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Publius Valerius
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LowSechnaya Sholupen
#61 - 2012-12-21 14:22:11 UTC  |  Edited by: Publius Valerius
ISD Vance Siterman wrote:


Publius, I'm afraid I'm not sure what your question is, could you re-word it?


Sure no problem. Im not a native english speaker, so that is happend very often.

So first, the goal of my first post was to avoid a "bombardment of talk-pages"Big smile; but I also see now it is better to explain when I left there some comments; as well as here.

So my Question was: Is the Amarr Civil Service, Amarr Trade Registry overseen by the Imperial Chancellor or Chamberlain?


  • For the Chamberlain would speak, that currently the chart on the Amarr Emperor page shows him as overseer; as well as that the [http://wiki.eveonline.com/en/wiki/Amarr_Civil_Service]ACS lore page[/url] sees him as well as somesort of overseer. Also the old shareholder numbers would speak for the Chamberlain (with them I ones make the Chart on the Emperor page).

  • For the e Imperial Chancellor would speak, that newly made Government of the Amarr Empire page mention him as overseer. As well as the Amarr Civil Service as "Ministry of Civil Service"; and the Registry as "Ministry of Trade and Commerce"



That leaves me with some question markes. As who is the overseer? Both sides would have their pros and cons.


As I meantion before, both options are valid, and no problem to change either way. As for me... and this is just my personal optinion: As I mention on the other thread, on the Fiction subforum, currently there is just one page which uses those names: "Ministry of Civil Service"; "Ministry of Trade and Commerce" (see the google links here). So a change on this page would be easier. Another good argument, next to my laziness P, would be that this chnage, would give the Chamberlain some administration-power, next to the Chancellor.

As for this "Imperial Departments", you could later add (if someone asks); that they existed before Moral reforms.... So before the amarrian central goverment was bilded around the emperor etc.... Something like this..... So more or less that they have transformed from previous Institutions and now are overseen by the Chaberlain (but that is just my 50 cents... I know I have nothing to say).

The second option would be also valid. But for this I would have to change the Amarr Emperor page chart. So thats why Im asking. Currently I have on the talk page a finish version (no WIP), which would could be used to update the current page with all the new information of the new pages (I mainly copy & past stuff from the lore pages, references have I add too it... so you can track it back). That would be the current version. As can be seen, If the Chancellor stays as overseer I have to change some lines; thats why Im mainly ask.

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You may also ask yourself why all the question.... It is just that the Empeor page was ones made by me.... I haev a little heart on it:
http://wiki.eveonline.com/wikiEN/index.php?title=Emperor&action=history
http://wiki.eveonline.com/wikiEN/index.php?title=Emperor&oldid=101171

Edit: I wrong before a link to the Regestry not to the ACS, I corrected it. http://wiki.eveonline.com/en/wiki/Amarr_Civil_Service

I would love to have those classes ingame. See here:

http://www.colbertnation.com/the-colbert-report-videos/376566/march-07-2011/joshua-foer

Publius Valerius
AirGuard
LowSechnaya Sholupen
#62 - 2012-12-21 14:34:24 UTC  |  Edited by: Publius Valerius
As second point.... Im long thinking about doing a chart for the Fed.... I had ones a small talk with Seriphyn how a possiable Fed would look like and how a chart would look like.... But during that time we hadnt much infromation about it. And what we know was a little to complex to put it in one chart.

So may I ask you... Could you do a small drawing (with paint or something else, doesnt need to be beautyful)... with some Fed institution in the centre; and how the connect to others.

For example...
The Amarr Heir pages shows how the Heirs connect to others: See here.
The Amarr Emperor pages shows how he does it: See here.
CCP Gingers awesome Privy Council page does the same.
The Khanid King pages shows him.. or thrys it P It is made by me... so no lore page: See here. I mention those just to give an idea what my goal would be...

