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Discovered an illegally obtained file.

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kraiklyn Asatru
Sebiestor Tribe
Minmatar Republic
#1 - 2013-01-07 01:55:46 UTC
|Seized file| origin: destroyed Arch Angel cruiser in Eszur wrote:

CONCORD RESTRICTED ACCESSS
Automatic transcript of seized evidence: Holoreel
ID *********
Summary verdict: Execution.

[holoreel transcript]

[visual]
Holoreel blank cover. Written in red stencil.

"Promotional material"

[audio]

"Have you ever wanted payback? Did someone cross you and does killing them just not suffice?"

[audio and visual]

"Serpentis Entertainment division presents,
a Guardian Angels production,
A Gurista's Medical Research Holoreel."

[visual]
A man enters screen. Identity unknown, age approximately 40, possible capsuleer.
location: Clandestine medical facility. White surfaces, well maintained.

[audio: unknown man 1]

"Thanks to the scientist here at Guristas Medical Research, we are able to offer our latest, revolutionary entertainment service."

[audio and visual]

"A descent into madness!"
"A scientific study of the human psyche."


[camera scrolls]
5 males enter view. Dressed in medical garments. Ages between 30-60, 1 possible identity hit.

identity hit:
Dr. Johan Schweiss
File # 463.12356.73.
Status: Fugitive - security status -9.9

Unknown man reenters view.

[audio: unknown man 1]

"From team of medical experts that have previously provided New Eden with the newest and most successful methods of experimental surgery and information gathering techniques, have devised an effective method of behavioral correction and punishment."

[visual]
Man identified as: Dr. Johan Schweiss. extends arm, camera pans and the white wall opens in the middle and slides to the sides. A chamber is revealed. Poor lighting, contaminated walls. Rust and grime, suggesting minmatar origins. In the center a man is placed, supported by medical devices.

[classified: insufficient clearance, information withheld]

The man is obviously frightened, pupils dilated, but appears unharmed.
Unknown man reenters view.

[audio]

"What you see here, our, let's call our friend here Subject 4, is currently beginning our treatment."

[censored: duration 64 minutes]

[audio and visual]
Unknown man reenters view. The chair is currently empty.

"I know what most of you think, I've seen this before. Our 'subjects' last far longer.
This is where our new revolutionary method comes into play. Let's fast forward a little shall we."


The man subject 4 is brought into the room by 2 unidentifiable men. He resist heavily and appears in severe distress. His speech is incomprehensible rambling mixed with shouting.


[audio: unknown man 1]

"Alright gentlemen, Take 18. This time less blood and more exposed organs. Nearly there gentlemen, nearly there."

[visual]

"Disclaimer"

"This product has been deemed illegal under the Yulai convention. Possession of can result in fines and/or summary execution by CONCORD and respective local authorities."


[end transcript]
Eliniale
Co-operative Resource Extraction
#2 - 2013-01-10 17:29:12 UTC  |  Edited by: Eliniale
If an actual obtained file this should belong IGS methinks.

If fiction, not sure where it belongs. But interstingly written.

System ideas: https://forums.eveonline.com/default.aspx?g=posts&t=191928&find=unread

kraiklyn Asatru
Sebiestor Tribe
Minmatar Republic
#3 - 2013-01-11 01:25:03 UTC
Guess IGS would have been a good place to post it, it was just some idea that popped into my head while I couldn't sleep, so I wrote it down. Could have done a better job now that I look at it again.

Also I can't sleep again. :3
CCP Eterne
C C P
C C P Alliance
#4 - 2013-01-11 11:30:09 UTC
kraiklyn Asatru wrote:
Guess IGS would have been a good place to post it, it was just some idea that popped into my head while I couldn't sleep, so I wrote it down. Could have done a better job now that I look at it again.

Also I can't sleep again. :3


Write more. The best time to write is that crazy period where your mind is going nuts because you're tired but you can't get to bed. You get the most interesting stuff.

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Anslo
Scope Works
#5 - 2013-01-11 14:36:56 UTC
kraiklyn Asatru wrote:
Guess IGS would have been a good place to post it, it was just some idea that popped into my head while I couldn't sleep, so I wrote it down. Could have done a better job now that I look at it again.

Also I can't sleep again. :3


Oh crap that wasn't an actual file??? I thought you actually found it in a wreck son of a..

[center]-_For the Proveldtariat_/-[/center]

Qvar Dar'Zanar
Ministry of War
Amarr Empire
#6 - 2013-01-12 13:39:31 UTC
Nice, very nice.
AstraPardus
Earthside Mixlabs
#7 - 2013-01-12 16:36:16 UTC
CCP Eterne wrote:
kraiklyn Asatru wrote:
Guess IGS would have been a good place to post it, it was just some idea that popped into my head while I couldn't sleep, so I wrote it down. Could have done a better job now that I look at it again.

Also I can't sleep again. :3


Write more. The best time to write is that crazy period where your mind is going nuts because you're tired but you can't get to bed. You get the most interesting stuff.


I agree with this, you never know what kind of inspiration you'll get when your brain wants to dream, but can't. Or, when you are lucidly dreaming in those few moments, just before you wakeup. :3
Every time I post is Pardy time! :3