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Fictional Bio

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Remistor Callaway
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#1 - 2012-04-25 18:02:37 UTC  |  Edited by: Remistor Callaway
Hi I written my personal bio in a very fictional way. So here it is.

I apologize if you find any english mistakes(english is not my native language obviously). If you find any you can mail me in-game I'll correct it.

I tried to respect the "real" EVE background the more than I could, but again if you find any error you can point them to me.

I'll try to write something longer and that looks less like a bio soon. Hope you like it. Big smile

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Born in YC85 in the northern hemisphere of the planet Clellinon VII. Remistor Callaway grew up in a wealthy family. He was educated at the Center for Advanced Studies. He quickly developed a passion for anything not touching the ground which made a military service in the planetary Air Force likely. He was decorated several times for outstanding skill when piloting.

His father, Atiom Callaway, a successful businessman with various financial interests, mainly located in the Gallente Federation. He pressured Remistor to follow his example but he instead choose a commercial career rather than a military one as Remistor would have prefered. Kela, his mother supported his father, believing that this would provide Remistor with a better future.

The young man left the Air Force to study the market. He established his first business managing transactions in the locality. After two years his business interests had a substantial influence throughout Clellinon VII.

During the development of Talos class ship, in YC113, Atiom was hired by the Black Eagles to negotiate the procurement of the Talos platform from Duvolle Labs. On route to the Duvolle Labs head office located in the Carirgnottin system, his ship was attacked and Atiom and his wife Atiom Kela were left for dead. The official investigation determined that the attack was conducted by two Hawk class frigates, a devastating attack against a civilian ship, but nothing more was uncovered.

Broken, Remistor quickly squandered his assents and his inheritance on the hunt for these ruthless cowards. He paid: spies and mercenaries, to find out more. In the end, though intermediaries, he was able to contact a spy at the heart of the Caldari government, who discovered that the attack had been funded by the Caldari State in order to eliminate the threat posed by the Talos. Furious, Remistor sought some a way to exact revenge for the brutal slaying of his family.

He volunteer for the capsuleer program later that same year. With the little ISK that remained he bought a Velator and began his training in Clellinon. He met sympathetic capsulers who aided him in various ways. He then invested this money in the regional markets quickly gaining experience of the interplanetary markets. He then founded the Galactic Freight and Industrial Corporation, only to join the Federal Defence Union in order to fight the Caldari.

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Tiberious Thessalonia
True Slave Foundations
#2 - 2012-04-25 18:08:25 UTC
Remistor Callaway wrote:
Hi I written my personal bio in a very fictional way. So here it is.

Please apologize if you find any english mistakes(english is not my native language obviously). If you find any you can mail me in-game I'll correct it.

I tried to respect the "real" EVE background the more than I could, but again if you find any error you can point them to me.

I'll try to write something longer and that looks less like a bio soon. Hope you like it. Big smile

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Born in YC85 in the northern hemisphere of the planet Clellinon VII, Remistor Callaway has grown into a wealthy family. He did his education at the Center for Advanced Studies. He quickly developped a passion for everything that does not touch the ground and made a military service for the planetary Air Force. He was decorated several times for his outstanding piloting skills

His father, Atiom Callaway, is a businessman who managed very well and often deals with various branches of the Gallente Federation. He puts pressure on Remistor to follow his example and to choose a commercial carreer rather than military one has Remistor would like. Kela, his mother supports his father, she believes this will provide a better future to Remistor. The young man left the Air Force to study the laws of the market. He established his first business and manages local transactions to start. After two years he has influence in many regions of on Clellinon VII

During the Talos class ship development in YC113, Atiom was hired by the Black Eagles to negotiate the sale of the Talos plans to Duvolle Labs. During the trip by private transport to the Duvolle Labs head office located in the Carirgnottin system, the ship is attacked and left for dead Atiom and his wife Atiom Kela. The inquiry report determines that the attack was conducted by two Hawk class frigates using rockets, against which a civilian ship without a shield had no chance