So It would be great you could make some quick drawings of some Fed institution in the center; and how they connect.... Like "Senate" or "President", "Federal Administration", "Cabinet" etc
I have read to new articles... I have to say they are great.... but I would dare to start a own chart, just from my interpration. So a small help would be great.Big smile



http://wiki.eveonline.com/en/wiki/Government_of_the_Gallente_Federation
http://wiki.eveonline.com/en/wiki/Democracy_in_the_Gallente_Federation
http://wiki.eveonline.com/en/wiki/Gallente_franchise_system

I would love to have those classes ingame. See here:

http://www.colbertnation.com/the-colbert-report-videos/376566/march-07-2011/joshua-foer

ISD Sheliak Mesarthim
ISD New Eden Correspondents
ISD Alliance
#63 - 2012-12-21 21:41:03 UTC
The Trade Registry and Civil Service are parts of the Imperial Bureaucracy, which is headed by the Imperial Chancellor.

The shareholder numbers of the Civil Service supports that the Imperial Chancellor is a major stakeholder there.

The shareholder numbers of the Trade Registry would suggest that it's more of a subset of the Civil Service, and thus by extension also under the influence of the Imperial Chancellor.

The Government of the Empire article then reinforces this by stating that the two are organized as ministries under the Chancellor.

The only body of the Amarr Government I can think of that the Court Chamberlain "governs" is the unmanageable mess of the Emperor Family.

The sublime and the ridiculous are often so nearly related, that it is difficult to class them separately. - Thomas Paine

ISD Sheliak Mesarthim - ISD Mercury

Myyona
Ataraxia Pharmacies
#64 - 2012-12-21 21:41:55 UTC
Really good articles.

I especially liked the one about Vuld Haupt. There were a lot of things in that article that match the way I envision Myyona as a Sebiestor. Especially the Blessing of Clones, where I know Myyona has spend countless of hours staring at her original body, that is stored in a medical facility somewhere, pondering about her existence.

Can you really live your life outside your body? And, are you really you, or are you an active copy while the real you is sleeping? Those sort of things.

If I ever had an interest of writing EVE fiction instead of exploring it, I would certainly sign up for the Mercury team.Smile

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ISD Sheliak Mesarthim
ISD New Eden Correspondents
ISD Alliance
#65 - 2012-12-21 21:49:46 UTC
Myyona wrote:

If I ever had an interest of writing EVE fiction instead of exploring it, I would certainly sign up for the Mercury team.Smile

What better way is there to explore a place than to venture into the thick mists of the Terra Incognita and fill in the blank areas on the map? Big smile

The sublime and the ridiculous are often so nearly related, that it is difficult to class them separately. - Thomas Paine

ISD Sheliak Mesarthim - ISD Mercury

Myyona
Ataraxia Pharmacies
#66 - 2012-12-21 22:17:26 UTC  |  Edited by: Myyona
Sorry. What I got in scientific approach, I lack in artistic creativity.

I prefer to stay connected with what I (can) experience within the game, not what I hope to find.

CEO - Ataraxia Pharmacies Personal Biography

ISD Archetys Traum
ISD New Eden Correspondents
ISD Alliance
#67 - 2012-12-21 23:10:04 UTC  |  Edited by: ISD Archetys Traum
Myyona wrote:

I especially liked the one about Vuld Haupt. There were a lot of things in that article that match the way I envision Myyona as a Sebiestor. Especially the Blessing of Clones, where I know Myyona has spend countless of hours staring at her original body, that is stored in a medical facility somewhere, pondering about her existence.Smile


I'm glad you liked it.

Pretty much exactly the image I had in my mind when I wrote that article. Especially in the case of the practice in the game itself of stashing frozen corpses - your own if you're lucky enough. What pause would it give you, reflecting on such a thing? What would you do with it? What meaning do you (as a character and as a player) invest in it? Hence the proxy funeral and chance for these immortal beings to touch base with the spiritual side of a life increasingly rooted in the material or, more appropriately in this case, unite the two worlds. Much like us as players having two worlds that we exist in - the importance being to find a balance or sense of connection.

Myyona wrote:
...
I prefer to stay connected with what I (can) experience within the game, not what I hope to find.


Spoken like a true Sebiestor egger :)

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Publius Valerius
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LowSechnaya Sholupen
#68 - 2012-12-21 23:46:56 UTC  |  Edited by: Publius Valerius
ISD Sheliak Mesarthim wrote:
The Trade Registry and Civil Service are parts of the Imperial Bureaucracy, which is headed by the Imperial Chancellor.

The shareholder numbers of the Civil Service supports that the Imperial Chancellor is a major stakeholder there.

