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Dancing Dreams and Capsuleers

Author
Arkea Jindoi
Vaermlandsmys Inc.
#1 - 2012-05-10 14:07:46 UTC
This was originally thought up as a short story. Due to initial feedback, where readers wanted to know more about the main character, it has been developed further. However, as I am very busy IRL with other writing escapades, I’m a bit on an hiatus with this one, but I figured you guys wanted a taste. (I hope).

Rip it apart for all your worth. Any canon mistakes, point them out (I’m using Templar One as a canon source for this one). Without criticism I cannot improve.

Hope it's enjoyable.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CAI8fQm9Pd67rwpvipdiUywBsesgh34dl1pTXAm8M3I/edit