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Renegade - [Solo PvP]*
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Andrew Curtin
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#1 - 2015-02-11 04:11:36 UTC
Renegade
Solo PVP, Solo PVP w/ links.

Mostly new footage, mixed in with some oldies. Hope you enjoy!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uF4xWQt0aVo


Ships:
Crusader
Taranis
Cynabal
Sacrilege
Navy Slicer
Claw
Navy Omen
Sleipnir
Absolution
Vagabond
Navy Comet
Atron
Raptor
Orthrus
Nightmare
Vargur
Typhoon Fleet Issue
Whiptail


Music:
Celldweller - Solaris
Thousand Foot Krutch - Courtesy Call (Rui da Silva Remix)
Henry Jackman(X-Men First Class Soundtrack - Magneto
Nero - Me & You
Initial D OST – Champion
In This Moment - Big Bad Wolf
Redbone - Come and Get Your Love

ISK/Ship donations always welcome

***This is my second video.. I had posted one ages ago that was pretty well received. It was flagged for music copyright so I removed it.


SkyFlyer
The Last Hope
#2 - 2015-02-11 10:07:06 UTC
Meh Video I think, only thing worth watching is the frigs (no idea if thats true)

Skipped through all of the Frig Parts cause that ain't my thing but the Nomen/Cynabal clips I can't really comment on either but anyway let's be constructive:

The Sleipnir clip was tense, but at the end you could have turned your MWD off and saved your signature a bit atleast(still woulda died)....
First Abso clip I wouldn't have bothered putting in tbh , you kill a Ferox and that's it while your Tank isn't even struggling,
Same as above really with the Vaga/Apoc Clip i actually thought that was like a waste of your own time editing it just for a 20 second(if even) clip...
Vagabond clip at around 15 minutes, its like 10 seconds long and shows not even manual pilotting seems a bit useless :S
Absolution clip at around 19 minutes(kill a deimos) how do you possibly find this video worthy?
With the nightmare, well i checked the kb and it did die but serious man just make your clips longer its no fun jumping from 1 fight into a next in 20 seconds...
Vargur clip, nice execution again - not long enough
Phoon Fleet was a bit eh, woulda made more sense to constant fraps it and show it....

Pretty sure your outtro is longer than any pvp clip in this video man ,


I looked forward to this when i read the ship list, and i gotta say this video makes me wanna jump off a bridge....

Not being a big head, but i recommend you take a look at mine, gods apples videos and watch out for big mikers new one thats coming soon(tm) to see how it should be...
Hoodie Mafia
Royal Amarr Institute
Amarr Empire
#3 - 2015-02-11 13:07:32 UTC
I liked it, some good quality clips in there. Also +1 on flying Whiptail without links


Heres a few things however that I think you can improve on


  • Bundle the ship types together, I was just getting into the Absolution point of view and all of a sudden im watching fast paced slicer/taranis footage again.

  • Maybe move your Dscan to the left? Its kinda just sticking in the middle

  • You show some clips where its really hard to see what's going on even with explanation. An example is the Vagabond/Apoc part.

  • So many clips in there at a fast paced speed with little to no build up, maybe a suggestion to reduce the number of kills shown to allow for the "better" fights and show some buildup into fights

  • Music was fairly heavy, and while it was my taste of music it really didnt fit in with the last song
Ares Desideratus
Republic Military School
Minmatar Republic
#4 - 2015-02-11 15:22:26 UTC
I don't know why anyone would willingly use the Absolution. The ship is such a piece of crap. Only Amarr would be given a T2 battlecruiser with 3 mid-slots... trolol. The ship is a joke.

Still a good movie to watch when I was bored. I disagreed with some of your fitting choices but I think it is clear from this video that you are better than me at a PvP so I cannot judge.

Personally I think it's weak when people ask for donations on their PvP videos. I know you're not like begging or anything but every time I see that it's like dude, **** off.
Karlos Kondit
#5 - 2015-02-11 16:16:42 UTC
I dont care about the whole video.

+ 17 for the whiptail footage and having the balls to use it.
God's Apples
Wilderness
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
#6 - 2015-02-11 23:41:58 UTC
The video was pretty terrible overall. I might as well have been watching a COD noscope montage. The only really "fight" you had was the sleipnir one.