The shareholder numbers of the Trade Registry would suggest that it's more of a subset of the Civil Service, and thus by extension also under the influence of the Imperial Chancellor.

The Government of the Empire article then reinforces this by stating that the two are organized as ministries under the Chancellor.

The only body of the Amarr Government I can think of that the Court Chamberlain "governs" is the unmanageable mess of the Emperor Family.


So Imperial Chancellor it is? Than you have to change the chart.. as well as the Civil service lore pageSad. As they show the Chamberlain as current overseer. I would say, just delete it (chart) in the time being (until something got overworked. Belive me it will be better that way, as it leads to less missleading, as I speak from experienceSmile).

[Troll mode on:]
As third question Smile (Im aweful):
Ehm Sould I than take out the actual ministries? I mean as I see the Chancellor than doesnt "governs" them.
Ministry of Assessment. No mention of the IC.
Ministry of Internal Order Enemy. Is the IC even mention as Enemy? And again not mention as SH.
Ministry of War. The same here no SH for the IC Sad.
[/Troll mode off Big smile (just joking)]

So as I mention.... ehm, I would than delete the chart, best and easiest way.


Edit: Now a actual question, not a troll ones, a serious question. As you mention the Emperor Family a govern by the Chamberlain, should it than get a line under the CC on the chart (I mean a future reworked chart)?
Edit 2: Ehm stupid meBig smile... I see now a different ISD has answer me (Sheliak Mesarthim) as I asked. Ehm How would the other ISD/ISDs see it and how would the "their drawing" of the chart look like (maybe a mash-up of ideas?)? P.S. As I said, still a deletion will be the best in the time being.

I would love to have those classes ingame. See here:

http://www.colbertnation.com/the-colbert-report-videos/376566/march-07-2011/joshua-foer

ISD Sheliak Mesarthim
ISD New Eden Correspondents
ISD Alliance
#69 - 2012-12-22 00:43:38 UTC  |  Edited by: ISD Sheliak Mesarthim
Publius Valerius wrote:


So Imperial Chancellor it is? Than you have to change the chart.. as well as the Civil service lore pageSad. As they show the Chamberlain as current overseer.

The Civil Service lore page doesn't say that the Chamberlain is in charge of it - just that the Chamberlain reviews all petitions to the emperor, which is one of his main duties.


Publius Valerius wrote:

[Troll mode on:]
As third question Smile (Im aweful):
Ehm Sould I than take out the actual ministries? I mean as I see the Chancellor than doesnt "governs" them.
Ministry of Assessment. No mention of the IC.
Ministry of Internal Order Enemy. Is the IC even mention as Enemy? And again not mention as SH.
Ministry of War. The same here no SH for the IC Sad.
[/Troll mode off Big smile (just joking)]

So as I mention.... ehm, I would than delete the chart, best and easiest way.
The shareholder info was removed from the wiki for a reason - it's not really a solid foundation to build lore on. The MIO considering the Chancellor a political opponent isn't that strange though - powerful intelligence agencies have historically regarded their appointed overseers as inconveniences.

Publius Valerius wrote:

Edit: Now a actual question, not a troll ones, a serious question. As you mention the Emperor Family a govern by the Chamberlain, should it than get a line under the CC on the chart (I mean a future reworked chart)?


The Emperor Family is a weird institution. Each emperor brings in his closest relatives and advisors, and they leave their house and become members of the house of the emperor. The emperor will give them offices and power and they will make themselves invaluable by political connections and facilitation of the throne's will. Many will sit in positions in the Ministries and other parts of the Bureaucracy, able to influence the direction of the entire Empire. When the next emperor comes along, those people will remain in the shadow of the throne, a force the new rulers will have to appease.

The court of the Amarr emperor will be full of people related to past rulers, a political morass and a web of complex loyalties that requires a special touch to control. Though it's not their primary duty, I imagine steering and manipulating the Emperor Family must be one of the largest tasks for the Court Chamberlain. If nothing else, it's definitely the best tool an ambitious chamberlain has to influence the Empire. Karsoth, for example, was so great at controlling the Emperor Family that he used it to steer the entire Empire. That's kinda what has led to Jamyl and Pomik Haromi weakening the Emperor Family (and, perhaps by extension, the influence of the Court Chamberlain) in favour of a more smooth-running Bureaucracy.