Broken, Remistor invests almost all of his inheritance to find the killers. He pays: spies, mercenaries, investigators and more. The billions of his family are engulfed in only a few months. At the end, he discover by a spy infiltrated in the Caldari government that the attack was funded by the Caldari State in order to eliminate the threat posed by the Talos. Furious, Remistor seeks a way to avenge his family

He volunteer for the capsuler program later in the same year. With the little that remains of ISK, he have enough cash to buy a Velator and begins his training in the Clellinon system. He meets some other capsulers that supports its cause and gives him some financial help. He invested this money in the regional market and earn quickly more given his experience in the planetary marketplace. He then founded the Galactic Freight and Industrial Corporation, which is quickly forgotten as soon as Remistor left to join the Federal Defence Union in order to fight the Caldari and finally, perhaps, avenge the death of his family.

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Sounds like its good for Evelopedia!
Publius Valerius
AirGuard
LowSechnaya Sholupen
#3 - 2012-04-25 22:20:00 UTC
Tiberious Thessalonia wrote:
Remistor Callaway wrote:
Hi I written my personal bio in a very fictional way. So here it is.

Please apologize if you find any english mistakes(english is not my native language obviously). If you find any you can mail me in-game I'll correct it.

I tried to respect the "real" EVE background the more than I could, but again if you find any error you can point them to me.

I'll try to write something longer and that looks less like a bio soon. Hope you like it. Big smile

________________________________________________________________________________________________

Born in YC85 in the northern hemisphere of the planet Clellinon VII, Remistor Callaway has grown into a wealthy family. He did his education at the Center for Advanced Studies. He quickly developped a passion for everything that does not touch the ground and made a military service for the planetary Air Force. He was decorated several times for his outstanding piloting skills

His father, Atiom Callaway, is a businessman who managed very well and often deals with various branches of the Gallente Federation. He puts pressure on Remistor to follow his example and to choose a commercial carreer rather than military one has Remistor would like. Kela, his mother supports his father, she believes this will provide a better future to Remistor. The young man left the Air Force to study the laws of the market. He established his first business and manages local transactions to start. After two years he has influence in many regions of on Clellinon VII

During the Talos class ship development in YC113, Atiom was hired by the Black Eagles to negotiate the sale of the Talos plans to Duvolle Labs. During the trip by private transport to the Duvolle Labs head office located in the Carirgnottin system, the ship is attacked and left for dead Atiom and his wife Atiom Kela. The inquiry report determines that the attack was conducted by two Hawk class frigates using rockets, against which a civilian ship without a shield had no chance

Broken, Remistor invests almost all of his inheritance to find the killers. He pays: spies, mercenaries, investigators and more. The billions of his family are engulfed in only a few months. At the end, he discover by a spy infiltrated in the Caldari government that the attack was funded by the Caldari State in order to eliminate the threat posed by the Talos. Furious, Remistor seeks a way to avenge his family

He volunteer for the capsuler program later in the same year. With the little that remains of ISK, he have enough cash to buy a Velator and begins his training in the Clellinon system. He meets some other capsulers that supports its cause and gives him some financial help. He invested this money in the regional market and earn quickly more given his experience in the planetary marketplace. He then founded the Galactic Freight and Industrial Corporation, which is quickly forgotten as soon as Remistor left to join the Federal Defence Union in order to fight the Caldari and finally, perhaps, avenge the death of his family.

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Sounds like its good for Evelopedia!


Sound really good... so yes! Put it on the pedia Arrowsee here.

I would love to have those classes ingame. See here:

http://www.colbertnation.com/the-colbert-report-videos/376566/march-07-2011/joshua-foer

Remistor Callaway
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#4 - 2012-05-02 14:03:16 UTC
Some mistakes corrected, new syntax in some sentences.

A huge thanks to Evet Morrel for the help :)