The whiptail was hilarious I'll give you that. Two shotting frigs is strong.

"Hydra Reloaded are just jealous / butthurt on me / us because we can get tons of PVP action in empire while they aren't good enough to get that." - NightmareX
Andrew Curtin
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#7 - 2015-02-12 06:51:30 UTC
SkyFlyer wrote:
Meh Video I think, only thing worth watching is the frigs (no idea if thats true)

Skipped through all of the Frig Parts cause that ain't my thing but the Nomen/Cynabal clips I can't really comment on either but anyway let's be constructive:

The Sleipnir clip was tense, but at the end you could have turned your MWD off and saved your signature a bit atleast(still woulda died)....
First Abso clip I wouldn't have bothered putting in tbh , you kill a Ferox and that's it while your Tank isn't even struggling,
Same as above really with the Vaga/Apoc Clip i actually thought that was like a waste of your own time editing it just for a 20 second(if even) clip...
Vagabond clip at around 15 minutes, its like 10 seconds long and shows not even manual pilotting seems a bit useless :S
Absolution clip at around 19 minutes(kill a deimos) how do you possibly find this video worthy?
With the nightmare, well i checked the kb and it did die but serious man just make your clips longer its no fun jumping from 1 fight into a next in 20 seconds...
Vargur clip, nice execution again - not long enough
Phoon Fleet was a bit eh, woulda made more sense to constant fraps it and show it....

Pretty sure your outtro is longer than any pvp clip in this video man ,


I looked forward to this when i read the ship list, and i gotta say this video makes me wanna jump off a bridge....

Not being a big head, but i recommend you take a look at mine, gods apples videos and watch out for big mikers new one thats coming soon(tm) to see how it should be...



Gods and your videos are excellent. I agree with a lot of your criticism. The fights I featured were all 0.0 based, which most of the time differs from low sec pvp… That being said, I’m working on incorporating brawling and less nano into my next video.


Ares Desideratus wrote:
I don't know why anyone would willingly use the Absolution. The ship is such a piece of crap. Only Amarr would be given a T2 battlecruiser with 3 mid-slots... trolol. The ship is a joke.

Still a good movie to watch when I was bored. I disagreed with some of your fitting choices but I think it is clear from this video that you are better than me at a PvP so I cannot judge.

Personally I think it's weak when people ask for donations on their PvP videos. I know you're not like begging or anything but every time I see that it's like dude, **** off.



Abso doesn't shine compared to the other CS’s.

Also, I don’t expect donations. Lol.

God's Apples wrote:
The video was pretty terrible overall. I might as well have been watching a COD noscope montage. The only really "fight" you had was the sleipnir one.

The whiptail was hilarious I'll give you that. Two shotting frigs is strong.


The pacing is faster than most videos, and tbh I used garmonation 7 as an example.
W0lf Crendraven
The Tuskers
The Tuskers Co.
#8 - 2015-02-12 11:46:22 UTC
Why do you feel the need to check out if they have a scram every single time in a kiting ship when you dont already start out tackled?
DHB WildCat
Out of Focus
Odin's Call
#9 - 2015-02-12 21:00:49 UTC
Was gonna write some stuff until I saw pls donate isk in a video with a whiptail. Then the only thing left in my head and that I'll take away from this vid was **** this guy
God's Apples
Wilderness
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
#10 - 2015-02-13 02:57:34 UTC
W0lf Crendraven wrote:
Why do you feel the need to check out if they have a scram every single time in a kiting ship when you dont already start out tackled?


He is a real R A M B O I

"Hydra Reloaded are just jealous / butthurt on me / us because we can get tons of PVP action in empire while they aren't good enough to get that." - NightmareX
Andrew Curtin
The Scope
Gallente Federation
#11 - 2015-02-13 05:52:22 UTC
W0lf Crendraven wrote:
Why do you feel the need to check out if they have a scram every single time in a kiting ship when you dont already start out tackled?

Some of it has to do with being bad. Some of it has to do with actually getting people to commit to fighting you..


DHB WildCat wrote:
Was gonna write some stuff until I saw pls donate isk in a video with a whiptail. Then the only thing left in my head and that I'll take away from this vid was **** this guy

It was a joke... :(