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Epigene
Cordata Enterprises
#1 - 2012-09-03 13:25:54 UTC
Hi all,

I started a small fan-fiction project some time ago and have been adding chapters whenever RL permitted. This is my first such project and I take some liberties with the canon - less and less as I get more experienced, I hope but I could do with some feedback on style, direction, general commentary and such. For example, someone told me that I have the general tone set too "dark" and brutal and should throw in the occasional light episode.

Anyway, feedback is very welcome, maybe you even enjoy my foray into creative writing...

And here is the link


Fly safe

Epi

My blog
AlleyKat
The Unwanted.
#2 - 2012-09-06 15:22:48 UTC  |  Edited by: AlleyKat
Haven't finished reading yet but I am.

This space for rent.
AlleyKat
The Unwanted.
#3 - 2012-09-08 10:54:41 UTC
I think you can write, and it's better than some.

As for 'Dark' - nah, I didn't feel that, seemed fine in the New Eden fictional universe.

This space for rent.
Epigene
Cordata Enterprises
#4 - 2012-09-08 23:09:43 UTC
AlleyKat wrote:
I think you can write, and it's better than some.

As for 'Dark' - nah, I didn't feel that, seemed fine in the New Eden fictional universe.


Thanks AlleyKat, I appreciate the feedback - its fun writing this and I hope that others enjoy it as well, of course. Brings up a topic, is there a blog somewhere where EVE fanfiction links are collated? I am having a hard time finding good fiction - but I know it exists.

Btw, I added the next chapter. Explosions ;-)

Thanks and fly dangerously...

Epi

My blog
AlleyKat
The Unwanted.
#5 - 2012-09-09 11:18:32 UTC
Epigene wrote:
AlleyKat wrote:
I think you can write, and it's better than some.

As for 'Dark' - nah, I didn't feel that, seemed fine in the New Eden fictional universe.


Thanks AlleyKat, I appreciate the feedback - its fun writing this and I hope that others enjoy it as well, of course. Brings up a topic, is there a blog somewhere where EVE fanfiction links are collated? I am having a hard time finding good fiction - but I know it exists.

Btw, I added the next chapter. Explosions ;-)

Thanks and fly dangerously...

Epi


I guess people just create blogs and stuff, but yeah, harvesting community content is a good idea.

Maybe Chribba has or should put something together for this.

This space for rent.
Nashuar Attor
Rat Kings Crew
#6 - 2012-09-10 00:28:19 UTC
I quite like it. Sure there are some inconsistencies but in general I thinks it's a good read. I haven't finished but it's got me wanting to read more. Keep up the writing.

You'll have to speak up, I'm wearing a towel.
Epigene
Cordata Enterprises
#7 - 2012-09-13 01:27:27 UTC
Nashuar Attor wrote:
I quite like it. Sure there are some inconsistencies but in general I thinks it's a good read. I haven't finished but it's got me wanting to read more. Keep up the writing.



Thanks! I finished the latest chapter - but I have the draft for the next one out. Its been a fun project so far...

Epi

My blog
Alice Saki
Nocturnal Romance
Cynosural Field Theory.
#8 - 2012-09-13 09:32:20 UTC
Been through the first 2 chapters, Liking it so far

Good Work ^_^

FREEZE! Drop the LIKES AND WALK AWAY! - Currenly rebuilding gaming machine, I will Return.
smokeAjoint
Catch And Release Privateering
#9 - 2012-09-13 13:25:54 UTC
i liked it
good read

** legalize it**