Intergalactic Summit

After my recent experience in the death of the Lord Father, some of you may remember me asking for assistance, I have been wondering about how best to serve not only my own people, but the people of New Eden as a whole. I, like many Minmatar, believe that slavery is a degradation of the human soul for both slave and Holder. It is a cancer that eats at this world, but I have also come to see in the Elders Sanctuaries and on Mir'Mulnir holdings, that freed slaves in many cases resent their freedom or simply do not understand its premise.

A recent report, from my Tribes Holdings, showed that twenty five percent of those we had freed over the age of twenty five have fled back to Amarr seeking new masters. Six percent have committed suicide and a staggering thirty two percent simply stagnate. The definition of stagnation in this report is that these people lack the ability to lead lives without strict instruction from the Tribesmen whom look over these Holdings. They require time lines from us such as when to sleep, when to wake, when to eat and so on and my daughter, who has now taken over the Tribe, has concluded that this generation is a "lost generation" that we have done more damage to then helped.

The story is entirely different if we are speaking of those whom were under the age of sixteen during the Elders Emancipation, and we are using this as a model for future slave extractions, but this still leaves us with a plan that sees us stealing children in the dead of night, and leaving their parents and elders in captivity which we fear may cause yet another set of problems in the future and we have yet to decide if this is a avenue which we wish to pursue. As of this moment we are ceasing all further incursions against the Amarr until we have figured out a plan in this respect and I know that there are many organizations which have had better results and we would ask those people to forward the results to myself or the Tribe.

Until such time as we can create a new and viable plan for those rescued from the Amarr, I have decided to peruse an avenue which is having much better success, and that is the freeing and rehabilitation of the other massive slave population in New Eden which is those held by Sansha's Nation, and thus I am announcing the Servant Brothers of New Eden. This new organization will work loosely with the Sisters of Eve in matters such as the recent Rilnais incident, however as a capsuleer organization I plan to actively engage Sansha Incursions and free those whom they have taken.

I will be actively recruiting people, of all nationality, in this endeavor and I will not allow my personal bias to interfere with this goal. I openly request that people, from all four empires whom wish to combat this threat, to join me. Mir'Mulnir Tribe will act as our Minmatar rehabilitation organization and I would ask that corps from the Amarr, Gallente and Caldari Nations step up and provide support for this cause as a Minmatar cannot teach an Amarrian who to reconnect to their roots any better than a Fox can teach a bear how to be a bear.

((OOC to the CEO's of Sansha RP corps out there, once I have this corp going I would very much like to talk over some RP events for both Eve and DUST 514 so drop me a line. All other RPers interested in a sort of United Nations sort of group, regardless of your RPed personal loyalties, drop me a line aswell.))

It took me to the fourth paragraph to figure out what you were trying to say. This is bad.

As to the content:

Cripes. You have had poor results liberating Minmatar from the Amarrians so you're going to try and free Nation slaves from Sansha? When I read this, my wife asked from the bedroom what the loud thunk was; I responded with "my head hitting the console." Nation slaves are beyond saving, they're not even human any more. Just give them a merciful death and be about your way. Cripes.

Who cares? If you don't have the patience to read four paragraphs, then there might be a larger problem at work, my dear.

On topic, however...

I personally would like to know more about the corporation itself. What are your long term plans for carrying out the goal and how do you plan to fill the ranks?

I applaud your change of focus. Sansha's Nation is a threat to all empires that needs much more effort than it currently receives.

I simply dislike ineffective communication. I read quite a bit every day (All uploads to the gal-net are loaded to me as text; if it is a video, software automatically makes a transcript.) and like what I read to be quality work.


Someone show me documented proof that anyone enslaved by Kuvakei has ever been rescued and reintegrated into society. The only example that comes to mind is the Valadeus girl, who was not only the most broken person that I have ever encountered, but she also went back to Nation! As an anarchist I appreciate the havoc that they are wreaking on the Cluster, but their goals frighten me; destroy them all, wherever you find them. Do not feel sorrie for them.

The time window for any viable rescue would be during the raid itself, or at a facility that is used just after the assualt, to finish conversion of those taken. Any attempt after that point, to my knowledge, is futile. But after that rescue, that is where I need this community to help out. I know Stron has programs, others do aswell, to rehabilitate people, but on the worlds effected by the Incursions ruins remain. I am looking for people here to help with feeding, clothing, counseling and perhaps even putting people to work after these events that they can reclaim their lives as closely as possible.

Under no circumstances should I be halfway through reading an upload and still not know what the uploader's main point is. Even the title was insufficient. I will admit that I guessed what was going on, but I credit that to my intelligence not the clarity of Muertas's words. A wonderful opening line would have been: "I've decided to fight Nation instead of the Empire and am starting a corporation and trying to rescue people from Kuvakei. Here's why:" I wrote many formal papers in both finishing school as well as the CalNav Marines officer school and in no circumstances did my thesis statement never appear in the first paragraph. It was usually in the first line.

Unfortunately for your preferences, not every system revolves around your star. People write with character and voice that they developed through their own experiences and personality, and frankly, it's rather disrespectful to claim that your way is the correct way and that no other way exists. Try digesting more than just the raw facts and get a feeling for the people you are communicating with. Respect them and in turn they will respect you, as opposed to simply ignoring you as CONCORD's grammar police.

Which by the way, is fantastically annoying. Don't like it? Don't read it. And certainly don't comment on it.

Let the rabid dogs tear each other apart, really.

I was going to let this go after Scherezad's comment and focus on the matter at hand, but since you brought it up. . . .
What you want is politeness. Had I phrased my initial comment something along the lines of "I like what you're doing, fighting Nation is good, but next time can you please be a little more clear on your intent early on?" I doubt we would be having this discussion. I, however, will not waste time with politeness. I am blunt and scathingly honest. A person will always know where they stand with me. I made a comment about Muertas's writing because this is the second time that I have seen an upload from him that wonders around before getting to the point; the first one was an unduly long upload about slavery that went on for several more pages than it needed to and as a result most people either misunderstood or ignored it. He can either take my advice or leave it, but the advice is there. And the advice was posted in accordance with my character and my voice.