I don't think the Chamberlain should necessarily be listed as the superior to the Emperor Family. There have probably been as many Court Chamberlains who have been puppets of the Emperor Family as there have been Court Chamberlains able to reverse that order.

The sublime and the ridiculous are often so nearly related, that it is difficult to class them separately. - Thomas Paine

ISD Sheliak Mesarthim - ISD Mercury

Seriphyn Inhonores
Elusenian Cooperative
#70 - 2012-12-22 01:04:17 UTC
was actually thinking of trying to make a chart in paint this end myself, but i'm too terrible at it
Publius Valerius
AirGuard
LowSechnaya Sholupen
#71 - 2012-12-22 01:08:33 UTC  |  Edited by: Publius Valerius
ISD Sheliak Mesarthim wrote:
Publius Valerius wrote:


So Imperial Chancellor it is? Than you have to change the chart.. as well as the Civil service lore pageSad. As they show the Chamberlain as current overseer.

The Civil Service lore page doesn't say that the Chamberlain is in charge of it - just that the Chamberlain reviews all petitions to the emperor, which is one of his main duties.


Publius Valerius wrote:

[Troll mode on:]
As third question Smile (Im aweful):
Ehm Sould I than take out the actual ministries? I mean as I see the Chancellor than doesnt "governs" them.
Ministry of Assessment. No mention of the IC.
Ministry of Internal Order Enemy. Is the IC even mention as Enemy? And again not mention as SH.
Ministry of War. The same here no SH for the IC Sad.
[/Troll mode off Big smile (just joking)]

So as I mention.... ehm, I would than delete the chart, best and easiest way.
The shareholder info was removed from the wiki for a reason - it's not really a solid foundation to build lore on. The MIO considering the Chancellor a political opponent isn't that strange though - powerful intelligence agencies have historically regarded their appointed overseers as inconveniences.


Ehm... I wouldnt count it the last as law. Something what has to be.... but as poltical scientist Im used to inductive laws Big smile. So in my book, it wouldnt be an argument, that somewhere y, a institution x was inconvenience turing the time z; because of it has to also the case in the Empire (there will be a inductive probability, but in this case YOU would have to show it. In our case with an link were exactly this is the case in the Lore; otherwise it is more or less like saying: They see the IC as Hamburger and I have most likely the same inductive probability for thatWhat?).

As for the first part: The SH-numbers as not a "foundation to build lore" on. I agree with you on this case. And see you argument above, as actually none. Sorry, but saying, that IC is it; because of the SH-numbers wouldnt be consistent. So no argument at all... As I said before, and I said it again and again, both have a valid lore point; and both could be incluted for the same reasons/"logic behind it"....etc....

So I take a little freedom here, a say: That your comment meant than: "would be more something in your "taste", that you see the IC as overseer."

ISD Sheliak Mesarthim wrote:
Publius Valerius wrote:

Edit: Now a actual question, not a troll ones, a serious question. As you mention the Emperor Family a govern by the Chamberlain, should it than get a line under the CC on the chart (I mean a future reworked chart)?


The Emperor Family is a weird institution. Each emperor brings in his closest relatives and advisors, and they leave their house and become members of the house of the emperor. The emperor will give them offices and power and they will make themselves invaluable by political connections and facilitation of the throne's will. Many will sit in positions in the Ministries and other parts of the Bureaucracy, able to influence the direction of the entire Empire. When the next emperor comes along, those people will remain in the shadow of the throne, a force the new rulers will have to appease.

The court of the Amarr emperor will be full of people related to past rulers, a political morass and a web of complex loyalties that requires a special touch to control. Though it's not their primary duty, I imagine steering and manipulating the Emperor Family must be one of the largest tasks for the Court Chamberlain. If nothing else, it's definitely the best tool an ambitious chamberlain has to influence the Empire. Karsoth, for example, was so great at controlling the Emperor Family that he used it to steer the entire Empire. That's kinda what has led to Jamyl and Pomik Haromi weakening the Emperor Family (and, perhaps by extension, the influence of the Court Chamberlain) in favour of a more smooth-running Bureaucracy.



