EVE Fiction

Dear All

I would like to proudly present my first eve comic book :) SYNDAX Chronicles

It's based on real game corp / alliance / players. Featuring: SYNDAX corp & members, Yulai Federation Alliance & members and of course some traitors, spies (got to bring the evil in)

Let me know what you think and if you are interested to see more episodes.

Well if you like my comic book, feel free to express it, join SYNDAX channel in game, press like here or even convo/mail me at any time :)


Episode 1: The Awakening
Episode 2: Lonely Valentine
Episode 3: That's Amore
Episode 4: The Key


SYNDAX Comic Book Home Page

For more info about our corp please click here
For more info about our alliance please click here

Very nice, please keep it going! : )

The episodes are too short IMO. Also, episode 2, and the 2 episodes combined, feel a bit chaotic to me, and the shortness doesn't help there either. I think it would be better if you published longer episodes, now they are more like scene length.
Therefor the danger in episode 2 does not really make me worry about Mooni and the other guy, as I have not build up enough sympathy for them.
Work more on letting the reader know who the characters are. Give them, you know, character, before subjecting them to things like danger. They are kinda cardboard right now (if you did not know them before).

And if the bar is not a 21th century one, then I don't like how it looks, it seems way out of place for EVE and it is something that I think could be easily avoided, but I do not know how you produce the comics, so I can't give detailed advice on that.

Other than that, if things improve, I might become a fan.

Been down to Providence, so I have an idea of the area you're basing this out of. NRDS is nice for neuts.

As per your story, I find it very interesting and I bookmarked it to view each week. I agree with Che Biko on all points, but when it comes to length I do agree that it's too short, but I'm hopeful that as you get used to the process of making this comic you'll get faster at it and make each episode a little longer.

As it stands right now, I think it's too short but it's not a killer for me or manditory to have a book each episode. I mean look at Darths & Droids web comic >_> they only release 3 strips each week. You just post all 3 on the same day. I think you're fine as it stands at this time, but you may want to add just a couple more strips later on if you're able.

Love your stories Mooni ;) Can't wait for the next to come.
As you make and publish more of them the storyline will be easier to follow also.

Keep up the good work and we talk ingame later

Thanks guys for your kind words

Hi Handax

Thank you for your kind words. I am very much inspired by your leadership, It is the kindness in your heart that lead me to imagine you as a hero, putting others in front of your self. This is what I think you are and this is how you will be in my story :)

Hmm as for the old bar decoration, there is a reason behind it, as the story progresses, it will make sense :)

Thanks a lot for this will look into it for surE
Your help is much appreciated

Thanks Alot :) will be out this weekend

Thanks Zerg

Your kind words are flattering.