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[Fan Fiction] Metempsychosis
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Judas II
Dark-Rising
Wrecking Machine.
#1 - 2015-01-10 12:51:16 UTC
Hello My EVE!
I've written a fan fiction story I would like to share with you guys.

Fan Fiction: Metempsychosis
Metempsychosis follows the tale of the narrator cruising among the stars in search for a mysterious capsuleer named Sideryn.

The work is too large to post in a thread or blog thus for your ease I've uploaded a PDF you can download here:
http://www.dark-rising.co.uk/METEMPSYCHOSIS.pdf

This is my second EVE related fan fiction and I hope you like it. As ever, I would greatly appreciate any feedback. Happy reading!

The story itself is largely build around CCP's lore for EVE but I took the liberty to build upon that and nearly all names, places and characters can be looked up in-game.
Example screenshot:
http://i.imgur.com/A3rxVaj.png

Quote:
Memory Log 100.42 RAL
In a world where life no longer more has value, would the dead have a price? The Veschens documents never truly explained what happened with Axroth after the experiment; Yomir Veschens said the Reborn have been dead since their birth. How appropriate, I thought, that the only consorts on this journey are a migraine and the bootlegged documents written by a mad man.

Watch my videos at https://www.youtube.com/user/JudasIIEVEOnline
Miles Parabellum
Zealots of Bob
#2 - 2015-01-12 14:11:55 UTC
Read the first couple of pages.
Generally your story is well worded and interesting. I'll see if I can find the time to read it all.
Good start, though. Just thought you might like the feedback :)
Judas II
Dark-Rising
Wrecking Machine.
#3 - 2015-01-12 20:48:45 UTC
Glad you like it thus far. I don't get a lot of feedback, so yeah, thank you :)

Watch my videos at https://www.youtube.com/user/JudasIIEVEOnline
Jim Jams
Perkone
Caldari State
#4 - 2015-01-13 00:18:55 UTC
I'm about half way through.
Love the memory logs :-)
Thumbs up!
Judas II
Dark-Rising
Wrecking Machine.
#5 - 2015-01-16 19:13:45 UTC
Jim Jams wrote:
I'm about half way through.
Love the memory logs :-)
Thumbs up!


Thanks, yeah the memory logs, figured it would be a nice touch to break the story

Watch my videos at https://www.youtube.com/user/JudasIIEVEOnline