First part. I knowBig smile

Second part: ???? No you lost me. Could you re-word? Most likely just a language thingySmile. Ehm... I would even say because of EA, that the opposite is the case (to lazy to search now for the page numbers. Where is mention that Karsoth fears actuall loyal paladins and the people around him. Which speaks exactly in the opposite direction. etc...... I think here would be, a quick drawing the best way (with paint)..... so that I know for sure what you (and the other ISDs have in mind.. or as I said.. a mash up maybe, were all ISD put up a small drawing and from that a final ones will made?). In the meantime fly save.... and happy holidays....

Edit: Edit some misspelling from me.

I would love to have those classes ingame. See here:

http://www.colbertnation.com/the-colbert-report-videos/376566/march-07-2011/joshua-foer

Publius Valerius
AirGuard
LowSechnaya Sholupen
#72 - 2012-12-22 01:09:45 UTC
Seriphyn Inhonores wrote:
was actually thinking of trying to make a chart in paint this end myself, but i'm too terrible at it


Oh Hi Seriphyn.... *Publius waves at you and ask himself: "Why is the guy so late up?"Big smile*

I would love to have those classes ingame. See here:

http://www.colbertnation.com/the-colbert-report-videos/376566/march-07-2011/joshua-foer

Dex Nederland
Lai Dai Infinity Systems
The Fourth District
#73 - 2012-12-22 01:14:35 UTC


So, I realize that chruker.dk's database is likely a stable source for the shareholder numbers, but the question this raises for me is:

Quote:
Why have the shareholder numbers been removed from the Evelopedia pages?
Publius Valerius
AirGuard
LowSechnaya Sholupen
#74 - 2012-12-22 01:22:10 UTC  |  Edited by: Publius Valerius
Dex Nederland wrote:


So, I realize that chruker.dk's database is likely a stable source for the shareholder numbers, but the question this raises for me is:

Quote:
Why have the shareholder numbers been removed from the Evelopedia pages?


Most likely because: They really arent a solid "foundation to build lore" on (or an argumentBig smile). I have to agree on that with the ISD. Most of them are doesnt make any sence at all ( I remember... very dark that I ones talk about it with CCP Ginger and even you P).


EDIT: You see now why I have asked. Very fast, can people ask you things Big smile (where you cant answerSad). So thats why had come, on the first place. So that I dont see one day a comment: "Damn you Publius, I had seen your chart before reading the GotEA page, damn you. because of you my Char is now arrgggggg" Big smile. Thats why I also meant ... for the time being just delete it.Big smile

I would love to have those classes ingame. See here:

http://www.colbertnation.com/the-colbert-report-videos/376566/march-07-2011/joshua-foer

Ehdward Spengler
Diplomatic Immunization
#75 - 2012-12-26 16:37:35 UTC
CCP should add more lore and stories into the actual game.
Erik Finnegan
Polytechnique Gallenteenne
#76 - 2012-12-27 15:38:42 UTC
EVE lore feels so ... real.
Publius Valerius
AirGuard
LowSechnaya Sholupen
#77 - 2012-12-27 18:42:34 UTC
Erik Finnegan wrote:
EVE lore feels so ... real.


YeahBig smile I really love it, maybe it is the diversity. You have your Romanticism Versus Enlightenment, your Space Opera with its Feudal Future; in the same time some sort of Asteroid Miners and Space Western. If I could wish for something, it would be more Cyber Punk, you can never have to much Cyber Punk, never.....Cool

I would love to have those classes ingame. See here:

http://www.colbertnation.com/the-colbert-report-videos/376566/march-07-2011/joshua-foer

ISD Archetys Traum
ISD New Eden Correspondents
ISD Alliance
#78 - 2012-12-27 22:18:33 UTC
Erik Finnegan wrote:
EVE lore feels so ... real.


You were there

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oldbutfeelingyoung
Perkone
Caldari State
#79 - 2012-12-31 16:25:20 UTC
i have some fiction story for you ,its called "the Door" .
Pls show me a direction ,where i can place this story.
only need to place a link to these forums

R.S.I2014

ISD Marela Nadirones
#80 - 2013-01-17 15:10:37 UTC
oldbutfeelingyoung wrote:
i have some fiction story for you ,its called "the Door" .
Pls show me a direction ,where i can place this story.
only need to place a link to these forums



Hey there.

There's an entire forum section devoted to EVE Fiction.

You can find it at:

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