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A little story.

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Cilgil Arbosa
Pator Tech School
Minmatar Republic
#1 - 2013-06-24 00:10:03 UTC
In The Great Wildlands (5)
A loot pinata vomits (7)
Two Hounds decloaking (5)





True story. I got away though.

Numbers in parenthesis show the syllables per line.
Dun'Gal
Myriad Contractors Inc.
#2 - 2013-06-24 00:17:54 UTC
Look nobody cares
Because your story is bad
Please stop **** posting

Cool
Tumahub
Sebiestor Tribe
Minmatar Republic
#3 - 2013-06-24 00:19:46 UTC
Cool as the wild lands
Story about the loot can
Bro never not post
Hessian Arcturus
Doomheim
#4 - 2013-06-24 01:00:23 UTC
What the fu*k have you been smoking (8)
Can I have some (4)

It's human nature to want to explore. To find your line and go beyond it. The only limit, is the one you set yourself.
Litair
Nleesh
#5 - 2013-06-24 01:32:16 UTC  |  Edited by: Litair
But is it supposed to rhyme? I have a hard time vocalizing it in my head without knowing anything. :o (27)

EDIT: added estimated syllable count as well. (15)
Inxentas Ultramar
Ultramar Independent Contracting
#6 - 2013-06-24 11:57:54 UTC
Wut? (1)
Sergeant Acht Scultz
School of Applied Knowledge
Caldari State
#7 - 2013-06-24 12:05:45 UTC
Shocked (0)

removed inappropriate ASCII art signature - CCP Eterne
Daimon Kaiera
Science and Trade Institute
Caldari State
#8 - 2013-06-24 12:08:48 UTC  |  Edited by: Daimon Kaiera
A Haiku is supposed to have 5-7-5 morae, and not syllables.

東京 is 2 syllables, 4 morae.

Get it right.


懐かしき
この世の中は
燃やそうぜ

^ Actually, this fits Eve pretty well.

.... . .-.. .--. / .. / .... .- ...- . / ..-. .- .-.. .-.. . -. / .- -. -.. / .. / -.-. .- -. -. --- - / --. . - / ..- .--. / ... - --- .--. - .... .. ... / ... .. --. -. .- - ..- .-. . / .. -.. . .- / .. ... / -. --- - / ... - --- .-.. . -. / ... - --- .--.
Ace Boogi
Republic University
Minmatar Republic
#9 - 2013-06-24 12:09:00 UTC  |  Edited by: Ace Boogi
Been away, haven't seen you in a while.
How've you been?
Have you changed your style and do you think
That we've grown up differently? Don't seem the same
Seems you've lost your feel for me

So let's leave it alone, 'cause we can't see eye to eye.
There ain't no good guy, there ain't no bad guy.
There's only you and me and we just disagree.
Ooo - ooo - ooohoo oh - oh - o-whoa
Nyninch 'Anaconda' Taron
Doomheim
#10 - 2013-06-24 12:36:37 UTC  |  Edited by: Nyninch 'Anaconda' Taron
Look girl, I hear ya but your flow is so forgettable,
My eye lids droopin' even though that **** is credible.
This here's a Nyninch flow, two hounds? Who let the dogs out?
Bomber's bar, those *****s pack a mean clout.
See them ninja as I decloak, one, two, three, more,
Bombs away *****, they just looking for a free score.
Sweatin' in my pod, pulse pounding as my ship starts jerkin'
Violent and nasty like your Mrs when I see her twerkin'.
Now I'm out, I'm free, though I'm less my ride.
Just a free spirited lyricist, I best run and hide.
Sebastor Cane
The Outlet
#11 - 2013-06-24 12:59:38 UTC
Tis time to quit this **** game (7)
Nothing but morons (5)
Time to look at myself methinks (7)
Kijo Rikki
Killboard Padding Services
#12 - 2013-06-24 13:08:51 UTC
Legacy of Romulus
Time to re-up my EvE game
w-t-f drakes suck

You make a valid point, good Sir or Madam. 
Khergit Deserters
Crom's Angels
#13 - 2013-06-24 14:58:11 UTC
Had some EVE burn out (5)
But coming back to join (7)
Carebear anti-Goons (5)
Rellik B00n
Republic Military School
Minmatar Republic
#14 - 2013-06-24 17:05:59 UTC
dongs dongs dongs dongs dongs
dongs dongs dongs dongs dongs dongs dongs
dongs dongs dongs dongs dongs 
[Of a request for change ask: Who Benefits?](https://forums.eveonline.com/default.aspx?g=posts&find=unread&t=199765)
Amarra Mandalin
A Blessed Bean
Pandemic Horde
#15 - 2013-06-24 18:46:54 UTC
Doc doesn't comment
No I-S-D can be found
Bad haiku invades
KnowUsByTheDead
Sunlight...Through The Blight.
#16 - 2013-06-24 19:02:25 UTC
Posting in a thread (5)
Exploration whine, perhaps? (7)
We may never know (5)

Once you realize what a joke everything is, being the comedian is the only thing that makes sense.
Warcalibre
NovaTech Holdings
#17 - 2013-06-24 19:09:40 UTC
OP's story was great,
Just kidding, didn't read it
All praise to Based God.