rehabilitative tool. While you can dispute that with examples of those who simply treat slavery as it is on earth, it does not change the intent and purpose of it in New Eden and the Amarr Empire.

"God named them the rightful masters of the world [20] and tasked the Amarr, through the leadership of the Amarr Emperor, with conquering the fallen people of the universe and bringing them back to His grace" quote. And later, "The Reclaiming is viewed as a sacred duty, with Amarr citizens required by God to teach and guide the other races toward the Amarr faith. Slavery is thus necessary penance for refusing to embrace God."

Remember, that slaves are not necessarily going to remain as slaves for their whole life either. At least the way I read it, proper rehabilitation is supposed to lead to the resulting freedom of the slaves.

Basically, while I know what you're getting at, I don't view this as a problem for the Empire. If anything, it should encourage a second look if someone is interested in getting deeper into the story and lore in the game. And yes, even if the Minmatar weren't existent, I do think it is an important part of the background

As far as the other empires, well sure it depends on your perspective, and the relevant subfaction, but none of them are any 'better' than the Amarr. Caldari are an authoritative regime that has a strict duty-based system, which allows for little at least public freedoms. Gallente call themselves a democracy, but there is a lot of propaganda there covering things up, I would imagine both internally and externally. As for the tribals who call themselves a republic, these are the terrorist insurrectionists in New Eden. Now is that due to my bias, maybe, but there is definitely precedence there supporting that claim. In fairness, I have not studied the other factions nearly as much as I would have liked, so I apologize if I was incorrect in anything that I said in regards to the other empires.

If you want people to see more (negative or positive) of a specific faction, they need to actually be interested in looking at it in the first place. And if they are willing to look at the lore, they will. I'm sure they can find 'negative' aspects by simply looking into the established history and lore of the different empires, so I don't think it is necessary to adjust the intro paragraphs.
Maire Gheren
Imperial Shipment
Amarr Empire
#14 - 2013-01-12 20:19:03 UTC  |  Edited by: Maire Gheren
Sentar Dethahal wrote:
As far as the other empires, well sure it depends on your perspective, and the relevant subfaction, but none of them are any 'better' than the Amarr. Caldari are an authoritative regime that has a strict duty-based system, which allows for little at least public freedoms. Gallente call themselves a democracy, but there is a lot of propaganda there covering things up, I would imagine both internally and externally. As for the tribals who call themselves a republic, these are the terrorist insurrectionists in New Eden. Now is that due to my bias, maybe, but there is definitely precedence there supporting that claim. In fairness, I have not studied the other factions nearly as much as I would have liked, so I apologize if I was incorrect in anything that I said in regards to the other empires.

Exactly my view, but I do think that those opening paragraphs should be tailored a bit to project a 'gray vs gray' outlook rather than giving an impression of two empires that are interesting and have a dark side, versus two empires that are also interesting, but which radiate fluffy bunnies, rainbows, and apple pie. A new player may only see that little bit before deciding, and afterward might not want to restart a character after they start to get into the lore.
Sentar Dethahal
Wohlstandsgesellschaft
#15 - 2013-01-12 20:29:52 UTC
Maire Gheren wrote:
Exactly my view, but I do think that those opening paragraphs should be tailored a bit to project a 'gray vs gray' outlook rather than giving an impression of two empires that are interesting and have a dark side, versus two empires that are also interesting, but which radiate fluffy bunnies, rainbows, and apple pie.

I can understand that, but the truth is that the people who care about the background are going to look into it themselves, and they will find it all out anyway.

For a single paragraph description, they do a pretty good job on describing key information on all of the empires. Even the Federation and Republic, because depending on where you live, the very words Federation and Republic suggest more freedom than State or Empire do, which could be considered bias. Really though, it's just the way the empires are, and at least personally, I like what they did with it.